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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Asya99

Sakshi aur uske dreams....

Choree ayesha kyu inta bolte ho ki arjun ki daant sunne prhe

Arjun kbhi nhi sudhrega .


For shayari - i like to think both of them are saying this to each other.

Riya to Arjun - she thinks that Arjun is brilliant , everyone likes in a way so , she doesn't want anything bad happening to him.

She loves him and wants him to like her too . She wants to take away his pain.

Arjun to Riya- He thinks she is so loveable , everyone likes her. So wants to hide her from everyone. He wants to tell her that he also love her.


Thnx for the update



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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Nice update

Liked your shayari he wants to protect Riya from his enemies/outer world and make his forever

Continue soon

Waiting for Riya’s entry

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

As usual roj ki tarah normal day etf mein my god main to dar gai sakshi ke sapne se sapneein bhi plz no kiss viss with arjun yeh team jab tak samjun se daant na sun le inka khana lagta hazam nahi hota research specialist matlab riya ki entry eagerly waiting for riya entry and meeting with arjun. Fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt .


Yeh kis dharmsankat mein fasa diya main chah kar bhi shayri poem extra ko decode nahi kar sakti

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Good storyline. Update please

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Waiting for riya 's entry.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

As usual roj ki tarah normal day etf mein my god main to dar gai sakshi ke sapne se sapneein bhi plz no kiss viss with arjun yeh team jab tak samjun se daant na sun le inka khana lagta hazam nahi hota research specialist matlab riya ki entry eagerly waiting for riya entry and meeting with arjun. Fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt .


Yeh kis dharmsankat mein fasa diya main chah kar bhi shayri poem extra ko decode nahi kar sakti


Ab thoda wishes to poori kr skte hai na sakshi ki ,reality to hm hi jaante hai😆



Thank you pdke reply krne ke liya aur taareef ( ( shayari ke dharamsankat wali ) krne ke liya.

Aajkl bahut km taareef sunne ko milti hai.😆


Pr shayri to decode krni pdegi 🥳🥳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Possessive iqueimpulse]


Ab thoda wishes to poori kr skte hai na sakshi ki ,reality to hm hi jaante hai😆



Thank you pdke reply krne ke liya aur taareef ( ( shayari ke dharamsankat wali ) krne ke liya.

Aajkl bahut km taareef sunne ko milti hai.😆


Pr shayri to decode krni pdegi 🥳🥳

mujhe to iss shayri se yahi samajh aaya arjun kitna deeply love karta hai riya se aur shuru ki do line to yeh darshata hai ki kitna possessive hai riya ke liye

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Nice intro..

Continue soon

Please pm❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Looks interesting want to folloew

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

🤗Part 2🤗




Somewhere in outskirts of city , lies a beutiful house with nameplate reading "ROOH".


A black Suv enters , a man comes out of it and hurriedly runs inside throwing the keys to the helper for parking.


As he reaches to the open gate , he stops hearing the commotion inside. Automatically a heartwarming smile comes on its face, a smile that could put sun to shame.


The mid twenties girl sitting with two children in the body of grown up adults on her both side is the reason his heart is beating. His jaan, his sweetheart , his life , his. sorry sorry their Rooh . If those two musketeers would have heard him , they would for sure kill him for calling her only his.

He leaned on the door with his hands folded on his chest to savour the crazy sweet moments of his life.


Inside the house:

The both musketeers were fighting like 5 year old children . The Rooh of them looked at them with oh-they-started-again and when-will-they-stop look.

Girl: Dekho na Mimi , ye paithyam ( idiot) mujhe aapke banye hue samose nhi khaane de rha hai. Aur to aur khud saare ke saare cupcake bhi kha gya. Idiot ,gada ,khota ,stupid, obhodro, klutz ..............


Boy: Oye low battery break lga , kaha no entry mein ghus rhi hai . Pura din chik chik krti rehti hai bs. Tu hogi idiot, khoti , gadi aur vo kya tha obhdra .... Ohodra.....chakodra....

Are yrr ek to pta nhi kitni languages downloaded hai iske software mein , google tranlsator ko bhi itni languages nhi aati hongi. Kbhi punjabi , to kbhi bengali, kbhi spanish , french , marathi etc.. etc....etc..🤦🤦aadhiyo ke to mujhe naam bhi nhi pta.


Girl: O hello,

Vo obhodro hai mtlb rude , mannerless, jo tu hai. Aur by the way

The Google Translate app for Android and iOS supports 109 languages and can propose translations for 37 languages via photo, 32 via voice in "conversation mode", and 27 via live video imagery in "augmented reality mode".

Aur mujhe to bs 15 languages hi aati hai, abhi to bahut saari aur seekhni hai. She said while adjusting her specs remorsefully unaware of leaving three people shocked yet again with her knowledge of things.


Boy ( with bewildered expression) : Oye ye tu baar baar apna google search engine kyun chalu krti hai . Encyclopedia hi khol ke baith jaati hai yrr.


Girl: Are pr maine kaha kuch btaya aur vaise bhi Google Search, or simply Google, is a web search engine developed by Google LLC. It is the most used search engine on the World


Boy ( with his hands on his head) : Are bs kr meri maa , meri hi glti thi jo tuje kuch keh dia.


Girl: Are pr


Boy : bs bahut hogya ( while🙌) hogya maate hogya ,shant ho jaa. Aur vaise bhi Mimi ye itna khane lgi hai , aur moti ho jayegi. Phir to yeh car mein bhi nhi baith payegi,iske liya hot air balloon on standby rkhna pdega, garden mein. He said while laughing aloud🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.


Girl : Mimi ye mujhe phir se chida rha hai. Main itni moti hu kya. She said with eyes turning glossy.

Boy : mujhse puch kitni moti hai roj main hi to tujhe apni bike pe bitha ke le jaata hu.

Meri bichari bike bhi mujhe taane maarti hai tere kaaran. Kehti hai " jeene de hume" .


Seeing the girl on the verge of crying , the mimi who was enjoying their banter stepped up and went to her .


Mimi( while embracing her in her arms) : Shhhhh......mera baccha inna kyun ro rha hai. Idr dekhein mimi ki taraf, mimi ke liya to aap duniya ke sbse cute bcche ho , isiliya to mimi roj aapke liya nye nye dishes bnati hai , taaki apki beautiful smile dekh ske. Aur mimi to happy happy tbhi hoti hai jb vo apni is cute se doll ko smile krte hue dekhti hai. Isliya no cries, no tears and no fears.

Mimi ki Iti to strongest hai vo aisi normal si baaton se nhi drti.

( While saying in her ears) Aur ye manyu to pgl hain dekhna abhi iske kaan khichungi to jhat se sorry bolega. Bilkul vo kya keh rhe the aap obhod ...ra kya tha vo


Girl ( whilr laughing) :. Hahha Mimi vo obhodro tha. Ha pgl to vo hai , pr sorry to aaj isko bolna hi pdega.


Mimi: Bs meri iti aise hi smily smily acchi lgti hai, ye tears aapko bilkul suit nhi krte. Aur rhi baat sorry ki vo to ye bolenge hi aur agr nhi bhi bolega to aapke paas to sbse bda hathyar hai .

Girl with a knowing smirk replies: bilkul.


Mimi: ( turning towards the boy and winking him) : Manyu abhi ke abhi sorry bolo iti ko.


Boy : Mimi aap sb hmesha iski side hi leto ho. Meri to koi value hi nhi hai. Pehle vo hitler km the ki ab aap bhi


A sarcastic voice comes from back : accha.

The man who was enjoying seeing his lifelines happy and satisfied entered the living room when he heard hitler. He knew it was for him .


All three of them termed to see a handsome man with a knowing smirk on his face standing their.

The girl ran towards him and hugged him tightly . The man also hugged her tightly and said kya baat hai hme itna jyada miss kiya hmare bcche ne. Aate hi itna pyaar .


Girl: ( with glossy eyes) bahut saara miss kia aapko ,aap pura do din baad gr aaye. Maine kinni saari complains krni thi ,kitni saari baatein krni thi aapse.


Man:( cupping her face in his hands and removing the tears that were falling on her face):. Shhh. Shh ..... Bcche aapko to pta hai na imp case tha vrna aapke baba apko chod ke khi jaate hai. Nhi na chlo ab aap smile krdo jldi se ,vrna baba saari chocolates manyu ko de denge.


Girl : ( while fastly rubbing her eyes ) nhi nahi dekho main nhi ro rha aur smile bhi kr rha hu ab jldi se meri chocolates do.

Man while handling her box of chocolates :. ye lijiya aapki chocolates pr ha , jyada nhi khana do din mein ek chocolate . Ok

Girl : ok ( while eating chocolate )

Man kissed on her forehead and said mera cute bccha. The girl smiled wider.

Man while going towards their Rooh , still focused on the boy with smirk amd said : Vaise ye hitler kaun hai.

Boy who was standing with a fond smile on bis face stiffened and murmured : aaj to nhi bachega bcchu, mujhe bappa se milvakr hi maanege ye, aaj to mera funeral pkka.

Hey bhagwan bccha le mujhe ,apne is bhakt ki jaan ye hitler lekr hi maanega. Hr mangalvar ko mandir jaayunga ,puja krunga aur nariyal bhi chadaunga. Ek min

lekin mangalvaar ko to hanuman ji ka din hota hai, mtlb brahmachari log puja krte hai . Agr maine us din puja ki to kahi hanuman ji mujhse jyada khush hokr jindgi br apni trah kuvara rehne ka vrdaan na de de.

He stood up and screamed naaahi leaving other people not shocked bcz they were aware of his abormal overthinking mind. He murmured Aisa nhi ho skta abhi to maine koi girl friend bhi nhi bnayi. Yrr girl friend kya ,kisi ke saath flirt bhi nhi kiya.Mujhe kuvara nhi rehna. Mimi nhi.

Man shooked the boy and asked him kuch kaha tune . Vaise ye hitler kaun hai.


Boy :( who came out of his dream srry nightmare 😆 with shivering voice answered) : Nhi nhi dada maine to kuch nhi kaha. Kaun hitler main to kisi hitler jo nhi jaanta.


Girl: nhi baba ye jhooth bol rha hai. Ye ye ye na .


Before she could spill the beans, the boy rushed to her , closing her mouth with his hands and said with sheepish smile : Hahha aapko to pta hai dada ye kitna mzaak krti hai. Pgl ldki pura din pta nhi nhi kya kya bolti rehti hai.

While turning towards the girl : chl pgl hr vkt mzaak accha nhi hota, kbhi serious bhi hona chahiye life ko lekr, seekh kuch dada se.


The girl tried to speak but voice came out muffled.


Boy: Aap ise chodo ,do din baad aaye ho aap thoda rest kro,thoda time Mimi ko do dekho vo kaise murjha si gyi hai aapke bina .Pta hai kitna miss kiya unhone aapko. Thoda unpe bhi focus kro. He said while smiling sheepishly and giggling to overcome gis nervousness.


While dragging the reluctant girl to escape from the said hitler he said : Main ise le jaata hu aap log enjoy kro .


He dragged the girl to their joined theatre room while murmuring ek din ye mujhe mr vakr shodegi.


On reaching their the girl pushed him and came out from his hold and started running behind him to beat him up.

This was the usual seen in Rooh villa. At last they both got tired and sat down on bed . Then looked at each other and then again. Started their game on tom and jerry.


Here,

Both the man and his Rooh laughed seeing their antics with a fond smile on their faces bcz this is the world they have created ,for them they both are their life.


The man turned towards his ROOH and embraced her as tightly as he could. She too reciprocated him and hid her face in his neck and kissed him their.


The man while feeling her warm breaths on his neck started loosing his control. He wanted to just pick her up and take her to their secret abode and show her how much a caveman can he be. But he controlled for her , bcz she is his everything.



He hold her hand with his and keep his other hand on her waist possessively , sending shivers down her spine. Arjun smirked sensing her body trembling. It was nothing new to her infact they have done way more than this but she always felt numb and lost bcoz of his touches even slightest ones . And he simply loved the way her body to respond to him . She shied from him md lowered her eyes.


( Bg:. Teri jhuki nazar

Teri hr adaa )




He cupped her face as softly as he could in the fear of harming her even a bit. He closed her trembling soft lips with his hard ones. He kissed her with utmost passion in him.


While feeling her kiss him back more passionately he holded her more tightly.

After few mins they broke the kiss and saw in each other's eye . This was their secret as their talks were always done between the pair of deep dark brown and a pair of black ones. He kissed her forehead with the deepest emotions he have for her and murmured for only her to hear:

Meri Rooh , Meri jaan.



So let's end here.

Aajke liya itna hi. I knw , i knw ye update km aur nameless imagination jyada tha. Pr story ke plot ke liya it was important to understand these emotions and bondings.

Hope aapko ye psnd aaya ho. Aur plz bahut saare commemts kro yrr.

Mujhe bhi pdna hai aapko story kaisi lgi, agr koi changes , suggestions apko better lgte hai to vo bhi bina kisi issues ke btaiya.

Hm saare padenge, aur agr hmari storyline ko suit krenge to hm jarur accept krenge.




Arre aree kidr chle

Aaj ki shayari to sunte jayiye .

And ek aur baat ye shayari sirf ek imagiantion hi meri Ariya ke liya , ye stroy se related nhi hai . Ye iske liya add ki jaati hai ki aap ise pde aur ispr aap Ariya ko kaise imagine krte hai vo comment kre.🤗



Seh lu main ab Teri kami,


Aisa mumkin Hi nahi,


Sau bar talash lia khud ko,


Kuch tere siwa na mila mujhko.


To bta

Kaise bhool jau main tujko





At last lots of thank🤗 you for reading and commenting.

Ab jldi jldi ise bhi pd lo aur apni imagination ko udao.🥳🥳🥳















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