SaiRat OS: Stolen Moments - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Kesuuuuuu🤗🤗


HOW wonderful was this!

My favorite part first, PPL outta the window so royally 🤣😎

Uber cool!😛

And then. This was so soft and smooth and delicious ☺️

Their comfort, their banter their understanding! Gorgeous isn't it 😳

Sai was brilllls and so was him. Itna concern and attachment

I can imagine this 😭

So beautiful.


P.S. Cheesy pick up line kidhar hai?🤣🤪

I totally thought it was coming! Hahahahahahaha.


P.P.S. You wouldn't believe but I thought of this Midnight coffee plot today itself, thank god didn't start penning it down 😆


Muaaaaaah,

Cheers.

Edited by Mannmohanaa - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

This was really good. Please continue 😀

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is so beautifully written!

“You ordered that for me because you knew,” she said as realisation dawned.

“Tubelight"

Till this point, I was reading this like any sane person would, but this part literally made me giggle and smile like a teenager. Oh God! These mushy feelings! They have my heart. And, it's such a pleasant thing to read such light-hearted shorts, completely different from the ongoing track which can get a bit too much to take at times. Well-written. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. :)

Edited by RadhaChauhan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Keshni


Babe you definitely have your way wit words. I had to re read the story few times - it is that good.


The understanding that Sai has about missing their dinner date. The dreadful word M coming to mind for Sai. (PP please take some lessons here).


Virat disregarding Pakhi's request on his way to his room after long day at his office. As I am sure he wants to check in on his baiko - make sure she was okay.


There late night coffee date with the quintessential ambiance, music. I can just image Neil and Ayesha playing that out on silver screen. And the silent talk they do with their eyes.


Seriously you captured all the moments - my heart fluttered. Looking forward to more special stolen moments of SaiRat.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Believe me when I say this was absolutely amazing 😍

Just beautiful 🥰🥰

I loved how they both have been missing each other and had reached at a level of understanding each other...

I loved the way Virat realises that she is the only one with whom he can share his silence

You are great with words

Please do write more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Really enjoyed reading this OS. I have a quick question though- what was your thinking behind having emotions in parenthetical bold wording in between scenes? Like longing, amusement, concern?! I was curious why you had them- were they prompts or were you trying to show all these emotions between them? Thanks again for sharing your work.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awesome yaar..sometimes i feel,better i read the os of this forum whole day,rather than watching the real show.😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Believe me when I say this was absolutely amazing 😍

Just beautiful 🥰🥰

I loved how they both have been missing each other and had reached at a level of understanding each other...

I loved the way Virat realises that she is the only one with whom he can share his silence

You are great with words

Please do write more

loved this emotion...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow... wow... wow... Just WOW!!👏

This is such a beautiful OS. So light-hearted, yet so endearing.

This OS is truly a stressbuster Keshni!!! Thank you for giving us this gem!

I could literally feel every emotion in this. Those moments where Virat enjoys the silence between them, and them understand each other just through their tone, this things are just so SaiRat. I feel that after their relationship progresses, I can totally picture it being exactly this!

You dark horse!! Why don't you give us more kohinoors like this?? Is this your first SaiRat OS?? Me wants more now!

I was so engrossed in reading this, when I realised that it got over too soon. Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii! I definitely wanna read more! I wish my writing was half as good as yours😭

Please hit us with another OS soon, or maybe even an FF❤️


#keshniwritemore


Love,

Niya🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The silence speaks louder than words is well described Keshni! It was so heart warming to read their coffee date. Also I was enjoying the fact that they just wanted to spend time with each other and not necessarily talk.

It was absolutely lovely.. ❤️

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