Na koi hai na koi tha, tumhare siva! A RudhiTa Os - Page 2

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Arrey... You deserve this appreciation darling.

And the problem is not the length... The problem is that people are busy. Bohot kam log active hai forum pe iss wakt... Don't worry, soon others will read it too

Awww.. you are so sweet Akshata🤗❤️ Thank you so much for such motivating words... ❤️

Originally posted by: AARIAAL_432

Itni acchi keise likh leti hein aap

Itna sundar

Itna creative

Itna bohot kuch

Every story, every story that you wrote are different and amazingly best

MashAllah

Meri dil toh har baar thaam jaati hein har baar , jaab bhi aapki stories paarti hun

No one wrote about this formation and realization of love in Bondita's little heart before.

And Anirudh's too

MashAllah

Heyyy buddy...🤗 Yaar you are too sweet... Matlab yar... kitne dil se ki hai tareef mere write-ups ki.. ❤️ I am so overwhelmed... 🤗 Thank you so much for taking out your precious time to read my stories...and then for leaving out a beautiful comment too. It truly means a lot. ❤️🤗

You seem to have an inclination towards poetry too... Is that right?😊 The way you wrote the message and the way I perceived it gave me this inkling... 😊

Originally posted by: nims23

Hi Ayesha🤗

Awesome os ❤️❤️

It’s so amazing yaar. I don’t have words to describe how accurate you have written their emotions especially Bon’s!!! It is very true that kids get possessive for their loved ones...Ani is her entire world and her life revolve round him only.. so it is obvious for her to get possessive for him. Yes it’s not that kind of love from her side yet but love blooms from bonding and attachment only! Ani realized her true and deep feelings for him and he tackled the issue very calmly and maturely. And it’s good that Bon spilled her turmoil in front of ani otherwise it would have been disastrous for this little girl’s mind. You have written everything so well👏
I loved it 😍🤗

Nimaaa! 🤗❤️ Kaisi ho??

Thankkk you so much buddy. Itna lamba OS dou dafa padha tumne.. 😲🤗🤗 Thats soo sweet of you..seriously I am so overwhelmed. 😳😊 And I am super glad to read your beautiful comment. You are right. Kids get really possessive and eventually, they can feel jealousy too.... However, here, she just doesn't understand why her jealousy is so intense. 😊 Of course, Ani is her entire world, but she 'feels' his touch and she is very much aware that he shouldn't touch anyone else like that. Uska asal dukh shuru hi Sampoo ke tray girne ke baad aur yeh soch ker hua tha ke abh Ani usko bhi waise hi tend ker rha hoga jaise Bondu ko kia tha.. 😊 You must have noticed that she was initially not comfortable exposing her leg in front of him or to let him apply marham there...but later she let him do that- reason was: Her trust in him and how her own resolve melted when he looked in her eyes aur who dialogue maara ke meri wajeh se zakham laga hai tou mujhe hi marham lagane dou...☺️😉 Tou Bondu ko wohi cheez Sampoorna ke liye Ani kere, yeh bardasht nahi horhy thy... reason was: She did feel something special in his touch which she believes should only be hers exclusively! Thank God baad mien Ani ne usko yeh point clear ker dia tha.. 😆

Baqi tou yaar... you know how invested I am in this particular time of their life when Bondu is aware and yet unaware while Ani is fully aware of his feelings for her. Tou abhi mere ko aik sex education ke ooper bhi OS likhna hai... Ideas aarhe hain... Dekhou jaise time milta hai will write it up. 😊

How do you write so beautifully, i wish if get this track in serial too.but never mind by reading this keep Imagine it..in one word lovely..🤗

Originally posted by: pretty-oni

How do you write so beautifully, i wish if get this track in serial too.but never mind by reading this keep Imagine it..in one word lovely..🤗

Heyyy buddy! 🤗 Thank you soo much for your sweet comment. ❤️😳 I am so glad that my writing touched your heart. 😳🤗 You are very kind to comment after reading it and letting me know about your feelings. Its really motivating.. 😊❤️

I dont think I have ever interacted with you... May I know your name?😳

I see that you are a newbie.. It means you probably have a post limit for 24 hours. Haina??😳 Chalo.. reply kerna jab dil kere aur time aur comment limit ho tou. 👍🏼😊

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Nimaaa! 🤗❤️ Kaisi ho??

Thankkk you so much buddy. Itna lamba OS dou dafa padha tumne.. 😲🤗🤗 Thats soo sweet of you..seriously I am so overwhelmed. 😳😊 And I am super glad to read your beautiful comment. You are right. Kids get really possessive and eventually, they can feel jealousy too.... However, here, she just doesn't understand why her jealousy is so intense. 😊 Of course, Ani is her entire world, but she 'feels' his touch and she is very much aware that he shouldn't touch anyone else like that. Uska asal dukh shuru hi Sampoo ke tray girne ke baad aur yeh soch ker hua tha ke abh Ani usko bhi waise hi tend ker rha hoga jaise Bondu ko kia tha.. 😊 You must have noticed that she was initially not comfortable exposing her leg in front of him or to let him apply marham there...but later she let him do that- reason was: Her trust in him and how her own resolve melted when he looked in her eyes aur who dialogue maara ke meri wajeh se zakham laga hai tou mujhe hi marham lagane dou...☺️😉 Tou Bondu ko wohi cheez Sampoorna ke liye Ani kere, yeh bardasht nahi horhy thy... reason was: She did feel something special in his touch which she believes should only be hers exclusively! Thank God baad mien Ani ne usko yeh point clear ker dia tha.. 😆

Baqi tou yaar... you know how invested I am in this particular time of their life when Bondu is aware and yet unaware while Ani is fully aware of his feelings for her. Tou abhi mere ko aik sex education ke ooper bhi OS likhna hai... Ideas aarhe hain... Dekhou jaise time milta hai will write it up. 😊

M good dear.. how are you?? 🤗

The same flow and intensity should be followed in the show also.. but I know they can’t show it!! it’s natural for two people living together, bonded by marriage and emotionally dependent on each other to develop feelings for each other eventually.. ani is definitely in a tough spot being matured in their relationship... and at some point it would be difficult for him too to keep his feelings under the wrap.. because with each passing years , Bon’s curiosity would increase and so her questions.. and it will be difficult for ani to give her answers very easily like he did in this story. Please do write another story. 🤗

Originally posted by: nims23

M good dear.. how are you?? 🤗

The same flow and intensity should be followed in the show also.. but I know they can’t show it!! it’s natural for two people living together, bonded by marriage and emotionally dependent on each other to develop feelings for each other eventually.. ani is definitely in a tough spot being matured in their relationship... and at some point it would be difficult for him too to keep his feelings under the wrap.. because with each passing years , Bon’s curiosity would increase and so her questions.. and it will be difficult for ani to give her answers very easily like he did in this story. Please do write another story. 🤗

I knooow... It will be so difficult for him to keep his feelings all under the wraps.. 😳 Bechara... 😆

But I often wonder...why does he need to wrap it all up in the first place? In the show also, it should be super organic and natural, nahi?☺️ Chalo.. lets see how my next story goes about some more mature topics now which will stem from Bondu's natural curiosities. 😊

Originally posted by: Doc.love

I knooow... It will be so difficult for him to keep his feelings all under the wraps.. 😳 Bechara... 😆

But I often wonder...why does he need to wrap it all up in the first place? In the show also, it should be super organic and natural, nahi?☺️ Chalo.. lets see how my next story goes about some more mature topics now which will stem from Bondu's natural curiosities. 😊

The main thing would be ani’s acceptance of his own feelings!!! Because here we are talking about a story which happened 100 years ago in which era it was a normal norm.. right? But for ani it will be difficult since he is a London return and have never seen such marriages before!! Let’s see how this all unfolds.. but makers would just play safe and go for a leap before showing anything like this😆

Originally posted by: nims23

The main thing would be ani’s acceptance of his own feelings!!! Because here we are talking about a story which happened 100 years ago in which era it was a normal norm.. right? But for ani it will be difficult since he is a London return and have never seen such marriages before!! Let’s see how this all unfolds.. but makers would just play safe and go for a leap before showing anything like this😆

I knooowww... and I am soo not looking forward to a leap. I really like Aurra and Pravisht's sweet bond... 😆😳 And they can explore a lot too during this time period. I know leap tou hoga since Bondu has to become a barrister...but I just want the makers to explore more of their bond now... 😛😆

A poet once said,

"Meri saadgi dekh, mien kia chahta hun!"

😆

Originally posted by: Doc.love

I knooowww... and I am soo not looking forward to a leap. I really like Aurra and Pravisht's sweet bond... 😆😳 And they can explore a lot too during this time period. I know leap tou hoga since Bondu has to become a barrister...but I just want the makers to explore more of their bond now... 😛😆

A poet once said,

"Meri saadgi dekh, mien kia chahta hun!"

😆

Same here.. not looking forward for a leap... because after the leap it would become a typical ITV romance !! The uniqueness would be gone.. I so like little Bon and ani’s special bond..