Rudhita Song OS: Padh Le Mai Teri Kitaab Hun- Bonus Update- Pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Beautifully written, the surprise at the end was☺️

My Hindi is not very good but I could follow the story, how sweet it is to have someone who understands you

The innocent 😇 of both is so realistic that you could believe that was happening in front of your 👀.

Please continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Rimi🤗

I like this song and you made a complete different story of ruditha using this👏

It's not at all about the tune but the lines and scenes perfectly compliment reach other❤️

I liked bon caressing sleeping ani

Please try more song OS okay😳

What happened after ani opened his eyes?😳I'm eager to know.....

Was ani pretending to sleep all thses while?😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Thanks a lot dear 🤗

Idk if i can add another chapter to it 😆 Sochna pdega 🤪

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Mayurrana1299g

Such a beautiful and fairytale vibes story

Love to read it

Thank you so much 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: HahaHeheHuhu9


Hi! Most welcome, and thank you for posting here!


Yeah true 🤣🤣


I'm Hira :)

Hi Hira 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: T-Scarlett

Oye RiMi..Cliffhanger par kyun hume chod diya😲

Chalo yeh sab baad mei dekhte hai..Now coming to the OS..It was simple yet so beautiful and ethereal RiMi...The story blended perfectly with the song..

It has always been a pleasure to read Bon's feelings for Ani..I hope he reciprocates the same with much more intensity..

I loved the part where Bon spends her time caressing Ani when he's asleep...❤️

I'm excited to know how will Ani react to her chori chori chupke chupke waala pyaar..

Agar Dobara Cliffhanger par choda na to I won't comment on your OS, shotti😛

Waiting for the next part..

Plz update soonish..


I love cliffhangers scarlett 😳 aur ise tum apne puraane paapo ka nateeja bhi samajh sakti ho 😳


Thanks a lot 🤗 Ani ka reaction guess karo kya hoga 😉


I haven't even thought of writing another part to this yet 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: screen22

Beautifully written, the surprise at the end was☺️

My Hindi is not very good but I could follow the story, how sweet it is to have someone who understands you

The innocent 😇 of both is so realistic that you could believe that was happening in front of your 👀.

Please continue


Thanks for reading dear.. glad you could follow the story well 🤗

I'll try to continue but I haven't thought of it yet 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Rimi🤗

I like this song and you made a complete different story of ruditha using this👏

It's not at all about the tune but the lines and scenes perfectly compliment reach other❤️

I liked bon caressing sleeping ani

Please try more song OS okay😳

What happened after ani opened his eyes?😳I'm eager to know.....

Was ani pretending to sleep all thses while?😉

Krish 🤗


Me too love this song 😳

I loved the lyrics of this song more than the tune tbh, the lyrics are just wow..! and it suited Rudi a lot


@Bold - maybe 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..


I love cliffhangers scarlett 😳 aur ise tum apne puraane paapo ka nateeja bhi samajh sakti ho 😳


Thanks a lot 🤗 Ani ka reaction guess karo kya hoga 😉


I haven't even thought of writing another part to this yet 😆

@bold Maine us din sach kaha tha aur Sach hamesha kadva hota hai RiMi...😆

Just kidding..😛

@red He might be pretending to sleep all this while..🤪Phir pata nahi, jo tum dikhaogi wahi hoga..😆

@Ul-I know you will be updating the next part in a day or two..😉


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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: T-Scarlett

@bold Maine us din sach kaha tha aur Sach hamesha kadva hota hai RiMi...😆

Just kidding..😛

@red He might be pretending to sleep all this while..🤪Phir pata nahi, jo tum dikhaogi wahi hoga..😆

@Ul-I know you will be updating the next part in a day or two..😉


🤪 I don't want to write this another 16+ part 🤣 mai badnaam ho jaungi 🤣 Even if i TRY to continue it, mera dimaag kuchh kachra karva dega 🤪

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