PurVir SS -Redemption |Final part on page 5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Finally read the last part..Have just one thing to say...

Manasi...You are the BESSSTTTTT🤗

This is pure beauty !! ❤️ Specially the last line..It has my heart !🤧 This is what I love about Virendra..his hidden gentleness, softness towards Purvi...He doesn't shy away when it comes to accepting his mistakes and apologizing😳

This is exactly how I want things to happen in our show too..They need to talk and address their fear and insecurities..But sadly the writer is busy with laddoo punishment..😆

Aayu 🤗So happy that you liked it!!!

Vir is a unique character...uske jaisa koi hai hi na!!! His love, care, affection...is all demostrated...he cannot verbalize...he will not make grand gestures like decking up the haveli for her bday etc...but he will show his love thru actions like packing the tiffin for her, or making tea ❤️

Laddoo punishment...uski baat hi mat karo..kay hai kya woh?!?!?!?!?!

Manasi🤗. The whole series is pure gold❤️❤️❤️

You should be so proud of this!!

You have captured VPS's unconditional apology so well. And Purvi's reaction to it ! Bought tears to my eyes.

Ghar chalein and aapki baawri moments are so cute!! and so them!

You definitely should write a follow up wooing chapter.😉

Thank-you again ,from the bottom of my heart, for your time and effort.

Originally posted by: nycgal

Manasi🤗. The whole series is pure gold❤️❤️❤️

You should be so proud of this!!

You have captured VPS's unconditional apology so well. And Purvi's reaction to it ! Bought tears to my eyes.

Ghar chalein and aapki baawri moments are so cute!! and so them!

You definitely should write a follow up wooing chapter.😉

Thank-you again ,from the bottom of my heart, for your time and effort.

Shreeeee 🤗 I was waiting for you to come online😳

I love when Purvi said 'Phir se kare?' or 'Chale?' in the show...so ussi andaaz mein I wrote ghar chale!!

Aapki bawari...yeah...that's my fav part

Wooing wala chapter...hmm...Ive never written but lets see...my creative juices flow when the show goes down to the dumps...so maybe there is scope for that in the near future🤣

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Shreeeee 🤗 I was waiting for you to come online😳

I love when Purvi said 'Phir se kare?' or 'Chale?' in the show...so ussi andaaz mein I wrote ghar chale!!

Aapki bawari...yeah...that's my fav part

Wooing wala chapter...hmm...Ive never written but lets see...my creative juices flow when the show goes down to the dumps...so maybe there is scope for that in the near future🤣

I know right?? I totally got the reference. I miss these little things so much!! ab kya kya nautanki dikha rahe hain.ugh

You will write the wooing chapter so well. It will be so meaningful.I know that.

The current sakshi, laddoo drama doesn't give me too much hope of the makers giving us the beautiful pre-college execution and style episodes.

Ohhh manasi what a way to end you ss👏👏

It was perfect 👌👌👌

The end the hug everything was beautiful

Good one manasi ❤️❤️❤️

Part 3 is just great

Brilliant ❤️

Adorable & so damn realistic piece of work. Im in bliss after reading such beautiful work 👍🏼

Hope to read more from you.

My heart....best redemption...❤️

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Ohhh manasi what a way to end you ss👏👏

It was perfect 👌👌👌

The end the hug everything was beautiful

Good one manasi ❤️❤️❤️

Thanks Nezu 🤗

Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Part 3 is just great

Thanks Mini🤗