~~~ SaiRat SS - When Calls The Heart ~~~ PART 4 (Last Part) PG 12 Upda - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Aeeee gazaaaabbbb ending!! Virat with his biwi shifting to quarters.


Thank you for this ending.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Aap batayiye aapko kaunsi mithai pasand hai ????? Aap batao toh sahi mai parcel kar deta hu😳

Itna khush kar diya itna khush kar diya ki ab mai kya bolun❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thankyou sooo much for this

I can keep reading it again n again

Virat was just lawajab

The way he gave back to everyone

Pakhi ko do chaar aur bhi suna deta 🤣🤣🤣

Now I just can't wait for their ice cream date

Please write something like they are feeding eachother

Aankhein taras rahe hai us dinner ke liye

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Love love love love! Uff. Kaash Aisa Muh tod jawabVirat de pata to BK, ninad and PP. this was absolutely incredible. Thank you. Please keep writing. Look forward to reading more


I don't think he will reply to them in the serial. So SS se hi mann bharna parta hain 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinafans

Aeeee gazaaaabbbb ending!! Virat with his biwi shifting to quarters.


Thank you for this ending.


He can't let his baiko stay with those vultures now, can he?😉


Thank you 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Aap batayiye aapko kaunsi mithai pasand hai ????? Aap batao toh sahi mai parcel kar deta hu😳

Itna khush kar diya itna khush kar diya ki ab mai kya bolun❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thankyou sooo much for this

I can keep reading it again n again

Virat was just lawajab

The way he gave back to everyone

Pakhi ko do chaar aur bhi suna deta 🤣🤣🤣

Now I just can't wait for their ice cream date

Please write something like they are feeding eachother

Aankhein taras rahe hai us dinner ke liye


Your comment brought such a big smile to my face 😃

I am a Mauritian actually. I have no link to India in whatsoever way 😆 So whenever I have been there or anyone I know goes there, all I ask is for India's Kaju Katli 😛 Wohi bhejdo 😂


Virat Sir i recording dinner pe hi atka hai 😂 will need to arrange for something 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

“Bade bhai ki biwi hain, toh bade bhai ki biwi banke rahe. Meri biwi ban ne ki koshish na kare,”


Loved this line....👏👏👏

Nicely developed story...😊❤️

Loved it 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zahra15


Your comment brought such a big smile to my face 😃

I am a Mauritian actually. I have no link to India in whatsoever way 😆 So whenever I have been there or anyone I know goes there, all I ask is for India's Kaju Katli 😛 Wohi bhejdo 😂


Virat Sir i recording dinner pe hi atka hai 😂 will need to arrange for something 😉

Mauritian hoke itna acha hindi ??????

Vahan hindi boli jaati hai???

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

How I wish we can see something like this in serial, Virat confronting his family with everything, or even better shift to the headquarters but drama to zaroori hai! 😕

Though, I loved this part. Their convo, finally sorting out and that sudden ice cream ques was soo cute and finally addressing the family and leaving the house. Apt story it was. All the best writer, keep up the good work. ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Mauritian hoke itna acha hindi ??????

Vahan hindi boli jaati hai???


It's not spoken but it's taught in school as one of the options in Asian Languages. Hindi, Tamil, Telegu, Marathi, Arabic ya Urdu.


I took Urdu. Studied for nearly 11 years. And then effect of bollywood movies and serials. With time, my urdu got mixed with Hindi 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
#70

The last para was the best!!!

"Main khud usse iss ghar mein wapas nahi laaoonga Kaku,” he told them. “Main kal se police head-quarters shift kar raha hoon, apni biwi ke saath.” He announced and stomped off, not wanting to hear any further comments."



How I wish he does that in the show itself... It's more of a practical choice to maintain relationship with lil distance than to force it an make it ugly by staying togather..


Happy writing!!!

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