Akdha FF ~| Twist In Fate |~ - Page 13

Originally posted by: Mavi_16_2

With all due respect, i want to ask something...

Story is so confusing. Is it of modern era or a historical one. In first chapter u mentioned her as a princess and in 2 chapter u mentioned about railway station. It's bit confusing

Please can u clear the doubt

But suspense is killing me about her lover

"She had change it into modern one as that's suits better than historic"!.

Originally posted by: James12

what the hell... chap 2 🤐

yess 😆

Originally posted by: Mavi_16_2

With all due respect, i want to ask something...

Story is so confusing. Is it of modern era or a historical one. In first chapter u mentioned her as a princess and in 2 chapter u mentioned about railway station. It's bit confusing

Please can u clear the doubt

But suspense is killing me about her lover

it was a historical FF ... but i thought that, modern JJ suits well on this plot! so i have converted it to modern😊

Loved it Sayani & Mahira

Awesome & emotional update

Poor Jodha is in a very bad condition & her pregnancy added more fuel to it

That jerk showed right time that he is a creep 😡😡 some people cannot change

Poor Girl what she will do now 😞

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Thx dii🤗🤗

You are most welcome🙂🙂

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Sayani & Mahira

Awesome & emotional update

Poor Jodha is in a very bad condition & her pregnancy added more fuel to it

That jerk showed right time that he is a creep 😡😡 some people cannot change

Poor Girl what she will do now 😞

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

Thank u 😊

"Betrayal by one she loved"!

"Abandoned by loved ones"!

"No roof, no money"!

"Out in World full of predators!

"One wrong move and you become prey"!.

"Then there's little life depended on her for it's own life mean world to her"!.

"Emotionally down, Physically Exhausted, mentally drained"!.

"The two chapter gave insight to Plight of Girl who is Female Protagonist of story"!.

"Hira I wonder with all the schedule you have how you come up with this plot"?.🤓

"Sayani how you become victim of this 😆 seriously I wonder what you get in mind when you're about to update this 😊

Though the chap 2 was way to small but i think the story is very predictable for us"!.😳

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

yess 😆

This was 🤓

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

it was a historical FF ... but i thought that, modern JJ suits well on this plot! so i have converted it to modern😊

🤔🤔 You?

I thought it's Sayani

Originally posted by: Mavi_16_2

🤔🤔 You?

I thought it's Sayani

It is written by Mahira and posted by me