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Posted: 17 years ago
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I don't have title for this story but I want to write the story.

A story about a simple girl named Diamond who don't have money but she has beauty. All the girls are jealous of her beauty that's why she don't have friends. She's a poor girl but she don't need money to make her happy, she needs love to make her happy, her mom and dad passed away so she don't have anybody.

One day, it was freezing and rainy day, she had on a beautiful purple paki-hindi outfit. The wind was blowing and her hair was flowing, her beautiful silky brown hair is what caught cute guy that was at a store's attention, he saw her from the window of he's store and he couldn't believe someone could have a beauty she had, he looked at the sky it was raining maybe he thought God sent her to me. Diamond(the girl) was outside waiting for the bus to come so she can go home. Suddenly, the guy was coming her way and she saw the guy coming and she was memorize by he's looks and the way he walked with confidence.

The guy came to her and said, "Hey, it's raining with storm and heavy wind, you can stay at the store until the rain stops."

Diamond didn't like the idea of staying at some guy's store so she said to that guy, "NO thank you." and she kept on waiting for her bus in that raining day. Her umbrella was taken by the heavy wind and she was hopeless. The guy couldn't just sit at the store and look at he's love at first sight lady so he went outside and stood besides her to keep her company.
The girl was overwhelmed with emotions, she felt like crying, she started thinking to herself "This guy is too nice, he cares about me and he's good looking too, I don't think I'm worthy of him," as she felt low self-esteem of thinking she's not good enough for him.

The guy asked her, "Can I drive you home instead of you waiting for the bus in the middle of the rain?"

She said, "NO thank you, I'm just going to wait for the bus. Aren't you selling food to the people at the store? why aren't you at the store?"

He answer, "Because there is no customer there and I just saw you at the window."

The bus came and she turned around with her beautiful smile and said to the guy, "Thanks again for your offer." He smiled back with he's dimple cute smile and said, "NO thanks to me since I didn't do nothing for you."



TO BE CONTINUE....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww, how cute, Aishu. 😍 Such a perfect start.. I want to read more. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Insanity

Aww, how cute, Aishu. 😍 Such a perfect start.. I want to read more. 😃



awwww thank you kully 😳🤗 I'll keep writing the story on my free time 😛
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Awesome. I'll keep up. 😳 🤗
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The girl went home. Her home has no tv, no computer but she works part time to take care of her handicap uncle. She gets money for taking care of him. The girl lays in her bed thinking about what a dreamy the guy she saw was. She forgot to ask he's name. She kept on thinking about her dreams coming true of marrying to him and living her life being happy. But she thought to herself, "forget about him since he can't fall in love with me, he can find way more beautiful girl than me." She spent her whole night thinking about him and finally fall asleep.

She woked up late and made her uncle breakfast and hurried up to catch the bus since she was late. But the bus left her. She was waiting for the next bus to arrive feeling angry that she didn't wake up early, and she shouldn't spent the whole night thinking about him instead of doing her homework and sleeping after that. Now thinking about the guy made her forget to do her homework, miss her bus and become late for the first time in school.

The bus finally arrived and took her to the school. The whole class which was 100 students in there was looking at her for being late and for wearing those poor people's outfit. The girl isn't like the rest of the girls wearing make-up and dressing up to impress. She wore poor looking outfit and didn't wear make-up at all.

The class begin and teacher was calling everyone to drop their homework that's worth 100 points which she didn't have. She felt sad and angry at herself for some guy who she just met for the first time distracting her from her school. When doing the lab class work, she struggled through the work, that's why she should've read the books instead of thinking and dreaming about that unknown guy.

School was torture and she just wanted to go home and read her books. She waited for the bus and saw the guy coming. She ignored him while he was calling saying, "Hey." and she rode the bus and treat him as he didn't even exist.

She got home and made food for her uncle. Instead of reading the books and doing her homework, there she was feeling tired and sad about what happened at class of her being the slow one there and then she cried to sleep thinking about how she ignored the guy who had a happy face seeing her. She fall asleep thinking, crying and feeling sad.

She woke up late again in the morning. Had to fix breakfast for uncle.


TO BE CONTINUE
Edited by veryuniquestyle - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww, that's too bad. She thinks he doesn't love her. I like it, Aishu. Where does she live, btw?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Insanity

Aww, that's too bad. She thinks he doesn't love her. I like it, Aishu. Where does she live, btw?



aww thanks kully 😳 you mean country?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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she lives in Belgium
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ooh, belgium's beautiful! [I've heard, never been there!] You should post pics too! When you have time, obviously. 😳
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Originally posted by: Insanity

Ooh, belgium's beautiful! [I've heard, never been there!] You should post pics too! When you have time, obviously. 😳



ooh okay. Will post it probably tomorrow

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