Love, Unrequited [Thread 2 : Pg 140] - Page 22

Originally posted by: coderlady

It was brave of her to go confess. No matter what happens, at least she tried.

Hi, I never thanked you for being the first reader. I am not sure if you remember but we first met on The Loner story. Thank you!

GN, I did ask for a chapter from Nishit's POV but after reading this chapter, yeh dil maange more.

This guy is a big mystery to me and I really want to dive into his brain to analyse his thoughts and his words.

He kind of never says no to help others, I am guessing.

While Tejas and others might not have accept Mami into the family, Nishit is affectionate towards her.

And what is this mystery with Sana?

Nishit is surely not being a Devdas as she is marrying Tejas. He is actually cool about it, at least he pretends to be.

And he is keeping Kirti's umbrella close to him and plans on returning it to her. Kya soch tha hain yeh bandha???

Sylvester, Diana and Atmaram would become good friends 😆

I think Nishit wants to enact Hare and the Tortoise story in his house with Diana being the judge 😆

Nice update.

Originally posted by: canapoem

GN, I did ask for a chapter from Nishit's POV but after reading this chapter, yeh dil maange more.

This guy is a big mystery to me and I really want to dive into his brain to analyse his thoughts and his words.

He kind of never says no to help others, I am guessing.

While Tejas and others might not have accept Mami into the family, Nishit is affectionate towards her.

And what is this mystery with Sana?

Nishit is surely not being a Devdas as she is marrying Tejas. He is actually cool about it, at least he pretends to be.

And he is keeping Kirti's umbrella close to him and plans on returning it to her. Kya soch tha hain yeh bandha???

Sylvester, Diana and Atmaram would become good friends 😆

I think Nishit wants to enact Hare and the Tortoise story in his house with Diana being the judge 😆

Nice update.

This reminded me of the video,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7NuVjpi72c

With him collecting so many animals, if Kirti has her safety in mind, she should keep her distance from the guy. 😆

I understand the need to delve into his mind.

In fact the story up till now has been entirely from Kirti's POV so it must feel claustrophobic to be trapped in just her mind. There are lot of blind spots and limited information as well.

But for now it's a story technique, that is how I see it.

Other characters' POV will come but not until much later. But be rest assured, when I give their/his POV, we'll revisit everything. I will try not to leave you all high and dry, as they say.

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

This reminded me of the video,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7NuVjpi72c

With him collecting so many animals, if Kirti has her safety in mind, she should keep her distance from the guy. 😆

I never knew some people actually conducted a race between Hare and Tortoise 😆

And wow Tortoise won again!!!!

If Nishit is planning such a race, I am reserving a front seat 😃

I am also wondering if Nishit wants to see if Kirti can be bitten by a Tortoise too 😆😊

Thanks for the note GN. Will surely patiently wait for the story to unfold and to read chapters from the other's POV

Nishit has a funny bone of course and so does his Mami. One says Oh dough ka sitaphal ice cream and other wants tortoises as a pet from Assam 😂

Originally posted by: canapoem

I never knew some people actually conducted a race between Hare and Tortoise 😆

And wow Tortoise won again!!!!

If Nishit is planning such a race, I am reserving a front seat 😃

I am also wondering if Nishit wants to see if Kirti can be bitten by a Tortoise too 😆😊

Thanks for the note GN. Will surely patiently wait for the story to unfold and to read chapters from the other's POV

There's a short story collection by B J Novak. One of the stories in it is Rematch and it's about how people start talking about hare losing the match and he's agitated and humiliated, even goes into depression and then concocts circumstances that the tortoise is left with no chance but go for a rematch. In that story, hare finally is able to win back the title that was rightfully his.

The author ends up with a very nice moral - slow and steady wins the race till truth and talent claim their place. I was mighty impressed with the moral that is until I saw this video of the hare losing once again.😆

As for Nishit planning races, woh khud apani race daud lein, then we'll see.😆

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totally editing this comment because it's a spoiler and I would like to maintain some mystery 😅

Also, I should find myself a good name. GN bahut good night types feel de raha hai. As a matter of fact good name also sums up to GN. 😆

chapter 25

Shruti and Kirti's conversation is airing out the issues. Kirti is being honest in asking herself why she does what she does.