Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 12

Originally posted by: rikara94

Han os6😆

Thank you so much koyal🤗

Awww the way your appreciate na..it literally made me smile from the bottom of my heart❤️

Your request or dream will be complete soon but for that you have to wait a little😆

Phir do bar pdhke sone ki bat chod main teri neend udha dene wali hoon☺️🤣🤣

Jyoti yaar😭kitna tarpati ho tum😭

Mazaaak mazaak🤣🤣

☺️☺️mujhe intezaar rahega uss pal ka jab tum meri neend ura dogi!

I'm such a hopeless hormonal teen☺️Jaldi update chahiye😳

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Jyoti yaar😭kitna tarpati ho tum😭

Mazaaak mazaak🤣🤣

☺️☺️mujhe intezaar rahega uss pal ka jab tum meri neend ura dogi!

I'm such a hopeless hormonal teen☺️Jaldi update chahiye😳

I'm writing next part😆 but yeah romance ke liye time hai abhi😆

What teen😲

Then you are ban here🤣 no entry for you🤣

P.s. I will update next OS tomorrow (as always on sunday😆)

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

"******OS 5 feedback*****"

Jyoti,first of all, apologies for being so careless😡

Gussa a raha hain mujhe khudpar😵control....!!!😒

Shant balike...itna krodh nahi karte😆

Aww, so basically Kaun Mera aur Lo Safar,donon se we can infer that both are absolutely immersed in the most purest form of love for each other!

Yup they are❤️ you got that right.

Especially Anirudh,he cannot afford to lose her company for even a day or two🤪.He's such a nice soul.He's ready to do everything so that Bondita isn't reminded of the negativities that once plunged hard in her heart.

Correction* even for a sec😆

Yup..for him, to see bondita in that condition was like someone ripped his soul💔 and he did every possible things to make her forget those bad memories.

Your fictional Anirudh is honestly husband goals!Ab bas BONDITA ko pata chal jaay ki Anirudh bhi usse usi tarah se chahta hain.

Bondita ko pata chalega ya nahi woh next OS mein pata chalega..kahan jata hai unka relation😛

Jyoti, your stories radiate so much freshness and positivity!surreal!

Jaldi likhna aage kya kya hoga👍🏼😳

Aww thank you so much🤗

Aage kya hoga I will not tell. All i can say is don't trust this writer of yours

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

Fabulously written...loved it❤️

Thank you so much dear❤️

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Finally something from Ani's POV 😭

I feel so excited after reading this! Want more!

Yup finally. Happy tears😭😭

Me too excited for the next one desperately. Kyunki next one bad mujhe reactions dekhne hai sab ke😆

Thank you for reading Akshu🤗 I will post next one tommorow😳

Originally posted by: Doc.love

🤗🤗 Jyotiiii! Hii!

Hey doctor🤗

Finally aaj miene 4th OS padha iss series ka. And I was mind-blown! It suited so well with the current molestation track! 😳 Tumne itne days pehle aise track ko socha aur phir uss per itne acchay se likha bhi. Which makes me think...are the makers stalking the forum? 🤓 Makers tumare write-up se hi impress tou nahi hogaye? 😃 Ager aisa hai tou buht acchi baat hai. Our forum has beautiful stories and they should definitely take help from the forum. 😆

Han doctor they are stalking. Infact i'm the one of team member😆

Well jokes apart. Thank you so much ayesha. Glad that you liked the concept. And yeah i felt nostalgic when I saw the track especially when He took care of Her that was❤️ even mujhe wattpad par bhi aise hi comments aye after the epi❤️

Kher...coming back to the OS... Wow! Even last lines where he kept caressing her hair and sat by her side until she slept...you wrote that scene soo well... and felt soo realistic since abhi show mien bhi aise hi milta julta hua. Yaaar... what a brilliant write-up it was! And the song...and the emotions... ❤️❤️ Very very well-written. 👍🏼 Shabash...

Again thank you😳 so glad that you found it realistic and brilliant.

And about him having her side until she slept, we usually do this for Our Own People right? Especially when you are in love. Yup he isn't realized his feelings yet but iss incident ke bad woh hil gaya hai which will make him to realize his feelings soon 🤪

I loved it very much. Now, I have to read the 5th and 6th parts... 😳 I am sorry I am so late in reading these amazing stories yar... But I will catch up with the other two soon and will comment again.

Aww it's omey docotr🤗

yup milte hain next comment mein phir😂

P.S. Your choice of songs is WOW! ⭐️❤️

*Flipping my hair* 🤣🤭

Btw thank you❣️

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Okayyy... Review for the 5th OS...

Bhai! Kia likkha hai yar! I am in awe... seriously! 😳👍🏼

Awww thank you 🤗

You know Jyoti, I am a voracious reader. When I read a well crafted story na, pata nahi kyun mera dil buht hi ziada khush hojata hai. Aur tumhari stories padh ker I feel that happiness. So, thank you very much dear for these brilliant write-ups. ❤️🤗

Aww It's a big and heart touching compliment. i'm so overwhelmed hearing that i made you feel happy and smile❤️

While reading this OS, I felt as if I was reading a book. Well-connected scenes with moments so beautiful that i had a smile all the while.

Is it?😳 Thank you so much.. I'm feeling like successful now😆

I chuckled when Som caught them in that 'RK style catch and fall scene' and they both were so lost in their discussion about the case that they even forgot their situation. 😆

Han na😆 they got so excited and literally forgot their position😆 poor som😆

It reminded me of a novel I wrote several years ago... Uss mien bhi when the hero used to hold the girl's hand, they would completely forget about it... They used to get so lost too.. 😆😆 Aisa madhosh kerne wala pyar I hope humare RudhiTa ka bhi ho when the right time comes.. 😆

Acha? On which couple?

Aisa hi hoga their pyar... soulful one

Okay, so I have started blabbering now...

Abh next OS padh ker comment kerun gy. 👍🏼😳

Lol😂

Hanji theek hai💃

Jeety raho aur khush raho ladki... 🤗

Thank you ji and same to you❤️

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Aaaannnd finally, done with another beautiful part of this series by you. So, OS number 6 padha abhi abhi and man! 😆😆 Ani is soooo cute! In the middle of the meeting he was all consumed by her thoughts only...and his father got that! 🤣 That was brilliant!

Yar tumhari stories ki sab se awesome baat yeh hoty hai ke koi mazay daar sa angle jo reader ne socha bhi nahi hota, who aik damm se daal dety ho. And then it catches the reader with an amazing surprise with a loud chuckle too! 😆

glad that you find Aaaannnnd

Han mujhe bahut hasi ayi thi yeh scene add krte huye bahut maza aata hai aise light moment add krne mein

And his father got a line except adjusting his chashma

And now i'm chuckling reading your comment😆

Baqi story tou kher buht hi acchi hoty hai...very well-crafted...aur har cheez, har scene, har dialogue aise feel hota hai jaise maano aik damm perrrrrfect ho. 👍🏼❤️

Abh next part jaldi se likhnaaaa please.. 😳

🤗

Thank you doctor, thank you so much🤗

Han I will post next OS tommorow😳

Originally posted by: RUDY575

I always want to know anirudhu monologues but very rarely we get in the show... ☺️The way you right aniudh monologues I just feel you complete my wish...thank you... Kadwa roshogolla🤣

Aww their bond growing steadily and strongly...🤗well done rikaara....

Oh so you call him pyar se anirudhu not bad han🤪

Oh aniudh bhi bhulati ho😆

Anyways😆

Yup kadwa roshogulla😆

Welcome monu🤗 maine teri wish unknowingly complete kr di...and yeah story ki iss stage pe his this kind of monologues was needed😳

Thank you so much for reading❤️

And you can call me jyoti😳

Originally posted by: rikara94

Oh so you call him pyar se anirudhu not bad han🤪

Oh aniudh bhi bhulati ho😆

Anyways😆

Yup kadwa roshogulla😆

Welcome monu🤗 maine teri wish unknowingly complete kr di...and yeah story ki iss stage pe his thins kind of monologues was needed😳

Thank you so much for reading❤️

And you can call me jyoti😳

Haa🤣

Sure jyoti🤗