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Posted: 4 years ago
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Kyunki jab m 10th me hi tab mere pas phone bhi nhi tha & I wasn't even allowed to watch tv.So much engrossed in studies r phir board exam bhi to h.Isiliye aisa reaction.😜😝

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Kyunki jab m 10th me hi tab mere pas phone bhi nhi tha & I wasn't even allowed to watch tv.So much engrossed in studies r phir board exam bhi to h.Isiliye aisa reaction.😜😝

Phone mere paas bhi nahi hota 11 tak....corona baba ki kripa baras gayi then.... Tv toh main hamesha hi dekhti thi....ab kam hua h...bas yahi molkki, kabhi Kabhi movies and mr.bean....

Boards ka apna pata kahan h kuch....🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

This is not a continuation of the original series.Just a random part.Bcoz a lot of you were saying that part-3 was really sad.So enjoy the sensuous romance of purvir.

V had never felt so lost before.He just couldn't believe what he saw-everywhere was smoke ,confusion,debris & the smell of raw flesh mixed with gun powder aas he reached the mill.His eyes burnt with tears & surrounding heat.He had to keep wiping them away to be able to see.He didn't know which way to go,which way to see.Where was his bawari?She had been here just few min ago covering the inauguration ceremony of teh new mill & she reached before him as he had work so he was late.It was just few min ago that he had learnt about an explosion in the mill from the driver while he was in the car.He did not know where to look for for his wife-his life-now.V felt drained.He knew his bawari was alive.She couldn't die,when he needed her the most.Not when their life was just beginning to blossom.

V had to fight the tears that rushed to come.He sought her in the rubble & all around it,with only her name on his lips,pushing aside every bit of wreckage he came across.But still there was no sign of her.Where are you bawari?He collapsed to the ground.,shouting for one last time ,bawari when he heard someone calling him & as he turned around he saw his bawari running towards him.They both had a passionate hug.She buried her face in his chest.He held her tightly to his chest.

V-(observing her body carefully)tanne kuch hua to nahi?Kahin chot to na lagi.

P- nahi hum theek hain.

V-(grabs her tightly)main bahut dar gaya tha..Lage tha tanne kho dunga..Pr driver bola ki..

P-ha wo hamara phone aa gaya tha or mill me wo dande nhi aa the the to hum bahar ha gaye.isiliye bach gaye.

V-(smiles)aree bawari..Wo dande nahi network hote hain.

P-ha wahi.

V embraced her.cried hua herat out & P trying to pacify him.They both leave for home.

(In the room)

V-M bahar se itna khadoos chehra banake rakhta hu...Par m tere sath to apna dar baat sake hu na?

P-ao hamare sath apni takleef nahi batenge to kiske sath batenge..Bataiye..

She caressed his cheek.

V-main bahut dar gaya tha ki kahi tanne kho na du..Tu mere ta sab kuch h..Main tanne ghana prem kare hu..Manne chod ke tu kahin na jayegi..m na jee paunga tere bina..Maine waada kar bawari.

P-hum apne kroor singh ko chod je bhala kha jayenge.

He comforts her.V leaned over to kiss her.P looked at V in surprise.However.she did not protest.Just stared.V kissed her again,this time more insistently & she was kissing back.They kissed again & again.V kissed her lips as, her cheeks,forehead,jise,ears & her lips again.He switched off the lights.When V hugged her again,

P-hume dar lag raha hain..Humne aisa kuch..

V-m janta hu..Par m khud ko rok na pa rha hu..

His hand reached her blouse hooks at the back.P grouped his hand hard.He slid his other hand under her dupatta.His palm was at last on her chest & finally on her waist.

P-ap aisa mat kijiye.

She held the bedsheet tightly.He shut her up with another kiss.Ahe wriggled a little but he kept kissing her.She started to respond.Her warmth & softness melted into V.He tugged at the loose end of her lehnga bringing her close to him.It was raining outside.It grew insistent,noisy,thumping the window rythmically.He kissed & naturally his hand went to her blouse.He plundered her neck,planting as many kisses as the raindrops on the window.

V-m teri bahut parvah karta hu.Tu sabse alag hain.m tere m khota chala ja raha hu.aisa pehle kabhi na hua sakshi k sath bhi na.

V gently pushed at ger shoulders to make her lie on the bed.He slid next to her.His finger dipping into her navel.He paused to kiss her there.He places her hand on his body.Passion repressed for years came forth unleashed.He bit her on the neck & kissed her all the time he was becoming one with her.

V-m janta hu meri zindagi ib pehle jaisi na reh jayegi..Or bhi khoobsurat ho jayegi..Sab teri wajah se.

P can only see happiness around her.

What happened only magnified his live for her.He wanted to draw her close,cuddle & keep her with him forever.

Acha ek suggestion chahiye..Shall I continue with this part bcoz a lot of you were willing to read it's aftermath or shall I start with a new story.🤔

Feel free to suggest.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

Acha ek suggestion chahiye..Shall I continue with this part bcoz a lot of you were willing to read it's aftermath or shall I start with a new story.🤔

Feel free to suggest.

m in for both options 🙈🙈
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

Acha ek suggestion chahiye..Shall I continue with this part bcoz a lot of you were willing to read it's aftermath or shall I start with a new story.🤔

Feel free to suggest.

Dono chalega...but first complete this one🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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yaar bahut bada ho gaya..SORRY FOR THAT

Wo jab maine likhna shuru kiya to i couldn't control emotions r usi m itna bada ho gaya.😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it 👌😍🔥 so passionate and well written 👏 continue soon 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Gosh

Sargam... it was just 🔥🔥 beautifully written 👌

please continue😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

yaar bahut bada ho gaya..SORRY FOR THAT

Wo jab maine likhna shuru kiya to i couldn't control emotions r usi m itna bada ho gaya.😭

kaise likh lete ho Yaar yeh itta achha 🤩🤔🤩 n guess what I too had a plan for boat ride n rain dance in my OS 🤩 par ab me kya Karu Aapne ittaaaaaa achha Likha he

Ps: humare OS me mukhi Kuch zyada hi out of control hota he 😏😏 Sahi bhi he ab show me to jadi buti khilla k hi Kuch ummeed ki jaa Sakti he 🤭

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