Crimes of Passion OS: Shaurya's road to Redemption - Page 3

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was amazing. 👏

From the beginning to the end, the read was worth the time, and had that grip on the reader. I personally don't mind the length of the posts as far as it's interesting.

I too thought that Dr. Ahuja is a man. You're right, it's ingrained in our system. We tend to consider the gender as a man if the surname alone is being addressed.

Shaurya's sessions with Dr. Ahuja were intersting. ACP and Shaurya's friendship was a appreciable take. Shaurya definitely needs a friend in life.

As far as Anokhi is concerned,she is right in her shoes. I really liked the fact that you didn't show a readymade realisation of mistake for Shaurya. His gradual realisation through denial, confusion etc felt realistic.👏

The way you wrapped the OS was really nice. Indeed a new beginning for ShaKhi.

Overall, loved it.

Behen, more power to your pen. 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

I read this a while back! It is wonderful.

I loved how Anokhi did not give in heroic act of saving her from rustication... And I have been imagining a situation where Anokhi would make it clear that she would rather die than being helped by Shaurya. You have put across these points so beautifully!

Shaurya needs counseling too... Gosh CVs, please focus...

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

This was amazing!

While you felt it to be too lengthy, i felt it ended too soon as i was curiously reading all the while!

If possible please do continue this, i want to read how their relationship mends back to normal and the show will never give us this kind of stuff.

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

I loved Shaurya's counselling session with Dr. Ahuja, Shaurya's realization n redemption, Shaurya-Aahir friendship, and finally ShaKhi starting everything fresh. ❤ Plzz continue the series if possible. 😊

Originally posted by: deepshiii

This is brilliant.. Loved Dr. Ahuja’s character and changed Shaurya.. I do agree Shaurya’s been through a lot and definitely needs counselling. It was a treat to read this and see him change for the good.. There were so many lines that touched my heart. Everyone in the world can change and be the best version of themselves but all they have to do is take that one step and keep going up the ladder. I’m all praises for the masterpiece that you wrote and no, this isn’t whitewashing or any justification of Shaurya’s actions today. At the end of the day, everybody is a human and humans, if they are willing to put in efforts to change can create a big impact in their as well as others life. This positive change in Shaurya is 😍

Kudos to you for putting this through. Loved it to bits and pieces.

Sending hugs and loads of love your way🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Abhavi0821

Woah ♥️

This is amazing!! Loved the redemption to bits .

You are a fabulous writer, keep writing🤗

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Nice 👍

Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

LOL like I couldn't even control even one day. I have to take my exam in like two weeks. I am literally going to fail in the most important exam of my career and I am here writing and analyzing...someone throw away my phone and cure this obsession. Thank you again Sew for your wonderful and uplifting review. Really made my day❤ Now please give me virtual punch so I can concentrate on my studies 🙂🙃

Damn, two weeks will pass by the blink of an eye 🤪 Manage your time for studies & other stuff, you'll feel good. Here you go gurl 👊🏻👊🏻😆😆

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Damn, two weeks will pass by the blink of an eye 🤪 Manage your time for studies & other stuff, you'll feel good. Here you go gurl 👊🏻👊🏻😆😆

Finally caught up with the second part😳

I love everything about this! Shaurya definitely need counselling and Im so glad you choose this way to show us a genuine path to realisation and regret. The process was slow, as it should be, and in the end, this totally chilled Shaurya gives me hope that one day we'll see him like this, enjoying and comfortable in his skin.

I liked how he also worked on his dynamics with Ahir and had tea with him.😆 The two really deserved that. And props to Ahir for being a genuine friend to both parties.

Really loved the OS. Keep them coming😳