Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 9

The way you portrayed ani's subtle possissive side... The way their bond growing.... Ani drank hot coffee🤣i can totally imagine it...

Portrayal of bondita is so apt... Every girl experience it during their first love...the way you wrote it☺️

It's cute... I am already waiting for next chapter

Jyoti what have you written 😲

I'm speechless dear 👏

The feelings Bon is feeling , the way Ani is taking care of her and everything are causing butterflies to me ☺️

As I had said before I felt the same and I loved this os very much 🤗

Update the next os ASAP plz 😊

Sorry for late unres 🤗

Yaar you know how much I love this song Thanks for choosing this 😳

The song and lyrics which you chose really fits well in this situation ❤️

Haaye pehla pehla pyaar vaali feels ☺️ Next vaala Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar pe likh rahi ho kya? ☺️❤️

I loved their puchka and chaat date vaala idea 😛 Mujhe bhi khaana hai 😭

Poor Bon 🤣 She said pyaara pati in the spur of the moment ☺️🤪🤣 Ani ke dil me ghanti bajj gayi hogi 🤪

Awww Bon ko Ani se pyaar ho raha hai ☺️

It was really a very sober and subtle way to start their romance...

Loved it!!! 🤗

Its just so perfect and fabulous❤️

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Such a lovely os with beautiful lyrics and emotions ❤️

She wants him to be with her even if it's imagination This line has so much depth.

Nicely penned down 👍🏼

Thank you so much Prit😳

Glad that you enjoyed reading it..

Will post next One as soon as possible😳

Originally posted by: Mayurrana1299g

It is beautiful❤️.....

Such a simple and beautiful concept ❤️

Thank you for writing this

Will wait for next one 👍🏼

Thank you so much Myura😳

Thank you for liking the concept, i'm so happy that you guys are loving this❤️

Will post next one asap😳

Amazing Jyoti!

I loved the end specially! The wishful thinking and the pinning away she experiences is 🥺

Sorry for the late comment. I have been busy with exams and havent been active on IF recently.

Unresed

Originally posted by: RUDY575

The way you portrayed ani's subtle possissive side... The way their bond growing.... Ani drank hot coffee🤣i can totally imagine it...

Portrayal of bondita is so apt... Every girl experience it during their first love...the way you wrote it☺️

It's cute... I am already waiting for next chapter

Yup he is possessive and protective both😳 and that hot coffee scene maine imagine krke hi likha hai😆

And about bon's pov, yup she is experiencing new feelings and emotions but also she is waiting for him to feel the same😒

Thank you so much reading monu😳

Will post next Ani's pov soon

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Jyoti what have you written 😲

Kya ho gya sanan😲

I'm speechless dear 👏

Oh acha😆thank you thank you😳

The feelings Bon is feeling , the way Ani is taking care of her and everything are causing butterflies to me ☺️

The way Ani is taking care of Bon is❤️

And butterflies chodo udhar Bon is feeling whole zoo😆

As I had said before I felt the same and I loved this os very much 🤗

Awww thank you so much dear😳

Update the next os ASAP plz 😊

Yup i will post the next soon...stay tuned