AR in luv FF last part - pg1 rhea26 n jia

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey all,

Armaan n Riddhiam in luv FF has now reached 7 threads...

so we r plannin to close it.....

so d last part is written by me(rhea26)n jia..

Jia will post d part written by us....in a few minutes...

DO READ IT N DO COMMENT......me n jia..wil b w8in....

we rilli wanna know whether u liked it or not..

tanxx guys..tanxx a ton...to all who were involved in dis FF....

Richa,Yachna,Lubna,Fareshta,Palkhi,Afifa,Kanu,Yogitha,Kanan

Shivani,Tia,Saakshi,Muskaan,Natty,maha,Madidha n afcourse JIA every1 else...

sorry if i hav missed out any1...

tanxx 4 makin dis FF a big success....😉🤗

-Rhea26

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Last Part of dis FF....by RHEA n JIA....

guys hope u'll enjoy dis...

Like everyday....

dis day is also special 4 AR....

AR were sleepin...

Armaan got up...

n saw riddhima sleepin...dere besides him like a baby....

he smiled.....at d angel sleepin next to him...

he....didnt wanted to disturb her...so he got up quietly...

but...Riddhima....got up n said...Armaan...

A-smiled...n said...guud mornin riddhima..

R-smiled...guud mornin...

n den Armaan kissed riddhima's forehead....

A-r u ok??

R-smiled....yeah....

A-sure..

R-hm....btw u get ready n go to sanjeevani or else...Keerti will screw u up...

A-smiled...yeah...i'll just cum huh...

R-yeah...n smiled...

Armaan was just goin to d washroom..

n suddenly...

Riddhima....

shouted....AAAAAAA!!!!!!

A-ran towards her....

jaan u fine...

R-armaan...im not feelin ok...

A-is more worried dan her....

we shld go to sanjeevani...

R-aaaa......

Armaan's parents cum running too………….

Armi's mom: beta quickly take her…………..

A-picked her up....

n took her to the hospital...

while his parents followed………………..

Keerti was shocked....

A-Dr.Keerti...voh Riddhima...voh...(he cant speak properly also)

K-Dr.armaan.....relaxxx....

n den she says to d ward boys...to get stretcher n all....

n keerti tells lovely to inform abt dis..to shashank,paddy n angie....

Lovely goes n calls dem up...

A-is goin wid Riddhima..

K-Dr.armaan plz u stay outside..

A-no dr.keerti plz...

K-Dr.Armaan...try to understand...

A-is still holdin Riddhima's hand....

R-armaan...its ok...

A-Riddhima...plz..take care haan...

im here only....tum tension mat leena...

R-smiles...n says yeah...

A-kisses her on her forehead n den cheeks...

R-smiles..

K-smiles...after luukin at how much concerned is armaan abt ridzi...

K-lets go...first we'll chk n den c...

K takes ridz to d ICU

Meanwhile....Armaan is standin outside...n is really very worried...

n den Shashank,Padma n Anjali,Atul cum dere.....armaan's parents too waiting tensed…………….

Shash-Armaan beta wat happened...

A-dad voh Riddhima ko ICU leke gaye hain...

Shash-nethin serious...

A-i dont know dad....aabhi Dr.Keerti is chkin...

Shash-k...

Padma is standin n luukin at Armaan....

as hes soooo damn worried...

Padma-Armaan...beta dont worry....

Atul-yaar tu tension mat lee...

A-smiles...tanxx Champ...

Atul-smiles...

Anjali-dont worry armaan...

A-anjli i think u shld rest...plz...u take care...

tum plz..aaram karo..atul...take her...

Atul-anjali armaan si rite...

tum aaram karo hum sab hain na...

Anjali-hmm...but keep me informed....Armaan...

n Atul takes Anjali....from dere.....

Keerti cums out....

A-Dr.Keerti is she fine...

K-yeah shes fine...

10 mins mein....we'll take her...

A-soo can we meet her...

K-sure...

Armaan runs inside d ICU

R-smiles..

A-holds her hand...

n asks her...

Riddhima r u fine??

R-ya...

A-sure..

R-hmm....

A-u relaxxxx ok....

R-Armaan...mere se zyaada tensed toh tum lag rahe ho...(says to lighten d atmosphere)

A-laughs....

n den shashank n padma cum inside...

Padma-Riddhima tum theek ho..

R-ji mom...

Shash-tank god....

beta tum tension mat leena hum sab hain yahan...ok??

R-ji dad...n smiles...

Shash-aur beta tumhe pata hai..tumse zyaada tensed toh ye ARMAAN hai...

R-laughs.....

Shash-aacha armaan ab tum jaldi bahar aa jao..

A-ji dad...

n shash n paddy go out...

A-still holdin her hand...

R-smiles..

A-u tk...n dont worry....everythin will b fine..kuch nahi hoga huh..

R-i knw...Armaan....u relaxxx...

A-luuks at her tummy...

beta mom ko taang mat karna ok....plz...

R-laughs...

A-kisses her on her forehead n says...i want ur safety first...

R-hmm...

A-u tk...i'll c u..

R-k...

A-gives her a quick lip kiss....

R-smiles..u dont worry...

A-hmm...

Armaan leaves her hand n goes out....from d ICU

n den d wardboys cum...n take her to d OT...

n Keerti is gonna take special care of Riddhima...

MEanwhile...

All r w8in outside....

n Armaan is really very tensed...

anjali cums and holds armaan's hand……….

Anjie:armaan plsssssssss don't worry……………ridz aur baacha dono ko kuch nahi hoga……………Dr keerti hai na…………..

Armi:tanxx anjie……………..par mei kya karu………….tension toh hoga he na……….mujhe bas mere ridz ki fikar hai…………..she is my life…………..

Paddy cumes there………

Paddy:armaan beta…………who humari bhi zindagi hai………….aur who bhi ek zindagi ko janam dene jaa rahi hai…………….tum chinta mat karo………..agar tum tension loge toh ridz ko ye sunkar aur bhi fikar hogi………….

Shanshank cumes there too………

Shansh: aur haa beta………….yeh waqt tension lene ka nahi …..u hav to be by her side supporting her…………..giving her ahh the strength she needs………..

And I think more than riddhima beta atul needs our support rite now……………

(as shanshank said this laughingly………….all turned to look at atul sitting dejected in a corner of the waiting room…………….he seemed to be sweating profusely………..all went up to him…………)

armi; champ………….kya hua…………..??????/ tujhe itna pasena kyu???????

Atul: armaan……yaar kya batau…………mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai………….

Armi: champ I know u treat ridz as ur younger sister but…………..now I am saying this ki itna tension mat le…………..

Atul: armaan…………..aur tu……………….look at ur face………….sirf aur sirf chinta dekh rahi hai………

Armi: areeyyyyyy she is my wife yaar………..and she is giving birth to our very own first child………………so tension hono jayaz hai……….

Atul: toh that's wat na………………..even anjie will give birth to our very first child………….aur agar……………aur agar………..agar………..

Armi: toh tu ab tak anjie ki bath kar raha tha????????

(slapping his forehead……………..while paddy-shanshank burst out laughing…………anjie too joins them…………)

armi: and here I thought that u were talking abt ridz……………

atul: riddz ko kuch nahi hoga………….she is very strong and u r there with her………

armi: toh u will also be there with anjie na………..and we all will be there too………

atul: but…………..but wat if a faint…………….anjie

(looking at anjie) tum tekh toh hogi na……I mean agar mei behosh hogaya toh………….

Armi: champ tu………………

(just then Dr keerti cumes…………all stand up while armi moves forward expectantly…………….)

armi: Dr keerti……………who ridz………….woh tekh toh I mean………….aur hamara bacha…………..app plsssssssssss jaldi boliye na???????

keerti: Armaan…………jao andar ridz is calling u …………….

(armaan looks at shansh…………paddy……….everyone who nod him and tell him to go quikly…………..armaan almost runs inside…………….)

(as he enters…………ridz opens her eyes to see him cuming……………..she puts forward her hand slowly toward him……………armaan comes quickly and clutches her hand……………he just keeps on looking at her eyes to find answers without even looking anywer else…………..)

ridz: armaan………………….tumhare khwaish puri hogaye ………..humre ek fool si beti hue hai……….

(these words hit armaan like an electric bolt…………..for a moment he just went numb…………….then as ridz words dawned on him he looked at her and slowly his gaze fell on the most beautiful site in her arms……………….looking at her in her arms armaan felt as if god had blessed him in abundance…………..he felt as though all his life he had lived only to see this site……………only to live this moment…………a moment which will be cherished by him forever…………a moment which he will always remember………….which on remembering it will fill his heart with pure joy……………her sheer beauty…..made im look at her with awe…………she was his daughter………….his own blood……………his own flesh………….the symbol of his love…………….he truly felt on top of the world…………..the sheer happiness..brought tears to his eyes……………unable to control them he looked at ridz…………..there his love lay looking at the father of her child with expressions unmatched to any expression she had ever seen…………….ridz looked at armaan's face………..which was filled with joy………………joy which she had never seen…………..it was a completely different feeling……………….finally breaking the silence which already had spoken volumes…………….ridz spoke)

ridz:armaan…………..

(placing a finger on a her lips………….he looked at her…………the beauty which reflected frm his daughters face was seen on her face too…………..gently moving forward………………he kissed her forehead lightly…………..and said………..)

armi: jaan………………..mei uss pal ka shukriya kar raha hu jis pal tum meri zindagi mei aye………………aur ajj tumne ye tofa dekar meri zindagi puri kar di…………..i love u jaan…………

(as he said this tears sprand up in both their eyes…………then slowly armaan took his bundle of joy………….in his arms…………he felt as if he holding the most precious thing on this earth…it was for him……………….slowly holding her……………he kissed his gem's forehead………..putting her beside ridz…………he took ridz's hand in his and clutching it tight he kissed it………….no words were required………….to express how truly happy both were)

A-Riddhima…I luv u…tanxx 4 dis….wonderful gift dat u hav given me 2day…

(Ridz smiles contently…………as armaan moves forward and kisses her on her forehead…)

armi: riddhima…………….tumne ajj jo khushi mujhe di hai…………….uske samne meri har khushi fikki pad gaye hai……….

(ridz .now places a finger on his lips delicately……………and says looking deeply in his eyes)

Ridz: armaan yeh hamare pyar ki nishani……………hum dono ka tofa hai…………aur ………….

(As she is abt to get emotional………………shansh-paddy……….AA and armaan's parents cum inside……………)

armi's mom: array dekho toh………….mere gudiya rani ekdum pari jaise lag rahi hai……………ridz beta ekdum tum par gayee hai………..

paddy: arre app bhi……………nahi armaan beta ye pari tum par gayee hai………

(shansh and armaan father smile at this chit chat…………while anjie cums forward)

Anjie: abb app dono nani-dadi ken ok-jhok khatam ho gaye ho to mei mere pyari se behen ki parchaye ko dekhoo

(The scene continues with everyone taking turns to hold her in their arms…………while AR just smile……………a truly blissful smile…………content with life)

Before u think this is the end……………………THIS ISNT………………..AS

Part abhi baaki hai mere dost….he he…..

IT'S WAS NEW BEGGININ……4 AR….

N after 1 week…..atul n Anjali had a baby boy…..

N yes u guessed it all rite…..Atul fainted…..wen dey took Anjali 2 d OT…

He he…….soo guys…like dis..AA n AR lived happily eva after….

N yeah Armaan wanted more kids….but 4 now…..Ria took up all their time………

Yes they named her RIA…………..

RI-Riddhima

A-armaan….

A combination of both….he he…

N AA named their son…ANKIT

RITE NOW AR r busy with their toddler……………she filled up their life……..given their life an entire new meaning…………………….and

WAT ABT AA……………

Well atul is already trying to teach ankit the names of all plants while anjie is trying her best to get ankit say mummy and daddy before jasmine and rose…………

While armaan has already decided not to allow Ria to hav any boyfrnds and not allow a single guy near her………….specially a flirt…………….while ridz just smiles looking at them……………..

Both our couples lived a happy blissful and content life……………….ever after

************A NEW BEGINNING*********

-RHEA n JIA…..

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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COngoo!!!!!
Rhea jia 😛 Richa,Yachna,Lubna,Fareshta,Palkhi,Afifa,Kanu,Yogitha

Shivani,Tia,Saakshi,Muskaan,Madidha n every1 else...
😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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congo my dear angels last part will be rocking
Edited by cute_unknown_fr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
cngo yaar
2 all da ppl who had written in it
do rite da prt soooooooooooonnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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CONGRATZ EVRY....hey jia nd rhea waitng fr ur prt
plzz hurry up cnt wait nymore...... lst prt wll be rckng....
luv yachna
Edited by yachna - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dats so cool ..jia gonna post d part soon .. so indirectly dis is ar in luv part 8 .. rite ??
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi everyone
i actually have tears of emotions in my eyes
i wanna thank all the angels and espically rhea and jia di who are ivolved in all of this.
Thanks to everyone who has worked hard to try and entartain everyone and keep us all happy with all the fantasctic parts.
I have enjoyed every moment of being with you guys love all my angels sooo much 🤗
lots of love tc.
muskaan
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jia di n rhea di cnt w8 2 read d nxt prt! jia di pst it sn plz! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jia n rhea..cnt wait fr ur next part..!!! plzzzzz jaldi se post karo..!! 😃 😃

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