Episode 189 - The Sins of the father - Page 4

Helly posted an ig post with minuji. She was having mehendi. What is mehendi for? Rose day k din toh woh mehendi nhi lagayegii.

Originally posted by: Nephy

Hmm...thats what making me confused,His vulnerable side,his fears always wanted to see but his basic traits changing is something undigestible I mean he could be vulnerable and emotinally drained could not decrease the years of practice sharpness and intelligence a person gain,smart people in emotional states also act sharply,they are low in front of only they consider capable to see them at low here in this case its Riddhima but overall personality change is something very put off.

But as you yourself mentioned many times that they are not capable of multi dimensional writing of a character as well as not able to tighten up story by writing dynamics between various characters so I think thats what happening here,story wise as revenge was important same way vansh vulnerable side,his fears,his past is important so to focus on that dimension they forget about other dimensions of his character just like revenge track and as usual due to loose writing dynamics with other characters are also not very clear.(which could answer chang,diamond,kabir,aryan,ishani being into play and no clarity from where they are coming and all)

Its something which we know about their writing so yeah if past has to seen than other dimension have to forget of his character for that time period.

The makers are too invested in giving thrill that they forget the most important in a thriller is there must be no loose ends and a proper closure is required for each track.

Each character of the show could have been individually handled..they had the capability..but the makers could not utilise it well.

Loving the different phases of vansh now..we finally see the dark past phase of vansh which is great but I agree..we can't even see a glimpse of the sharp vansh and it's frustrating

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Helly posted an ig post with minuji. She was having mehendi. What is mehendi for? Rose day k din toh woh mehendi nhi lagayegii.

I think rose day Pai sabko patha chal jayegi that Riddhima is pregnant and that's why dadi is applying mehandi.

The captian of meenu said Something about happiness or something right..I think good news sabko patha chal Gaya hai

Originally posted by: vallu123

Will we ever get to see .....vansh ke life main sab set vo hi hota hain jo vansh chahta hain!!!

Maker's answer to u-

Originally posted by: Priya12000

The baby track has completely sidelined these issues..but I agree.hope they atleast show it in the future episodes

Originally posted by: Priya12000

The makers are too invested in giving thrill that they forget the most important in a thriller is there must be no loose ends and a proper closure is required for each track.

Each character of the show could have been individually handled..they had the capability..but the makers could not utilise it well.

Loving the different phases of vansh now..we finally see the dark past phase of vansh which is great but I agree..we can't even see a glimpse of the sharp vansh and it's frustrating

Yeah I completely agree with your first paragraph,thrill never leave loopholes,close ends,it always works as a suspense created,than suspense is resolved showing how everybody played their cards along with twist and turns managing to create thrill with one out of all playing (and everybody should play neck to neck that actually gives adrenaline rush😉)one emerging as the Boss......😎and not necessary that same person always wins infact its better when things are equal between 2 parties,more the competition more the thrill....

But I guess they somewhere lost in that and now maybe trp,channel pressure reason or whatever reason unable to give closure which is reason for so much tangling.

I always seen their every track when started was very important for story pov like sunny track,than ragini track,viva track,revenge,riddhima's parents truth,mafia one and now present one but they somewhere don't know where messing up things....whether its every characters basic traits their dynamics or change in those dynamics,they can't depict it clearly and accomodating more in that space.

P.S.I want to mention that whatever I have written is pov regarding overall serial,failure at connecting loose ends.

I again will say that I am not against the vansh's vulnerable side showing or his fears.I seriously hope them to atleast execute it properly and not that with trps they again try to hop and jump.Already a messier situation they are in,so its better to avoid more.

Originally posted by: Priya12000

Maker's answer to u-

😭😭...yeh dokha hai....ab koi inlogo pe revenge lo!!!

Originally posted by: Priya12000

Exactly only when there is a separation will we get the sharp vansh back..He is too vulnerable and dependant on riddhima now..

I am loving this...to see things from his pov, his pain, his childhood, his insecurities n fear....even the mightiest warriors have some weakness...he isn't emotionless or remorseless like kabir...so i can understand his pain...n i hate ishani with passion!

I love the vulnerability...the inner conflict...n ridz stepping up to soothe his pain n heal the alpha....but intelligence sharpness cannot suddenly disappear...yeah your emotion can overpower your mind, n one might loose clarity...but for diamonds it so clear cut...

During the ragini fiasco...vansh didnt know anything yet he was sharp, alert n he was also madly in love with ridz......there were wroting inconsistencies but basic traits of character were maintained...that is y despite the plot getting dragged for 100 episodes trp never dropped ...

I dont want to see him as mastermind, cold or shrewd but just as an equally strong player in this game of love n betrayal...

Well may be in future episodes they might show us something...wishful thinking!!!

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

i hope they will. Abi toh Pregnancy pe hi. Focus hai. I am waiting for the day Riddhima knowing Vansh 's lie about her parents.

She will be heart broken....i hope vansh gives ishani left n right....just leaves his family unprotected....should not provide a bit...

Originally posted by: Nephy

Yeah I completely agree with your first paragraph,thrill never leave loopholes,close ends,it always works as a suspense created,than suspense is resolved showing how everybody played their cards along with twist and turns managing to create thrill with one out of all playing (and everybody should play neck to neck that actually gives adrenaline rush😉)one emerging as the Boss......😎and not necessary that same person always wins infact its better when things are equal between 2 parties,more the competition more the thrill....

But I guess they somewhere lost in that and now maybe trp,channel pressure reason or whatever reason unable to give closure which is reason for so much tangling.

I always seen their every track when started was very important for story pov like sunny track,than ragini track,viva track,revenge,riddhima's parents truth,mafia one and now present one but they somewhere don't know where messing up things....whether its every characters basic traits their dynamics or change in those dynamics,they can't depict it clearly and accomodating more in that space.

P.S.I want to mention that whatever I have written is pov regarding overall serial,failure at connecting loose ends.

I again will say that I am not against the vansh's vulnerable side showing or his fears.I seriously hope them to atleast execute it properly and not that with trps they again try to hop and jump.Already a messier situation they are in,so its better to avoid more.

I agree..The starting has always been very good..but for a thriller..The ending is what people look for the most because it answers all of their questions..Its sad makers could not understand that

I understand that you are talking about the overall serial and its problems..and i agree.Atleast now they need to execute the tracks well.