SaiRat OS: Hold Me - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ada@28

actually i cannot explain how much i loved it..... can you just start an ff of this..... this was awesome manh........my words fall short to explain my happiness....... please do try an ff.....pleaseeeeeeeeee

Man... writing a ff and keeping readers captivated needs damn of a skill which I don't have. I guess FF is not my forte. I might write something more sh*tty! lol!

May be it's better to keep it simple and just leave it on my mood!

Happy reading! cheers!

Originally posted by: tlamisa

Love the way you wrote about the insecurity in Virat’s eyes and how Sai understood him without speaking. it’s so much like their relationship in the show!

and the last part with the junior Chavan Saheb haha, so unexpected but cute!

Please write more, you pen the emotions so good!

Thanks for liking it!

Such a wonderful story 👍🏼

Wow....Superb os

The intimacy between the couple was so beautifully described.....

Loved every bit of it....

I could literally imagine Sai and Virat I'm this scene while reading.....

They both are intense and emotional people.....

If love would happen between the two....I expect it to be possessive and gripping!!!

Really want this to happen in the serial before it's ending.....

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Wow....Superb os

The intimacy between the couple was so beautifully described.....

Loved every bit of it....

I could literally imagine Sai and Virat I'm this scene while reading.....

They both are intense and emotional people.....

If love would happen between the two....I expect it to be possessive and gripping!!!

Really want this to happen in the serial before it's ending.....

I really don't want to seeee the hindi version copy oadte of the Bengali version. Seriously. SaiRat couple has sooo much potential! I really wantt the hindi version to be diffetent.

and thanks for liking it!

Hey!!! I don't know you're active now or not. Just wanted to tell you you're such an amazing writer!! Totally loved all your OSes written on Sairat, you really write in a realistic way, how a man and wife behaves normally.. would love to read more from you. <3