Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 17

Finally Res 😎

I'll try to read keeping my broken ship aside because show ke writers ke 🤬 Ki vajah se achhe writers kyu bhugate 😎😆

Unres

Yaar jyoti you have made me cry 😭 This is just so beautiful yar...

Poor Ani was sleeping like that with injured hand 😭 Bon kitni dar gayi thi 😭 These two love each other so much ❤️

Wow Saudamini ko kya dhoya hai Anirudh ne 😎 vo bhi Bon ke saamne I loved how he looked at Bondita when he said 'Bohot khush' awwwwww my Goddddd!!!! I love him for this ☺️❤️ Bon kitni khush huyi Ani ki baate sunke 😆 Love her!!

Loved their swearing in front of Durga Ma.... these two are couple goals (in your story 😊).

AAAAAA!!!!!!!!! What the helll!!!! Ani thanked her for loving him as well in his thank you chain 🤣 omg she might have felt giddy listening to that ☺️ That was sooooooo cute! *cries in cuteness* 😭

Poor Bon behaved as if uski chori pakdi gayi 🤣

And he said jabse use pata chala vo pyaar karne laga hai tabse jaanta hai ☺️

Omg I feel so good reading this 😭

Yaar jyoti, I feel so good reading this, but pained as well 😭 You know why 🥺

Thanks for writing jyoti....

Aur suno na... shakhi pe bhi kuchh likh do it is a request ☺️🤣

OS #6

I had read it but not sure if I commented but anyways!

I love this version of Love is better than what we are currently on the screen. And I applaud the way you have described Ani's feelings Jyoti. They sound so deep when I read them...

OS #7

I must say you are a damn good writer when it comes to description. That raw anguish in Anirudh's reaction and dialogue is so spot on!

Well written to the point of perfection! 👍🏼

OS #8

Damn that was sentimental! 🥺

Insecurities are part and parcel of feelings... And in true love there is no need of verbal expressions of insecurities bcz most of the time, your partner knows it all. I liked how Ani was aware of what his actions meant and he was aware that he fueled her insecurities unknowingly.

As I said, you explain these emotions so well. 👏

Originally posted by: RUDY575

Jyoti❤️👏

Saudamini😡

But at last they confessed with each other...👍🏼

They are together in everything....

Starting how ani realised and how bon took care of him...it was beautifully written...

Finally I am the one who commented first🥳

I need to see more of them...

Can we have savage bon in upcoming chapters.....

Jyoti you are really improving as a writer...👍🏼

All the best dear...

Keep growing...

Thank you so much Monu🤗

Saudamini ko acha sabak sikhaya na😆

And about his feelings, he has realized bahut pehle hi...but confess abhi kiya❤️ now they are one, together... forever👍🏼

Ammm savage to nahi keh sakti but han... speechless bon jarur milegi☺️

Thank you so much for reading monu, and yup you are the first one...i hope next mein bhi you will be the first😆

Update is on the way, stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: rikara94

Thank you so much Monu🤗

Saudamini ko acha sabak sikhaya na😆

And about his feelings, he has realized bahut pehle hi...but confess abhi kiya❤️ now they are one, together... forever👍🏼

Ammm savage to nahi keh sakti but han... speechless bon jarur milegi☺️

Thank you so much for reading monu, and yup you are the first one...i hope next mein bhi you will be the first😆

Update is on the way, stay tuned👍🏼

I am waiting jyoti

☺️lot of romance I guess

Sure this Time also I will be first

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Tumhaare os series ne kya jaadu kiya

Jyoti jyoti bole matwaala jiya 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Hahah🤣

Stay away, i'm not that type of person🤪🤣

I'm literally in love with this os series and I don't know how much in love I'm ☺️☺️

Kya baat hai Jyoti tu lajawab hai ekdum kamaal hai aur teri os series ke baare mein kya kahoon ab shabd bhi kam pad rahe hain 🤪🤪

Han main aisi hi hoon...mere samne bade badhon ki bolti band ho jati hai🤪🤣

Jokes apart😆

Thank you much sanan🤗

It was really amazing, wonderful , epic etc😊

I really loved this os very much❤️

And very much glad about Ani😳

Even i'm so glad that finally he had confess❤️ ab jiyenege shanti se pyar se apni zindagi☺️

He did very well to Mini and all the things he said were absolutely the best part of this os and Mini was well deserving for it

After doing this many disgraceful things to him she still considers herself to be his dost 😡😡

Yup she is very courageous, i must say🤣itna sab hone ke bad bhi mafi mang ri h😆

Kya dhoya na Ani usko🤪

And Jyoti thanks for making justice to our sweetest Bon👍🏼👍🏼

Aww thank you so much dear...glad that you liked it🤗

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BTW I SAW YOUR SIGGY AND I REALLY AGREE TO IT AS BON DESERVES SOMEONE WHO WILL LOVE HER NOT ONE WHO WOULD THINK HER TO BE A SO-CALLED ZIMMEDARI😡😡😡😡AND I WOULD ALSO SEARCH FOR SUCH A PERSON FOR OUR BON

Haha...abhi i changed🤣abhi ke liye both of them don't deserve🤪

I'm gonna post next part now☺️stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

Just woww..if only the serial wala anirudh was so perfect. This anirudh is amazing. He knows what he wants...Awesome update. Do write soon❤️🤗😊

Thank you so much shivani🤗

Serial wala Ani ab toh bon bhi khair chodo..

I'm gonna post soon...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Jyotiiii!🤗🤗

What a beautiful piece of writing yar!👍🏼 Dil khush hogaya padh ker. 👏❤️Show mien jo bakwas chal rha hai, your stories are so beautiful that they take the reader in another world...jahan asal show ka koi bakwas na ho. 🤢

Doctor🤗

Thank you much dear❤️

Thank you for the appreciation ❤️

Show ki toh filhal bat hi mat kro...pata nahi kahan le ke ja rahe hain😆

Yar mujhe woh buht sweet laga when he confessed 'their' love in the mandir. Somehow, it sounds very fantastical to me ke kisi ko propose ya kisi ka love confession kisi holy jagha per ho. 😳 Loved that part.

Saudamin ko tight jawab mila. 🤪 Good one.

Haina isi thought ke saath maine mandir decide kiya tha kyunki mandir se holy place koi ho hi nahi skti😳

Saudamini zindagi bhar yad rakhegi🤣

All in all,wonderful writing and a very sweet OS. 🤗

Thank you ayesha🤗 stay tuned, update is on the way👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Finally Res 😎

I'll try to read keeping my broken ship aside because show ke writers ke 🤬 Ki vajah se achhe writers kyu bhugate 😎😆

Hayee kitna sochti hai tu..i lob you🤗❤️

Unres

Shukriya😳

Yaar jyoti you have made me cry 😭 This is just so beautiful yar...

Poor Ani was sleeping like that with injured hand 😭 Bon kitni dar gayi thi 😭 These two love each other so much ❤️

Sorry for making you cry dear😭

These two are madly and deeply in love but keh nahi rahe hai or iski wajah se they are suffering

Wow Saudamini ko kya dhoya hai Anirudh ne 😎 vo bhi Bon ke saamne I loved how he looked at Bondita when he said 'Bohot khush' awwwwww my Goddddd!!!! I love him for this ☺️❤️ Bon kitni khush huyi Ani ki baate sunke 😆 Love her!!

Han bahut dhoya...maza hi aa gya bilkul🤣

That 'bahut khush' wala dialogue is my favvv❤️ i wanted bon to see herself that how much happy he is with her...look wahi huya😳

Loved their swearing in front of Durga Ma.... these two are couple goals (in your story 😊).

Han they are but in the show they are showing🤬

AAAAAA!!!!!!!!! What the helll!!!! Ani thanked her for loving him as well in his thank you chain 🤣 omg she might have felt giddy listening to that ☺️ That was sooooooo cute! *cries in cuteness* 😭

Poor Bon behaved as if uski chori pakdi gayi 🤣

Arre maine bahut socha ke confession kaise likhu kyunki uss era ke hisab se aaj kal ke fancy way fir nahi baithte na😆 to socha thank you chain se kam chala lu...kuch na keh ke bhi sav kuch keh diya usne😆

Chori toh indeed uski pakdi gyi🤣

And he said jabse use pata chala vo pyaar karne laga hai tabse jaanta hai ☺️

Omg I feel so good reading this 😭

Yaar jyoti, I feel so good reading this, but pained as well 😭 You know why 🥺

That was awesome... isn't it?

Glad that i made you feel good🤗

I know and i can understand the pain well...but we can't do anything right? Except waiting for the track to end🥺

Thanks for writing jyoti....

Aur suno na... shakhi pe bhi kuchh likh do it is a request ☺️🤣

Welcome welcome😳

Han i will..kuch wait kijiye...i will definitely write on them☺️

Originally posted by: AK_2010

OS #6

I had read it but not sure if I commented but anyways!

I love this version of Love is better than what we are currently on the screen. And I applaud the way you have described Ani's feelings Jyoti. They sound so deep when I read them...

Thank you so much Akshu🤗

Glad that you liked the way I described their feelings😳

OS #7

I must say you are a damn good writer when it comes to description. That raw anguish in Anirudh's reaction and dialogue is so spot on!

Well written to the point of perfection! 👍🏼

Thank you thank you😳

I think i okce told you that, For me description likhna is more easy than dialogues...isiliye i try my best to add less dialogue😆 and dialogue jab likhti hoon bahut sochna padhta hai ta ke woh on point lge...

Thank you for the appreciation🤗

OS #8

Damn that was sentimental! 🥺

Insecurities are part and parcel of feelings... And in true love there is no need of verbal expressions of insecurities bcz most of the time, your partner knows it all. I liked how Ani was aware of what his actions meant and he was aware that he fueled her insecurities unknowingly.

As I said, you explain these emotions so well. 👏

Yup true...words are not needed every time... sometimes you just have to understand the feelings without saying anything👍🏼

And insecurities kon se rishte mein nahi hoti..and Ani knows very well that why she is behaving like this😳

Thanks Akshu that you read all parts🤗 i will post next abhi thodi der mein...woh bhi romantic one☺️

Originally posted by: RUDY575

I am waiting jyoti

☺️lot of romance I guess

Sure this Time also I will be first

Ha lot of romance😆☺️

Give me sometime, I will post really soon...abhi i'm going somewhere😆