It was really nice for starting....
Just change the heading from OS to SS if you are considering to continue the story....
Other than that it was really nice...👍🏼👏
Keep writing...😊❤️🤗
It was really nice for starting....
Just change the heading from OS to SS if you are considering to continue the story....
Other than that it was really nice...👍🏼👏
Keep writing...😊❤️🤗
what a lovely start to their journey of love! and our story lolz :P
and intentional lines...mujhe toh bahut maza aya padke!
will be waiting for another update!
Nice start
Kya entry maari virat ne...hero wali
And sai's dialogue...aapki wajah se main so nahi pati😆
Keep writing
Very nice start... 😃
"Aapki wajah se main so nahi pati hu"😆
I wonder how Virat will take this at first and later how this statement is gonna be true in their case 😁
Lovely.
Love the "how come our manzil is same" line.
Please continue.
Would love to read more