| SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 3 | : CC#3 [FD in pg. 20] - Page 38

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I like the precap. Will tell you my doubts and suggestions later.

You are doing better na shaheen?

I read your's and Prit's convo, I agree with you both... That's why I didn't wanna review wala system to bring... TBH, I too don't like it...

Kya kare bolo, pehle wala system leke aaye ya phir we Will stop this activity for some weeks??

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Oh maine fb mention nhi kiya kya. Sayad miss kar diya that was so good yaar and one more point jo mujhe thoda sa atpata laga. Pooja hates Abir too much. But pata nhi mujhe thoda jyada laga sorry matlab aisa koi reason tu baad me dikhayegi kya hate wala?

Ek to time kam upar se I am not prepared yaar. Seriously mujhe karne ka man hi nhi is time😒

@bold: Dil tod ke haste ho mera 😈😆

Arrey yaar tum log kyun confidence lose kar rahe ho... ?? TBH, ab mera bhi maan nahi ho raha hai proceed karne ko...

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Yeah agree fun thing would be more interesting for many people.

And people always want season 2 first serial

me v demand ayi thi but it would be better Agar ham kuch naya karte

But you all agreed for season 2 which is such a complex story...

TBH, Prit.. I too liked the first story so much.... It was literally fun and joyful... It took away the charm due to abrupt ending yaar..

I agree with you, we loss the charm... TBH, I am not willing to continue now...........

Originally posted by: Home786

How are you Shristi...?? I am Okay..

I read your's and Prit's convo, I agree with you both... That's why I didn't wanna review wala system to bring... TBH, I too don't like it...

Kya kare bolo, pehle wala system leke aaye ya phir we Will stop this activity for some weeks??

I am feeling much better shaheen 🤗

I don’t think we should stop it rn I want to finish this in a good note so that the readers will be satisfied and so will we.

One thing though, the review thing really does make you lose your confidence. I would love to read their reviews but at the end. If we don’t worry about the reviews then we will have more fun doing this activity. It started of as a way for us to gather up and have fun, we should keep it like that.

Now, you guys decide and tell me...

1. Should we proceed as planned..

Or

2. Should we remove this review system and proceed as early?

Or

3. Should we stop this activity for some weeks?

Or

4. Are shall we modify the story adding some fun loving elements?

Or

5. Any other opinions????? Everything is welcomed...

Originally posted by: Home786

I asked you people regarding it na...

But you all agreed for season 2 which is such a complex story...

TBH, Prit.. I too liked the first story so much.... It was literally fun and joyful... It took away the charm due to abrupt ending yaar..

I agree with you, we loss the charm... TBH, I am not willing to continue now...........

I..honestly.. don’t know what to do or tell you. I think we all need this break for now. It’s been pretty stressful for me, you, prit and I think Nitya and Krishna too.

I love this activity, but it really has lost it’s charm. I don’t known if it’s due to less participation, story, or just loss of interest but it doesn’t seem as appealing anymore.

I love you for starting this serial, I had the best memories attached with the first one. And I don’t if we will ever be able to fully get back the charm it had. Everyone seems to have forgotten about this.

After break, do you think we can try last time but with a much lighter story?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I am feeling much better shaheen 🤗

I don’t think we should stop it rn I want to finish this in a good note so that the readers will be satisfied and so will we.

One thing though, the review thing really does make you lose your confidence. I would love to read their reviews but at the end. If we don’t worry about the reviews then we will have more fun doing this activity. It started of as a way for us to gather up and have fun, we should keep it like that.

Yesss.... That's what I said that review wala thing. This will definitely lose our confidence to perform well.. In pecks of perfection we will loss the charm...

Yupp, I agree with your lost point... But I must say, Episode 3 is most love episode till date.. People are loving season 2 than season 1 because of it's sequence, potrayals, dialogues , enactments and characterisation.....

Have you read the third episode?? How was that? Flashback, breakdown, consolation.....? Most importantly, did I do justice to Abir's potrayal? Did you had some other idea regarding that scene??

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I..honestly.. don’t know what to do or tell you. I think we all need this break for now. It’s been pretty stressful for me, you, prit and I think Nitya and Krishna too.

I love this activity, but it really has lost it’s charm. I don’t known if it’s due to less participation, story, or just loss of interest but it doesn’t seem as appealing anymore.

I love you for starting this serial, I had the best memories attached with the first one. And I don’t if we will ever be able to fully get back the charm it had. Everyone seems to have forgotten about this.

After break, do you think we can try last time but with a much lighter story?

Yupp... First one was the best one... Due to some unintentional fiasco, it ended abruptly which I still feel for....

Are you telling that, we should really go on a break and discontinue this activity for now for some weeks???????????

Originally posted by: Home786

Glad to hear that you're Okay behen... I am really worried for you..

Yesss.... That's what I said that review wala thing. This will definitely lose our confidence to perform well.. In pecks of perfection we will loss the charm...

Yupp, I agree with your lost point... But I must say, Episode 3 is most love episode till date.. People are loving season 2 than season 1 because of it's sequence, potrayals, dialogues , enactments and characterisation.....

Have you read the third episode?? How was that? Flashback, breakdown, consolation.....? Most importantly, did I do justice to Abir's potrayal? Did you had some other idea regarding that scene??

I read it shaheen and it was good.

I noticed that we are keeping the posts between two characters very limited. The most we do is 4. I think we should increase it and make it seem more like dialogues than a script.

You were great as Abir. I was planning something heartfelt but now that I think about it, it is too early for that.

I am confused now. I want to continue this but also take a break.

You should ask Prit, Nitya and Krishna too for the final decision.

Originally posted by: Home786

Krishna and Nithya akka are very much excited for this activity... It's only Me, You and Prit who feel it has lost it's charm...

Yupp... First one was the best one... Due to some unintentional fiasco, it ended abruptly which I still feel for....

Are you telling that, we should really go on a break and discontinue this activity for now for some weeks???????????

Honestly, I don’t know. It all depends on you guys now.

I am happy in continuing it because of the good reviews and readers but if you guys think that we should stop, we can.