One shot: just wrote something for vani which is different from what was telecasted in today's epi..
I hope you guys like it. ๐Please ignore spelling mistakes and grammar as I usually do not proof read before posting..๐
Update: Made it as two shorts to cover balwant's part ๐
let me know how it was. Thank you ๐
Story starts when bani jumps from Shakura's house. And land up on trishool.
Bani tries to free herself.suddenly she hears some one walking towards her. It's none other than shakura.
Shakura starts taunting her.
Shakura:che che sweetheart aasman se giri aur trishool main atki. Ab tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega?
Bani: Bhole nath bachayenge mujhe aaj bhi unhone hi bachaya hai aur age bhi wohi bachaynege.
Shakura: Tum ithni ziddi kyun ho bani.Issi zidd pe toh main fida hoon.
Veer is standing near the cave as he is bit weak and trying to understand their connection.
Bani: Agar tumhe zinda rehna hai toh yaha se chale jao. Warna..
Shakura : warna kya ? Mar dalogi mujhe.. mar dalona tumhare haath se maut bhi acchi lagthi hai
Veer gets irritated and thinks mere patni ke hathon se hi marna hai isko..๐ Mann kartha hai abhi jaake iska mooh tod dun.. bt controls himself to know what's going on and why bani is in dulhan attire.
Shakura: chalo na sweetheart shadi karthe hai..aur kithna sathogi mujhe..
Suddenly bani falls down from the trishool as her dupatta can not take her weight anymore.
Veer gets worried for baani.
Shakura: oops tum toh mere pairon pe gir gayi abhi pathi dev man liya mujhe
Veer gets irritated.
Bani tries to leave from there as she wants to search veer.
Shakura : starts singing "Abhi na jao chod ke ye dil abhi bhara nahi" and holds her hand
Bani : hits his leg with her legs and escape
Veer feels happy wah meri sherni.
Shakura again holds her hand and asks
Shakura : kaha ja rahi ho meri jaan?
Bani : main apne pathi ko dhoondhne ja rahi hoon
Shakura : tumhara patho toh yaha hai
Bani : maine kaha main apne pathi yani veeranshu singhaniya ko dhoondhne ja rahi hun.
Shakura : off sweetheart maine kaha na ab thak toh veer he signs that veer might be dead.
Veer gets furious and bani gets worried
Bani : khabardar age kuch bhi bola toh
Shakura: toh kya
Toh main khudko jalalungi.tumse accha toh veer tha jo ladkiyon ki izzath kartha hai.usne mujhse zabardasthi shadi toh ki lekin kabhi mujpe buri nazar nahi dala. Hamesha mere opinion ki respect kartha hai.
Shakura: hogaya main veer nahi hoon main shakura hoon.
Bani: wahi toh tum veer ho hi nahi sakthe. Tum jaisa lalchi insaan maine aaj thak nahi dekha .
Shakura gets angry and he is about to slap her veer comes and holds his hands.
Veer: mujhe nahi patha thum kaun ho lekin tumhare wajah se meri sweet heart ko mujhme acchayi dikh gayi and looks at bani..
Bani looks away to avoid his gaze.
Veer: main tumhe ek akhri chance detha hoon chale jao yaha se.
Shakura: Veer singhaniya mare nahi abhi thak ๐
Veer: kaise marjaoon mujhe marne ka hak sirf mere sweetheart ke pass hai.. aire gaire rengthe hue keedon ke pass nahi( referring jai)
Shakura: tum kya sochte ho ki tum mujhe mar sakthe ho.main shakura hoo shakura.Aasman ka raja.
Veer: abe woh Raja ja apni rani aasman main hi doondh le meri neechewali ko mere pass hi rehne de.
Shakura: tu kuch zyada hi bol raha hai
Veer: tu kuch zyada hi time waste kar raha hai.main apne sweetheart se bahuth din bad mila hun kuch romantic bathe karne de..chal nikal
Shakura gets angry and attacks veer
Veer holding bani saves bani and himself from the attack and kicks shakura from behind.
Shakura comes to his real form and hits veer.
Veer don't want to show bani that he is a cheel as he is scared to loose her.
He holds cheels leg and throws it on rock.shakura falls unconsious.veer starts talking to bani
Bani : tu theektoh ho,kaha the ab thak
Veer : kyun miss kiya?
Bani : shut up veer.
Veer : waise ye kaunsa naya ashiq hai. Dhabewale ko chod diya kya? And tumhe aise kaise ye sab namoone milthe hai inse acche mujhe pyar karlo.
Before bani could say anything she sees shakura attacking from behind and while saving veer she again falls on veer.
Veer: uff sweetheart ye bhi koi romantic hone ki jagah hai..kambre mein toh tum dhabewale ko jap thi rehthi ho aaj ithna romantic..agar patha hotha ki mere 3 din gayab hojane se tum ithne romantic ho jaogi toh agar main 1 mahine gaya hua toh..
Bani: toh kya
Veer: toh.. before he could say anything he saw shakura attacking again
He uses his power without letting bani know that
As bani is focused into the conversation
Bani : toh kya veer
Veer: toh hamare bacche
Bani : bacche what rubbish
Veer again hits shakura with his magic and shakura cries in pain.and bani hears it and when she turns back she sees shakura falling down from the cliff and he is unconsious
Bani : isko kya hua?
Veer: acts innocent shayad tumhe mere sath ithna close dekh ke suicide kar liya hoga..dil jo tod diya tumne uska and he smirks
Bani : thinks is it true or veer killed him with his powers.
Bani gets up and veers signs her to give her hand .
Bani thinks since veer is weak let's help
When bani gives her hand veer again pulls it and he hugs her and tells her that he missed her...๐ And he is glad that he got one more chance to live with her.
Somewhere bani felt solace in that hug and she did not broke it either.
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