Crimes of Passion OS: Shaurya's road to Redemption - Page 2

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I liked that he seemed help and made his life better

Atleast he does regret what he said maybe at some point she may feel good about him

What anoki told him about seeking help ..even I felt at some point that people mistake u r intenions a d second guess myself. I still try to stick to my inner circle when it comes to trust

Originally posted by: AK_2010

That was damn amazing.... Shaurya needs some anger management for sure

I read this a while back! It is wonderful.

I loved how Anokhi did not give in heroic act of saving her from rustication... And I have been imagining a situation where Anokhi would make it clear that she would rather die than being helped by Shaurya. You have put across these points so beautifully!

Shaurya needs counseling too... Gosh CVs, please focus...

This was amazing!

While you felt it to be too lengthy, i felt it ended too soon as i was curiously reading all the while!

If possible please do continue this, i want to read how their relationship mends back to normal and the show will never give us this kind of stuff.

I loved Shaurya's counselling session with Dr. Ahuja, Shaurya's realization n redemption, Shaurya-Aahir friendship, and finally ShaKhi starting everything fresh. ❤ Plzz continue the series if possible. 😊

This is brilliant.. Loved Dr. Ahuja’s character and changed Shaurya.. I do agree Shaurya’s been through a lot and definitely needs counselling. It was a treat to read this and see him change for the good.. There were so many lines that touched my heart. Everyone in the world can change and be the best version of themselves but all they have to do is take that one step and keep going up the ladder. I’m all praises for the masterpiece that you wrote and no, this isn’t whitewashing or any justification of Shaurya’s actions today. At the end of the day, everybody is a human and humans, if they are willing to put in efforts to change can create a big impact in their as well as others life. This positive change in Shaurya is 😍

Kudos to you for putting this through. Loved it to bits and pieces.

Sending hugs and loads of love your way🤗🤗

Woah ♥️

This is amazing!! Loved the redemption to bits .

You are a fabulous writer, keep writing🤗

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Glad to see you back from being busy with your studies 🤗

Well what can I say? This was obviously spot on & so good. Specially with the mention of it taking enough time to turn Shaurya's perspective & thoughts about women in to better, the months wise mention was needed. I mean a person with such mentality won't change within a day so yes, this wasn't whitewashing, indeed a good redeemable track 😆

I liked how Shaurya had to go for Anger management counselling which I guess is very adequate under the circumstances. He really needs some therapy where he needs to feel relief psychologically ✋🏻

How Anokhi still found it difficult to accept Shaurya has changed until the very end, how Ahir was pleased with his honesty where he clearly realised his change & how two & two put together Shaurya comprehended that Anokhi was more than a student to him were so beautifully written

Great job once again!

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Interesting take on the situation...liked it...new beginnings💖

Originally posted by: EternalSoul17

This was so awesome! 👏❤️

You really did manage to redeem him. I said in some other comment that, in real life I would advise him to go to a psychologist.

And the fact you showed it (I so loved the whole convo part between shaurya and Dr. Ahuja, it was so nicely done)

Also his redemption was over a span of months so that it all the more realistic.

I don’t think they can show such a redemption in the show. You have set the standard too high!

(Though wouldn’t give up hope)

Guilty of assuming Dr.Ahuja as a man in the first glance😶

Some sexism is deeply ingrained such as assumption of a male person when gender is not pointed out. Glad you focused on how anokhi too ended up assuming the same and the sexism against women in workplace too.