FF: Judaai I Ch 24 - Pg 125 - Page 13

Wow wow wow👏 This Man's character is so intriguing. i don't really expected from Riddhima to join The Man's team so soon. i mean despite knowing of THE MAFIA WORLD will be different from her world still she accept the offer. i like it. this will give new arc to her character which is different from previous one riddhima who is lost now. she will evolve now.

kabir saying to AP about Riddhima to live her life😲 For what? For whatever she is needed. That's work is already done. Also, her truth is out before everyone. We don't need her anymore. Let's hope she doesn't try to plan some revenge drama on us. Even if she does, she is going to hurt very badly. i am shocked .his character is too evill but i can't imagine him saying like this even he doesn't need her. i can be wrong...he can have his motive in future but right now in this chapter the way you pen down this 3 words.... i have gut feeling that he really mean it. kuddos to you👏 This can be different arc of his character but as you are going to write down dark story so can't say anything more so i can speculate. just MY telling my feeling😆

The man knows Riddhima so well😔 i guess there might be connection between them....if he is her father i will say to VR " RUN ASAP"🤣 actually it doesn't matter he is her father or not but he protective and caring about her....so still i will say the same🤣 in future he is going to pay for sure

i think it is not rumor about machine.. The man have the machine like JARVIS OR FRIDAY... it will be interesting having technical prospect too. give it some cool name if it is true.😆lol

here you are struggling to give the apt name for THE MAN as per his character .......here i am asking name for machine's name which is really exist or not....🤣 if it is true then it will play key role in story too. 😎 you are not that kind of writer who insert any thing/any one in the story without having idea about it. Am i right OR am i right????😉
i have never read any mafia novel or story this is my first Mafia story...so i am on board for this.😛

good job. 👍🏼 take care. update soon.😊

Originally posted by: eishe10

Great update!

Thank you dear

Originally posted by: Barbiebarbie11

Sounds like a dark love story of riansh

Ridhima again going to mafia world

But who's this mysterious man🤔

Lover toh nhi ho sakta,he met Mr malik 20 years ago tab toh bache hote toh lover not possible.

I think he's her dad

Too much suspense

Update jaldi se

We dont know what it could be

But yes, dark mafia story for sure

Right now I'm establishing the characters and the entry

But yes. It will turn more darker for sure

Relation with man, lets see what he would turn out

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Loved this chappy. Please continue soon

Thank you dear 😃

Tomorrow will be next update

Originally posted by: monty22

Wow wow wow👏 This Man's character is so intriguing. i don't really expected from Riddhima to join The Man's team so soon. i mean despite knowing of THE MAFIA WORLD will be different from her world still she accept the offer. i like it. this will give new arc to her character which is different from previous one riddhima who is lost now. she will evolve now.

kabir saying to AP about Riddhima to live her life😲 For what? For whatever she is needed. That's work is already done. Also, her truth is out before everyone. We don't need her anymore. Let's hope she doesn't try to plan some revenge drama on us. Even if she does, she is going to hurt very badly. i am shocked .his character is too evill but i can't imagine him saying like this even he doesn't need her. i can be wrong...he can have his motive in future but right now in this chapter the way you pen down this 3 words.... i have gut feeling that he really mean it. kuddos to you👏 This can be different arc of his character but as you are going to write down dark story so can't say anything more so i can speculate. just MY telling my feeling😆

The man knows Riddhima so well😔 i guess there might be connection between them....if he is her father i will say to VR " RUN ASAP"🤣 actually it doesn't matter he is her father or not but he protective and caring about her....so still i will say the same🤣 in future he is going to pay for sure

i think it is not rumor about machine.. The man have the machine like JARVIS OR FRIDAY... it will be interesting having technical prospect too. give it some cool name if it is true.😆lol

here you are struggling to give the apt name for THE MAN as per his character .......here i am asking name for machine's name which is really exist or not....🤣 if it is true then it will play key role in story too. 😎 you are not that kind of writer who insert any thing/any one in the story without having idea about it. Am i right OR am i right????😉
i have never read any mafia novel or story this is my first Mafia story...so i am on board for this.😛

good job. 👍🏼 take care. update soon.😊

Thank you so much for the warm comment dear

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Now what relation they share, stay tuned dear

Here, well only Ridhima knows his name 😉😉😉😉

Machine, of course it has name

It will reveal later

However, none has seen it, so no one knows the name

But the user knows

I would say I'm not running Mafia 😀😀😀

So I'm too trying to take reference from shows and books ... making sure to present the darkest story

I loooooooovee it

Vansh my boy be ready but Kabbu even though i liked you here for a moment when you said let Riddhu live her life but i won't forget it was you and your mommy who started all this so BAJAOING BAND KA SHRI GANESH should be done from you and your mateshwari and i'll be waiting for it Abhyu baby I am sure you won't disappoint

Also I am waiting to know more about the other characters along with The Man. Let's see how Vansh will get to know the truth and realize his mistake. Riddhima is also going to evolve as a character waiting to see how you go ahead with her character.😊

Besides that if you like I am up for discussion for this story I mean when i am stuck with something or confused for when I write for Broken discussing with you does help. 😊 So if you want to or ever feel like having a season I am always there though you are better at it unlike me things come easy to you😆

Waiting for next one.😊

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

I loooooooovee it

Vansh my boy be ready but Kabbu even though i liked you here for a moment when you said let Riddhu live her life but i won't forget it was you and your mommy who started all this so BAJAOING BAND KA SHRI GANESH should be done from you and your mateshwari and i'll be waiting for it Abhyu baby I am sure you won't disappoint

Also I am waiting to know more about the other characters along with The Man. Let's see how Vansh will get to know the truth and realize his mistake. Riddhima is also going to evolve as a character waiting to see how you go ahead with her character.😊

Besides that if you like I am up for discussion for this story I mean when i am stuck with something or confused for when I write for Broken discussing with you does help. 😊 So if you want to or ever feel like having a season I am always there though you are better at it unlike me things come easy to you😆

Waiting for next one.😊

I didn't thought you would follow this dear

Thank you ❤️

Right now establishing the characters

The story picks in coming chapters

Of course dear, if needed help, the first person I knock is you only for the brainstorming

Thanks for lending hand dear ❤️🙂🤗

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

I didn't thought you would follow this dear

Thank you ❤️

Right now establishing the characters

The story picks in coming chapters

Of course dear, if needed help, the first person I knock is you only for the brainstorming

Thanks for lending hand dear ❤️🙂🤗

I do follow your story it's just that often get stuck to comment on it though i do read your stuff let me tell you and love them as always❤️🤗😊

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

I do follow your story it's just that often get stuck to comment on it though i do read your stuff let me tell you and love them as always❤️🤗😊

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

We dont know what it could be

But yes, dark mafia story for sure

Right now I'm establishing the characters and the entry

But yes. It will turn more darker for sure

Relation with man, lets see what he would turn out

Dark mafia story ? Why not dark love story

I know you won't separate riansh😉

Itna I trust you😆