AshNi + OC FF: Love is all you need - Page 60

I will continue to give my analysis....may be i will start with 1st chapter....😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I will continue to give my analysis....may be i will start with 1st chapter....😳

Would be happy to read and answer 😳.

Yes I do produce my best work only when the writing flows easily, and that comes only with motivation. So I guess I will take a break 😃

Chapter 1: All the introduction you have given here, I did not pay attention to all the details as I was not clear they are very important to the story....

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Chapter 1: All the introduction you have given here, I did not pay attention to all the details as I was not clear they are very important to the story....

That chapter was written ages ago! I just wanted it to serve as an introduction to Sara, and also to form a link with Lost in Love. Did not give much thought to how important all the other details will be. As it is, I see that some of the characters I have put down in the character list like Venky, Sanju and their wives etc are hardly going to play a role in this fic. Instead I should have focused on Samir and other characters...

Chapter 2: Here I got the information that Sara is relieved and getting away from Ian.....

Here I got a question, why Ian wants Sara, as per him she is not a perfect match...not as intelligent as him...may be he can boss over her or really loves her???

Chapter 2 gives detailed first meeting of Ryan and Sara....impressed again....👏

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Chapter 2: Here I got the information that Sara is relieved and getting away from Ian.....

Here I got a question, why Ian wants Sara, as per him she is not a perfect match...not as intelligent as him...may be he can boss over her or really loves her???

I think Ian is impressed enough by her. He’s an intellectual snob remember? He won’t go for someone who isn’t intelligent. Sara is brainy academically yes but she’s also smart in an everyday kind of way, street smart as one would say and is a clear, logical thinker. She’s also clear in her mind where she wants to go career wise. Her personal life is a mess though because of her emotional core. She’s someone who’s non-confrontational and I think that also kind of explains how she fell into a relationship with Ian. For Ian Sara was someone who’s an intellectual equal, but she’s also someone who’s his junior and has things to learn. So he sees her as someone he can teach and mould. In fact, their relationship probably began that way, though I’m not getting into the details. He may have been teaching one of her classes when she was doing her graduation- he may have been a guest prof or something and he must have seen a spark in her that interested him. In any case, I think Ian is someone who likes to be listened to and has a hard time seeing things another way. Sara had to fight with him to come to India and he still doesn’t think it was a good idea.
He needs someone who will quietly accept being led, and told what to do. He’d be better off with someone like that rather than Sara who knows her mind even if she’s a little laidback when it comes to seizing the things she wants.

Chapter 2 still: Sara had become quite comfortable with Ryan so quick irrespective of his irritating introduction....😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Chapter 2 still: Sara had become quite comfortable with Ryan so quick irrespective of his irritating introduction....😳

Sara has been taken in by Ryan from the first moment she met him. She can deny it till she’s blue in the face but that’s the fact!!! 😃
And Ryan has been told from their first conversation that she’s committed to Ian, but he still can’t stop himself! Despite his principles and his ‘rule’ of not being with anyone that’s taken! 😉

Sara was dreaming of Ryan on first day....😳😆