Thread 3: Destined Love... (Chapter 61 updated) - Page 75

What another great chapter.

JoJa-Moment in the morning was beautyful ❤️

"They are as beautiful as the first ray of sun in the dawn, waiting to brighten up the whole world with own shine… Enough of the cloudy haze, Jodha… let the sun shine on us, smile now!” Jodha smiled and lied on her side, eyes on his eyes- “Every drop of tear is not born from cloudy gloom, My Lord… some of them are created in the dewdrops from the first ray of sun in dawn.”

Loved this lines. So beautifully written ❤️

Now the story of Jodha and Jalal can start really.

Ruqaiya surprised me. Her character seems going deeper than only the greed for power.

Jalal doubts the involvement of Sujamal. He suspects the mastermind in Agra.

It shocked me that Jashn Khan is accomplice to this filthy Adham Khan. The conspiracy goes until the inner circle of palace.

thrilling development of the plot 👍🏼

Thank you for the awesome long part 💖

Looking forward to the sequetion already

Wonderful update loved it amazing.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Or kuch naya bataiye😆

😆

Very nice chapter.....

I think you are going to write very interesting plot....politics and mind games.......

Waiting to see jodha in a wise and powerful charector.....slowly involving in court matters.....

I see you have laid the foundation for the next track......Sujamal....and probably Akdha separation......If it is separation if possible don't drag too long....Not sure...

I want to see Akdha relationship in a romantic angle.......they have very good emotional intimacy....a bit of physical intimacy also would add beauty to your story...

Something like jodha's jealousy, insecurity etc., in a beautiful way.......

Please update next part soon....

Eagerly waiting.......

First of all, sorry for the late response. Had to submit my assignments so did not get the time to comment.

Coming to the chapter, you always leave me speechless. I liked that cute banter between Jodha and Jalal. They both seemed free from all constraints, happy and content. Jalal teasing Jodha is always fun to read.

Jalal speaking up for Jodha in front of all those gossipers was amazing. She always wanted a man who would respect her and protect her honour and dignity. The self-respect that she was deprived of in Amer, she would get it in Agra and for all the right reasons.

The conversation between Jalal and Ruqaiya was good. I was looking forward to the time when Ruqaiya would realise the potency of Jalal-Jodha's relationship, that how truly close they are and have known each other, well, before their wedding itself and you made it happen.

And you made Ruqaiya's stand quite clear with the exchange between her and Jodha. Let's see what the story holds for them. Will this acquaintance would develop to form a bond of friendship or she will also conspire against Jodha, is what I am curious about, though I like this nice and understanding Ruqaiya. It's different from other fanfictions that I have read, which were getting quite monotonous and predictable.

Adham being the master-mind was most expected but Jashn Khan's involvement was a huge shock. Did not see this one coming. Hope Jalal goes by his instincts and uncovers the plot. Did not want to see Jalal-Jodha separation. Also, when is Sujamal making his re-entry?

Well, your poetic descriptions always mesmerise me. I can't help but re-read the chapter thrice.

Waiting for the next chapter already.

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

What a beautiful update❤️

Thank you dear

Originally posted by: Rashi144

First of all, sorry for the late response. Had to submit my assignments so did not get the time to comment.

>> It's okay Dear ❤️ SO glad that you spared your time to give your two cents hear despite being busy.

Coming to the chapter, you always leave me speechless. I liked that cute banter between Jodha and Jalal. They both seemed free from all constraints, happy and content. Jalal teasing Jodha is always fun to read.

>> Yes, they are now free from the constraints that were holding them back. Now its all their happy story together.

Jalal speaking up for Jodha in front of all those gossipers was amazing. She always wanted a man who would respect her and protect her honour and dignity. The self-respect that she was deprived of in Amer, she would get it in Agra and for all the right reasons.

>>Yeah she will get the respect she deserves.😃

The conversation between Jalal and Ruqaiya was good. I was looking forward to the time when Ruqaiya would realise the potency of Jalal-Jodha's relationship, that how truly close they are and have known each other, well, before their wedding itself and you made it happen.

>> Yep... I was worried about making it a bit out of character. Glad that you like it 😊

And you made Ruqaiya's stand quite clear with the exchange between her and Jodha. Let's see what the story holds for them. Will this acquaintance would develop to form a bond of friendship or she will also conspire against Jodha, is what I am curious about, though I like this nice and understanding Ruqaiya. It's different from other fanfictions that I have read, which were getting quite monotonous and predictable.

>> Thanks dear... I was against of the idea of antagonist Ruqaiya all time so I tried a different way.

Adham being the master-mind was most expected but Jashn Khan's involvement was a huge shock. Did not see this one coming. Hope Jalal goes by his instincts and uncovers the plot. Did not want to see Jalal-Jodha separation. Also, when is Sujamal making his re-entry?

>> Let's see how all these unfolds😉

Well, your poetic descriptions always mesmerise me. I can't help but re-read the chapter thrice.

>> Thank you dear....

Waiting for the next chapter already.

>> Okkk. I might start writing from today.

You might want to read my other fanfiction : Humari Adhuri Kahani. I just completed it. Please tell me how u felt about that.

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Very nice chapter.....

> Thank you dear🤗

I think you are going to write very interesting plot....politics and mind games.......

> I want to but to be honest I don't know what I will do

Waiting to see jodha in a wise and powerful charector.....slowly involving in court matters.....

>I might go to that way slowly. She might not involve directly but will be behind Jalal as support system

I see you have laid the foundation for the next track......Sujamal....and probably Akdha separation......If it is separation if possible don't drag too long....Not sure...

> Abhi to mile hay dono. Not separating them, don't worry😛

I want to see Akdha relationship in a romantic angle.......they have very good emotional intimacy....a bit of physical intimacy also would add beauty to your story...

>Now a time for that☺️

Something like jodha's jealousy, insecurity etc., in a beautiful way.......

> Yep sure...😉

Please update next part soon....

Eagerly waiting.......

> Thanks for sharing your thoughts dear... Very effective for me.

Originally posted by: Soso70

What another great chapter.

>> Thank youu🤗

JoJa-Moment in the morning was beautyful ❤️

"They are as beautiful as the first ray of sun in the dawn, waiting to brighten up the whole world with own shine… Enough of the cloudy haze, Jodha… let the sun shine on us, smile now!” Jodha smiled and lied on her side, eyes on his eyes- “Every drop of tear is not born from cloudy gloom, My Lord… some of them are created in the dewdrops from the first ray of sun in dawn.”

Loved this lines. So beautifully written ❤️

>> ☺️

Now the story of Jodha and Jalal can start really.

>> Yes, now it will. 👍🏼

Ruqaiya surprised me. Her character seems going deeper than only the greed for power.

>> Yes, I always tried to explore her character differently so...

Jalal doubts the involvement of Sujamal. He suspects the mastermind in Agra.

>> He has a good instinct

It shocked me that Jashn Khan is accomplice to this filthy Adham Khan. The conspiracy goes until the inner circle of palace.

thrilling development of the plot 👍🏼

>> Don't know iske aage kya hoga😵

Thank you for the awesome long part 💖

Looking forward to the sequetion already

>> Thank you for your lovely comment😃

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Wow! Amazing chapter. Got fully involved. By the way, acchi rukkaiya hazam nahi hoti. Here she is more like salima begum of the series. Her last comment to jo is what i expect from hukka😆. Would love to read more of ja jo, rather than that hukka madam. Acchi rukkaiya irritates me😆

I thought you hate Ruqaiya so I made her good for you🤣

Thank you dear❤️