Rudhita Song OS: Padh Le Mai Teri Kitaab Hun- Bonus Update- Pg 8 - Page 9

Originally posted by: T-Scarlett

Unres kar diya

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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

It was my pleasure to write this Scarlett

I am so glad that u liked it 🤗

I wanted to keep it simple yet romantic ☺️ isiliye 4 din sirf sochne me lage 🤪🤣

My next OS 😉 coming soon...🤪

Waiting❤️

Absolute bliss 😍 ab jake this short story got a complete end. I understand it was an OS, but the cliffhanger actually didn't go well earlier 🤭. Now that you have added an apt bonus chapter, it really gave a satisfaction of reading to me. Bohut hi pyara.

So all you'll get is appreciation 🤗 and applauses👏 and no tamatar 😉

Originally posted by: Soma84

Absolute bliss 😍 ab jake this short story got a complete end. I understand it was an OS, but the cliffhanger actually didn't go well earlier 🤭. Now that you have added an apt bonus chapter, it really gave a satisfaction of reading to me. Bohut hi pyara.

So all you'll get is appreciation 🤗 and applauses👏 and no tamatar 😉

Cliffhangers are always there for a purpose Soma 😳 😉

Although i hadn't planned for this chapter but I wanted to know if people wanted to read more 😆 Cliffhangers are kind of painful and when the pain gets relived it's a different kind of happiness 🤪 Abb socho ye OS me hi added hota toh itna maza nai aata na padhke 😉

Glad u loved it behen 🤗

Tum sabke support se hi I'm improving 🤗

beyond amaaazing it was!

This os is also amazing dear 👏

Di aapki writings mujhe itna khusi deti hain ki now I have written a shayari on you so I hope you'll like it 😳

"Achhe se pehchante nehi aapko

Par aapke likhawat se aapki kabiliyat prakasit hota hai,

Hamare dil par aap kaabu paa chuki hain

Aur aapke kaabu mein aana hamare liye uchit hota hai.

Shabdon se kuch is tarah khelti hain aap

Ush khel mein hi dil jit jaate hain aap

Aap ki likhawaton ka intezaar nehi kar pate hain hum

Par phir bhi intezaar karwaate hain aap."

❤️🤗

Rimi 🤗❤️

How did I miss this?😒

Read both parts.. it’s so so beautifully written Rimi I don’t have words to described how much I loved it ❤️

Their love is blossoming and both are new to these feelings !! You have described Bon’s feelings, her feelings of first love really well.. Ani knew about her daily activity and pretended to sleep.. poor girl was in a big surprise.. ani’s feelings, his shyness everything made the second part sensuous yet classy!!!and that’s what I love the most about your stories-it never makes you uncomfortable to read!! Rimi my dear, how to tell you how much I am in love with your writing (you can consider yourself too😆❤️)

Thank god I found this awesome piece of work thanks to the member who posted her reply today in this thread !!
Just beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️