II Chahat II: Rudhita SS // Last Chapter Updated @Page 49 // - Page 33

Originally posted by: Sujz

Never unresd it though. Not complaining.

Hi.. This is the first chapter i am reading and i can say i am in madly love with your writing.

Seriously you are brilliant, i could imagine each and every line you wrote.. It has been long time since reading something i could feel myself getting so much involved in the story and feeling an emotional connect with the story and this surely is one.

I am bit busy these days but i don't think i can stop reading your work so will be surely reading the rest too..

This is just awesome, kindly update the next part soon because i just cant wait.

Ps :is there by any chance this story on wattpad.if it is can you please tell how to find it. As it will be easier to read there without skipping the pages.. 😆

I really love this story. I instantly fell in love with this story the moment i read the first chapter ❤️. And this chapter... Oh my god... I was so lost in this fictional world. I absolutely got moved by the sweet moments between batuk-somnath-bondita. My eyes literally welled up reading that emotional part. And believe me or not 😅 I was waiting for 11th chapter like crazy. I was so happy seeing the notification. N yeah... It was beautiful. Please don't keep us waiting for long for the next chapter. Eagerly waiting for the next one.

I-- I let me process it that you dedicated this chapter to me. ME. I mean I- I am rendered speechless. You don't know how much this means to me Sujz. I love you sis.

Coming to the update, this chapter is the best of Chahat. I mean the way you portrayed the bond of Som - Bondita - Batuk was simply heartwarming.

Can I give my Banu baby a hug please, my baccha your husband loves you, and only if you knew iss jhule pe sirf tumhara haq hai. Don't worry Ani will let you know soon, Pati Babu ki gold medal.

Ani, my boi, stop treading into dangerous territories just like that, wifey is pissed off, don't you get it? Ah, that's delibalerate, eh? You're such a tease (and an a+ flirt too).

Rain weigh you down, they keep you abject, still, in your place. Yet, rain is considered such a romantic notion, it waxes people poetic, the droplets cleanses the earth and everything on it, giving a fresh outlook to it.

A storm of emotions were crashing against Bondita's head, pouring down incessantly, as she gazed at the night sky, not unlike the heavy downpour outside, she was lost, a bit hopeful but greatly confused, all the emotions were crashing and pouring down all at once jumbling the poor baby up, but she didn't consider that rain is also the symbolism of a new beginning and *cough* *cough* romance.

❝In The Rain

in the rain-

darkness, the sunset

being sheathed i sit and

think of you

the holy

city which is your face

your little cheeks the streets

of smiles

your eyes half-

thrush

half-angel and your drowsy

lips where float flowers of kiss

and

there is the sweet shy pirouette

your hair

and then

your dancesong

soul. rarely-beloved

a single star is

uttered,and i

think

of you

- E. E. Cummings❞

You captured the rawness of the passion so beautifully my dearest Sujz, it was very romantic, a lovely contrast between the arousal and the way Ani controls himself, damn nice way to get a girl's hopes high, you tease.

I loved the ending of the chapter, so Ani leaves her with an conundrum and she has to decode it, hun? Don't worry our girl is just confused, but she's smart and will crack it in no time.

What can I say I'm just blown away by this update.

P.S. I love you to the moon and back.

P.P.S. Oh yes, you've to check my stories out.

P.P.P.S. Okay Subho Shashti, I forgot to wish you. Saradiar Antarik Priti O Subbechha.

Originally posted by: Sujz

Aww, thank you so much briti. Your comments are always a treat to read.

@bold I gave that name deliberately lol.

I always pictured Som (old one) as someone who may go against Ani but knew him more than himself. In my world Som will always be that brother.

Yes, this is what I want Bondita to be after leap.

@italics yes he is, he is so damn proud of his wife.

Masterpiece... I know its not but still thank you!

Thank you so much Brit. Updated.

Your updates are always a bliss to read Sujz.

I so knew it. The name was deliberate.

I get you, I won't comment on this Som though.

Same here Sujz.

It is a masterpiece.

I read your update, it's amazing.

no one wants to read :)

Originally posted by: Sujz

no one wants to read :)

You updated Chahat😲🥳

Sorry I just saw😒😆

Will read it tomorrow and comment❤️

Thanks for updating❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Sujz

no one wants to read :)

Reading the older parts to get the continuation 😳

Binge read all the parts😛

It was so intriguing and beautiful👍🏼

Plz continue asap

Lovely,update soon please