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This was so good
I wish it to happen in the show too at some point
The level of intimacy you show every time in your writings is cherry on the cake
Do write more
Will be waiting more from u
This was really good ๐๐ป
Do write more
OMG
I just loved loved and loved it
And I just love the way you pen and write so that the story always moves in a flow
Although for one, I wouldn't mind at all reading about how the desperation of Chavan Saheb increased over time for Sai.
And please can you write another one on a jealous/angry Virat. Something related to Sai not answering back to Pakhi.
One last request, can I ask for another steamy OS/SS/FF.
Hayee!!!
This was so cute and beautiful.
Awwwieee...
Sai Virat gonna become Mumma Baba..
Kisi ki nazar na lage dono ko..
Loved how you portrayed and described their intimacy.
Do write more.
Its a great piece of work. I wanna see mast mast Kaku expression.
Res๐/Unresed
Wow! Wow! Wow!
This is such an amazing OS๐ You are just so talented babe! I loved the way you penned down Virat's restlessness and Sai's understanding of it!
To be honest, this is exactly how I pictured their relationship to be, once they are past this majboori/zimmedari drama!
And pregnant SaiRatโค๏ธ Soooooooooo cute!!!!
You are brilliant writer and it would be lovely if you wrote a part 2, maybe consisting of her pregnancy cravings and Virat listening to all of it๐
Love,
Niya๐ค
Originally posted by: minammaThis was so good
I wish it to happen in the show too at some point
The level of intimacy you show every time in your writings is cherry on the cake
Do write more
Will be waiting more from u
I just feel that Sai and Virat is so perfect for each other. and honestly, their age gap is so much of a turn on for me! I can relate that with my personal life.
and I love reading long comments like this.
Keep inspiring me. I may write more, who knows? ๐
Originally posted by: MeetPremeerOMG
I just loved loved and loved it
And I just love the way you pen and write so that the story always moves in a flow
Although for one, I wouldn't mind at all reading about how the desperation of Chavan Saheb increased over time for Sai.
And please can you write another one on a jealous/angry Virat. Something related to Sai not answering back to Pakhi.
One last request, can I ask for another steamy OS/SS/FF.
I just loved loved and loved it
And I just love the way you pen and write so that the story always moves in a flow.
I am not sure if I'm really able to do it ir not. But believe me, I just keep writing. I don't sit back and plan for a story. A scenario just pops up and I just keep writing! Hell, I don't even proof read!
Although for one, I wouldn't mind at all reading about how the desperation of Chavan Saheb increased over time for Sai.
Unexplained things has it's own beauty. I left that to your imaginations.
And please can you write another one on a jealous/angry Virat. Something related to Sai not answering back to Pakhi.
Oh man I feel nervous when I get scenario request like this. I always feel like I can not meet up the expectation level. Please spare me meri ma!
One last request, can I ask for another steamy OS/SS/FF.
Dil maange more, huh? You naughty!
lol! I don't know, not sure, if anything pops up in my dark mode of the night, then sure why not! ๐
Originally posted by: Anika_PreRishHayee!!!
This was so cute and beautiful.
Awwwieee...
Sai Virat gonna become Mumma Baba..
Kisi ki nazar na lage dono ko..
Loved how you portrayed and described their intimacy.
Do write more.
Oh I so much want to see some intimacy in the show! I'm craving for it!
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