Yayyyyyy!! You finally completed it 🥳
This is such a beautiful OS, tugging on the heart strings and making you look at the multifaceted characters like Sai and Virat so much more clearly and deeply! Thanks for this marvellous piece! ❤️
Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh
Kesuuuuuu🤗🤗
HOW wonderful was this!
My favorite part first, PPL outta the window so royally 🤣😎
Uber cool!😛
And then. This was so soft and smooth and delicious ☺️
Their comfort, their banter their understanding! Gorgeous isn't it 😳
Sai was brilllls and so was him. Itna concern and attachment
I can imagine this 😭
So beautiful.
P.S. Cheesy pick up line kidhar hai?🤣🤪
I totally thought it was coming! Hahahahahahaha.
P.P.S. You wouldn't believe but I thought of this Midnight coffee plot today itself, thank god didn't start penning it down 😆
Muaaaaaah,
Cheers.
The cheesy pick up line would have ruined the mood😆
Oh please do write about this Midnight coffee plot. I'm sure you'll bring your own colours into that❤️
Originally posted by: columbia
Really enjoyed reading this OS. I have a quick question though- what was your thinking behind having emotions in parenthetical bold wording in between scenes? Like longing, amusement, concern?! I was curious why you had them- were they prompts or were you trying to show all these emotions between them? Thanks again for sharing your work.
The words in Parenthèse were Sai trying to decipher what Virat was feeling in that moment.
My bad, I wrote in a way that evoked confusions. I'll do better next time❤️
Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown
Wow... wow... wow... Just WOW!!👏
This is such a beautiful OS. So light-hearted, yet so endearing.
This OS is truly a stressbuster Keshni!!! Thank you for giving us this gem!
I could literally feel every emotion in this. Those moments where Virat enjoys the silence between them, and them understand each other just through their tone, this things are just so SaiRat. I feel that after their relationship progresses, I can totally picture it being exactly this!
You dark horse!! Why don't you give us more kohinoors like this?? Is this your first SaiRat OS?? Me wants more now!
I was so engrossed in reading this, when I realised that it got over too soon. Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii! I definitely wanna read more! I wish my writing was half as good as yours😭
Please hit us with another OS soon, or maybe even an FF❤️
#keshniwritemore
Love,
Niya🤗
It is indeed the first of more to come, hopefully.😆
Maybe OS' for I have a phobia of FFs😆
Hey guys, thank you all for your heartwarming responses😳
I'm overwhelmed at the love❤️
Beautiful and surreal!
Loved the whole piece but the end took my heart! It did. Totally Virat. He would never bring up that fateful shootout at such a moment. Jagtap instead
I can't express in words the warmth that has swept me over after reading this. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Aye..
BG mein Lag Ja Gale,and them having Coffee,such a perfect combo.. 👏
Loved the SaiRat moments.
Eeeeeeksss...
Heart wants the second part of this story,if its possible for you.
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