GHKKPM (FanFic: Part 20 updated on page 19 (04/19/21) - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful update 

Do continue soon

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Part 10 - Trip Planning :

Hello lovely readers, hope you are doing great. Just a reminder, be safe, and take care.

Happy Reading!

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(Virat is still in Gadchiroli even after his posting is finished early. His posting had finished early because Jagtaap and company had been arrested. Virat remained in Gadchiroli because Sai is still there, and he just couldn’t leave her alone in this state. He decided to stay there until his next posting in Nagpur begins. Then Sai and Virat will both move to Nagpur.)

Virat: Sai ko yahan se kahin door ghumane le jaata hoon. Warna wahi sab soch ke woh khabhie bahar nahin aa payegi. Kahin ghoom ke ayegi toh mood bhi fresh ho jayega. Aur college shuru hone ke baad toh woh waise bhi busy ho jayegi.

(Virat decides to take Sai out of Gadchiroli for a few days, so she can refresh her mood and relax after so much that had happened recently.) 

(Change Of Scene)

(Virat comes to meet Sai, and tells her about his idea of planning an outing for a few days before her results come out.)

Virat: Sai, toh tumhe idea kaisa laga? 

Sai: Mere Abba abhi abhi mujhe chod ke gaye hain aur aap ko lagta hai main kahin ghumne phirne jaoungi? Aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hain aap?

(Sai walks to her room without giving a chance to Virat to speak any further.)

Virat: Phir se upset kar diya tu ne ussey.

(Virat walks towards her room to check on her, and to make sure that she is not deeply hurt because of his move. Instead, he sees her talking to her Abba’s pic.)

Sai: Abba, maine unn se kaafi rudely baat ki hain kya? Lekin unhe pata hain na ki aapko gaye hue kitna hi waqt hua hain, phir bhi aisa bakwas idea le ke aaye. Maine kaha tha mujhe ghoomna phirna nahin hain na toh phir kyun? Shayad mera mood theek karna chahte ho? Ki mujhe bahar jaa ke acha lagega, mera mann badal jayega. Aur waise bhi college bhi shuru ho jayegi. Kya isiliye unhone yeh idea diya? Mein poori paagal hoon Abba. Aur aap ne mujhe roka kyun nahin jab main bahar bakwas kar rahi thi? Maine aise hi unke ache thought ko itna suna diya. Bechare mera acha chahate the. Toh aap kya kehte ho Abba, mujhe jaana chahaiye unke saath?

(Sai questions her Abba, gets her answer, and smiles. She is about to leave, but sees Virat standing at the door with a weak smile upon seeing the same chirpy Sai she was. He found it very cute to see how she was complaining and talking to her Abba’s pic.)

Sai: Aap jasoosi kar rahe ho meri?

Virat: Nahi toh, main toh sirf yeh dekhne aaya tha ki kahin meri baaton ka tumhe bura toh nahin laga. Lekin tum toh apne Abba se baat kar rahi thi joh maine sun li. I’m sorry for that.

Sai: Aise chup chup ke kisi ki baatein nahin sunte. Bad manners ACP.Chavan. 

Virat: Oh Ms.Joshi, woh toh main tumhe dekhne aaya tha. Mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum apne Abba se baat kar rahi ho gi.

Sai: Theek hain, theek hain. Toh bataiye hum kahan aur kitne din ke liye jaa rahe hain? Aur thank you Virat Sir mere baare mein itna sochne ke liye. Aur Sorry aap se rudely baat karne ke liye. 

Virat: Kya main sahi sunn raha hoon? Matlab Sai Joshi? Aur sorry and thank you dono bol rahi hain? Aur woh bhi mujhse? Yani Virat Chavan se? Tabyat toh theek hain na tumhari? 

(Sai and Virat burst out laughing.) 

Virat: Tumhe kahan jaana hain? Hum wahin chalte hain. Aur 2-3 din ka plan kartey hain kyun ki uske baad Nagpur jaana hain. Aur tumhare college admission aur hostel ka bhi dekhna hain wahan jaa ke. Toh jaldi batao kahan jaa rahe hain? 

Sai: Mumbai chalte hain. Waise bhi Abba aur main Mumabi jaane wale the mere college ki admission ke baad Bappa ke darshan karne ke liye. 

Virat: Okay madam, jaisa aap kahein. 

Sai: Lekin woh kuch zyada expensive nahin ho jayega? 

Virat: Main manage kar lunga. 

Sai: Nahin, main apna hissa kudh dungi. Warna main nahin chalne wali. Deal?

Virat: Tum se aaj tak koi nahin jeet paaya toh main aage bol ke time waste nahin karunga. Chalo, deal.

(Virat smiles and leaves to prepare for the trip, while Sai looks at him in a aww thinking how much he cares for her and her well being.) 

(Change Of Scene)

(Chavan members are having a discussion in the living area.)

Bhavani: Bahut din ho gaye Patherlekha aur Samrat ki shaadi ko. Toh hum sab ne yeh faisla liya hain ki tum dono ko kahin bahar ghoom ke aana chahiye. Honeymoon ke liye. 

(Listening to the word honeymoon both Samrat and Pakhi are shocked because they know their relationship has not reached that point yet.)

Samrat: Mami, honeymoon ki kya zaroorat hain? 

(Samrat tries to reject the idea to the best of his ability.)

Ninad: Kyun nahin hain? Tum dono newly weds ho. Honeymoon toh banta hain. Kyun ho na Vahini? Barobar bola na? 

Bhavani: Agdi barobar? 

Shivani: Not bad Samrat! Hummey pata hain ki tumhare mann mein ladoo phoot rahe hain honeymoon ke naam pe, par batana nahin chahate ki kitna excited ho. Isliye yeh sab excuses na? 

(Shivani and other’s tease the couple. Despite Samrat’s denial everyone continues to go on with the idea.)

(Change of Scene)

(Pakhi is restless thinking how she can go with Samrat when they both know that their relationship is not there yet. Even Though she is trying to move on from Virat, she still finds this step a little too quick. Samrat walks in and sees her worried.)

Samrat: Maine bahut try kiya lekin koi maan hi nahin raha. I am sorry. 

Pakhi: Iss mein unki kya galti hain? Unhe toh lagta hain na ki hum ek normal couple hain, aur yeh sab okay hain. 

Samrat: Main jaanta hoon ki tum comfortable nahin ho lekin mujhe koi problem nahin hain. Mere hissab se agar hum kahin bahar jayenge toh ek dusre ko behtar jaan payenge. Like you know this can be a perfect time where we can get to know each other more. 

(Pakhi thinks on Samrat’s words and realizes that in order to move on she needs to know Samrat a little better, and vice versa)

Pakhi: Samrat, maine iss baare mein socha aur mujhe bhi koi problem nahin hain.

Samrat: Tumhe koi problem nahin hain matlab? Tum ready ho chalne ke liye?

Pakhi: Matlab yeh ki jaise tum ne abhi kaha ki isi bahane hum ek dusre ko jaan payenge aur ghoom bhi ayenge. Saath time spend karenge toh humare liye hi better ho ga. Isiliye mujhe koi problem nahin hain. 

Samrat: Done phir. 

Pakhi: By the way, hum kahan jaa rahe hain?

Samrat: Mumbai. 

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How is the update guys? Please ignore the minor mistakes.

Will Sai-Virat come across Pakhi-Samrat in Mumbai?

How will Pakhi react seeing Virat with Sai?

How will this trip change the dynamics of their relationship?

Do vote and comment your thoughts.


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Posted: 3 years ago

ohh....goshh even they are going to Mumbai



amazing update.....slow progression b/w sairat is awesome

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Posted: 3 years ago

I just saw your OS, read all 10 parts in one go.

Awesome story, hopefully Virat- Sai will date for few months/ years before they marry.

Finally where Pakhi is bearable and Samrat is also there.


please continue with the story.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya_Mehta

ohh....goshh even they are going to Mumbai



amazing update.....slow progression b/w sairat is awesome


Thank you ☺️ 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sukri

I just saw your OS, read all 10 parts in one go.

Awesome story, hopefully Virat- Sai will date for few months/ years before they marry.

Finally where Pakhi is bearable and Samrat is also there.


please continue with the story.


Thank you so much ☺️ 

Posted: 3 years ago

Love it. Thank you ♥️

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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Love it. Thank you ♥️


Thank you ☺️ 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Fantastic update 

Please update soon