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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's the day of Navratri Bani is busy in decorating the house even though cheels are least interested in this..for her she has to celebrate the festival irrespective of where she is and veer agreed as for him the most important thing is to see a smile on her face.

Bani decorates everything and sees that some 2 to 3 baskets with flowers is lying on the floor.

She carries those all at once and takes them with her on the way she collides with veer and all the flower falls on.

Veer: kya bath hai gharwali pati ka swagath phoolon se kar rahi ho.. aaj ka din kuch khas hai ?

Bani: says it was by mistake...

Veer : he tells her that she is being rude.

Bani ignores him and walks on the other direction as if she did not heard him..Bani remembers an fb that was prior to this scene

Fb:

Veer discloses his cheel form and informs them that he was the one who saved those kids.

Jai on the other hand talking mayuri did not heard about this confession.

He speaks to bani and ask her to make it quick and take him to place where there are many snakes and mines inorder to kill him.

Bani gets shocked as she was not expecting this from jai.

She do not want to kill veer unless she speaks to jai.

As she need to understand why jai still wants to kill veer.

She just throws her earrings

Veer sees this

Veer: kyun pheka tumhe toh bahuth pasand tha..maine kithne bar bola uthar do..

Bani: mujhe bhari lag rahe the toh phek diya..

Veer: bhari lag rahe toh car main rakh Dethi pheka kyun

Veer asks her chalo chalthe hai phir..

Bani turns back to leave veer picks up those earrings and keep those in his pocket.

Jai on the other hand gets irritated as bani seems to be not responding and forgots to remove those rings from his hand.

Suddenly bani drops a message to jai

'Jai I know you are angry..Sorry I fell down in the jungle due to which I lost those earrings .I want to meet you tonight."

Jai replies back saying that he will come to her house in disguise.

Fb ends....

Jai enteres the house as sardarji.

Balwant welcomes all the guest... Bani has already well dressed but she is facing some difficulty while fixing her hair..

She tries to untangle her hair it's getting tangled again and again..

Veer sees this ..

Veer:chodo main help kartha hoon..

He identifies that her hai is entangled in her mangalsootra...he tries to untangle it with some force and mangalsootra gets cut in a half.

Bani starts collecting all the beads in hurry ..

Veer : sorry bani .

Bani: Aise kaun mangalsootra thodta hai.. ye suhag ki nishani hai.. ye apshagun mana jatha hai..

Veer: tum toh mujhe suhag manthi hi nahi ho

Bani: toh kya?

Veer: ithna lagao kyun..tumhe toh iss shadi se koi mathlab nahi hai..and turns face towards mirror.

Bani goes outside by wearing a necklace and sindhoor..

Veer observes her

Those words made her to rethink of her decision on killing veer.she is scared for veer. She has seen all goodness in him..he has saved her in her childhood how can she just kill him.. everyone deserves a 2nd chance in life.

But this decision should be taken infront of jai as he is also victim of aakesh's plan.

She goes to jai who just messaged her that he is in lobby.

Here in the room veer take off those earrings from his pocket and holds it.

He observes he could hear some voices from it.

He keeps those earrings near his ear.

Bani: Jai hum veer ko nahi maar sakthe..

Jai: mathlab

Bani: veer ne mujhe aur tumhe uss plane crash se bachaya hai...

Jai: kya tum pagal ho gayi ho..veer kuch bhi bolega aur tum man logi..

Bani : main aaj bhi sochthi hun jai ke mera bachna namumkin tha uss plane crash se.. ye ek miracle hi tha aur ye veer ke wajah se hua hai..

Jai: achha madam tum ye kyun nahi kehthi tumhe usse pyar hua hai..

Bani: Jai!zaban sambhal ke..bhoolo math main kaun hoon. Veer ne hume chot zaroor diya hai but woh sirf bachane ke liye.. usne hum par kabhi hamla nahi kiya hai...yad rakhna..

Jai: theek hai bani..toh hum veer ko nahi marenge..kush!?

Bani gets calm and she thinks everything is sorted.

Bani: chalo phir main nikalthi hun..

Veer keeps the earrings in his pocket. He feels happy that bani likes his nature and feels happy he could save bani..He still confused about the revenge that they are discussing about but thinks may be it's because he forcefully married to bani...

Bani goes to the venue and veer sees her.He gets happy that she respects him for his nature.she understand s that she is not bad..

It's time for garba...

Veer asks bani to join him for garba.. chogada plays in bg they both dance and they are so into dancing they forgot that jai is watching them..

Jai gets irritated

Bani's statement about veer hurting them flashes into his mind..

Jai : toh iska mathlab main veer pe hamla kar sakta hun..

He makes a quick plan ...

He turns of main power switch and light goes off..

He pulls bani and lock her in a room.

Bani thinks it's veer..

Jai takes Bani's roop and veer starts dancing with jai..suddenly jai acts like he is shy and runs from the hall..veer follows her to know what's wrong.

Bani watches this from window..

She sees herself with veer. She is shocked as well worried.

Bani(j): veer tumhe patha hai main bahuth din se tumhe kuch kehna chahti thi..

Veer: kya ? And comes closer and stands behind her

Bani(j) : wo...she turns back and attacks with a knife..

Veer screams in pain but no one can hear due to loud music..

Bani sees this from the window..

Her heart does not want to believe that it's jai but it's clearly visible that it's jai..

In order to get out she breaks the window..

She comes out...

Bani(j): main yeh kehna chahthi thi ki tumhara marna nischay tha..

Veer is shocked...

Bani(j): che che veer tum aise hi nahi mar sakthe and pressea his wounds and he screms in pain..

Tumhe main apna asli roop dikhangungi phir tum aram se mar sakthe ho...dekhoge mera roop?

Veer: mathlab

Veer still think s this cannot be bani

Bani(j): toh dekho..she turns into a huge red snake with half human form

...kaisa laga mera roop..

Veer gets shocked...

Bani(j) : roop dekhliya ab tumhari marne ki baari...he was about to bite veer...

Bani : Tumhari himmat kaise hui veer ko hath lagane ki..

Bani(j): main dargayi...tum kaun ho mere roop leke kyun ayi ho...

Bani: Chup.. Kaun ho tum mere samne aao..

Bani(j): aur tumhe kyun lagtha hai main tumhe mera asli roop dikhaungi...

Bani: Kyunki main "Sarvasrest Adinagin" tumhe hukum dethi hai tum apne asli roop mein aao...

Veer gets shocked.. his bani is sarvsrest adi nahin who is the actual threat to his life is saving his life..

He is not sure how to react..

Bani(j) : agar maine tumhara hukum nahi maana toh kya kar logi..

Bani: tho ladne ke liya taiyyar ho jao...

Bani takes her naagin form with 5 blue hoods in the back.

She throws fire ball to jai..

Jai on the other hand tries all his powers but it's still less and he gets hit by bani..

He falls down

Veer is still in shock..he hats nagins.. he loves bani..now he is cofused whether to hate bani or to love all naaginsšŸ˜‚

Bani screams:Jai!she hold him..ye kya kiya tumne jai..tumne kaha tha hum veer ko nahi marenge phir bhi tumne uspe attack kyun kiya..

Jai in the verge of dying..

Jai: mujhe maaf karna bani..satyug se aaj thak maine tumse zyada tumhare shaktiyon se pyar kiya hai..usko paane ke chah main bahut neeche girgaya..isiliye bholenath chahthe the ki mujhe uski saza mile..

Veer hears from far trying to understand what exactly he is saying..

Bani shayad iss janam main akesh hi tumhara jeevan sathi..

Veer: who is aakesh now..😠

Bani still crying as she lost a friend..

Jai closes his eyes and his body disappears in thin air..

Bani looks at veer

Veer looks into her eyes šŸ‘€ to see if she wants to kill him..

Bani holds him.. gives him the support to stand..

Veer tum naagin kabse ho.. tumhe kab patha chala ki tum ek nagin ho shadi ke pehle ya shadi ke bad main...

He was expecting her to say shadi ke bad main as his character will not be questioned for falling for a naaginšŸ˜‚

Bani hits his stomach hard..

Veer: ouch

Bani : chup chap chaloo..

Veer : makes faces and walks with her till the room.

Bani makes him sit on the bed.. and applies ointment on his wound veer looks at her with so much love.. Kaun tujhe (ms dhoni ) plays in the background

Bani : waise toh tum bahut bade cheel banthe ho..jab jai ne tum par hamla kiya toh tumne uspe hamla kyun nahi kiya..

Veer: mujhe uski smell agayi thi bani..mujhe patha tha shayad woh jai hoga.. lekin mujhe ye nahi patha tha ki tum kaha ho.. mujhe ye nahi patha tha jai tumhare roop main kya kar raha hai.. mujhe ye nahi patha tha ki tumhare kehne ke baadh bhi jai mujhe maarna kyun chahtha tha..

Bani : toh tumhe sab patha tha??

Veer: Haan.. lekin main ye Jan ne ki koshish kar raha tha tum kaha ho.. agar main uske hamla kartha uss waqt to shayad mujhe tumhara patha kabhi nahi chalta.. maine socha what if jai ne tumhe bhi kisi pinjre main bandh kar diya ho..

Bani: what do you mean by "tumhe bhi"?

Veer:jai ne hi mujhe kidnap kiya tha..usne hi shakura ko bheja tha..

Bani starts collecting all the dots and realises it was all jai from the beginning.He betrayed her..she starts crying and veer hugs her inorder to console..

Bani: mujhe maaf kardo veer..meri wajah se ye sab hua..

Veer: koi bath nahi gharwali..I know ki tum buri nahi ho..

Bani: maine jai pe blind trust kiya..itnhi andhi kaise ho sakthi hun main..

Veer: woh toh hai tum ithne dino se aadhinagin se zyada andhi nagin thu and smirks..

Bani gets irritated and hits on his chest with her hands and hugs him tight..

Veer: breaks the hug...waise ye akesh kaun hai..

Bani: Khudhi patha lagalo tum toh intelligent ho na and laughs and leaves the room

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Veer still in room aakhir ye akesh kaun hai..jathe jathe dhabewala ye akesh ko chipka ke gaya mere sweetheart ke sath😠

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Edited by fire_wings - 5 years ago

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wooow loved it....hope it comes out like this ....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing VANIlicious OS šŸ‘

Highlight of this OS =Veer jealous of himself (Aakesh)šŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Loved the update.


Specially this line.

'Veer still in room aakhir ye akesh kaun hai..jathe jathe dhabewala ye akesh ko chipka ke gaya mere sweetheart ke sath😠'

Haha very nice

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hahahahahahaha the highlight is ab yeh Aakesh kaun hai? 🤣 🤣 🤣 I totally can imagine him.. Bani ki humsafar Aakesh! Aakesh ko toh chorunga nahi!

And yeah woh toh hai.

Aadi naagin se jyada andhi naagin jo tum šŸ˜†


Very well written dear

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aakhir ye Aakesh Kon h šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Kamse Kam Veer ko to Bata do, use to janne la haq h šŸ˜‚

Beautiful story šŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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NicešŸ‘šŸ¼... I don't expect this from jay in the episode toh yahi par hi sahišŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidya_Rajan

Wooow loved it....hope it comes out like this ....


Thank you😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andetheres

Amazing VANIlicious OS šŸ‘

Highlight of this OS =Veer jealous of himself (Aakesh)šŸ˜†

šŸ˜†Thank youšŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Loved the update.


Specially this line.

'Veer still in room aakhir ye akesh kaun hai..jathe jathe dhabewala ye akesh ko chipka ke gaya mere sweetheart ke sath😠'

Haha very nice

Thank you ā˜ŗļø

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