SaiRat OS: We met to always be together, forever - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

It was really nice for starting....

Just change the heading from OS to SS if you are considering to continue the story....

Other than that it was really nice...šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘

Keep writing...šŸ˜Šā¤ļøšŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
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what a lovely start to their journey of love! and our story lolz :P
and intentional lines...mujhe toh bahut maza aya padke!
will be waiting for another update!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Nice start

Kya entry maari virat ne...hero wali

And sai's dialogue...aapki wajah se main so nahi patišŸ˜†

Keep writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very nice start... 😃

"Aapki wajah se main so nahi pati hu"šŸ˜†

I wonder how Virat will take this at first and later how this statement is gonna be true in their case 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely.

Love the "how come our manzil is same" line.

Please continue.

Would love to read more

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