| SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 3 | : CC#3 [FD in pg. 20]

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Regards,

Shaheen.

Haaye tumlog itna shak kyun karte ho mujhpe 🤣Mai honest reviews hi de rahi 😆 and kahi ajeeb laga to wo v bataungi don't worry.

I guess I am the first who pointed Anamika and Anmol not giving childhood friends vibe 😆 to kuch bura lagega to bolungi nah par tumlog acha kar rahe to kya bolun fir mai 😳

Thank you Shrishti maata for your ashirwad jo feeka nhi jata 😆

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Haaye tumlog itna shak kyun karte ho mujhpe 🤣Mai honest reviews hi de rahi 😆 and kahi ajeeb laga to wo v bataungi don't worry.

I guess I am the first who pointed Anamika and Anmol not giving childhood friends vibe 😆 to kuch bura lagega to bolungi nah par tumlog acha kar rahe to kya bolun fir mai 😳

Thank you Shrishti maata for your ashirwad jo feeka nhi jata 😆

Arey, praise karna bhi toh kuch detail main karon 😳 that way I will get a better idea re. Hum bhi toh is compliment ke barish ka acche se lupt uthaye

Shak ke dayre main tu isliye hain kyunki kya bata, hamare dil rakhne keliye buri se buri cheez ko accha kehde hum chance nahin le sakte re.

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Woh ainwayi likh diya bas Thik se dekhegi as a writer to sirf galatiyan nazar ayengi

Uske liye writer hona zaroori hain jo main definitely nahin hoon

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Friends we have got very good feedback for first episode.

Introducing scenes are getting huge claps.

Office scene was really welcomed by everyone.

People are looking forward for more Abir and Pooja scenes.

but with some destined symbolisms.

Rajeev is loving by everyone but someone predicted that this will be negative character.

Also, people are finding it bit out of place to read English dialogues. They couldn't connect to character.

Also, small dialogues are appealing one to people rather than very long post.

Those who have read Abir's last un edited dialogue felt out of place. After editing, it's sounds good.

But still some predicted Anmol's death there.

Be careful kuttis, people are predicting even our small mistakes crucially.

Originally posted by: Home786

Scenes for tomorrow's episode:

1. It's a puja in singhania mansion and Bua gives the responsibility to Pooja.

2. Abir is also on leave today. He is also engaged in arrangements outside.

3. Pooja is struggling to hung the flowers on the walls where Abir helps her.

4. Then Aditi will drag Abir to Pooja's where she is getting ready to select her a good saree.. There's a little bit of Abir and Pooja.

5. Bua ask Pooja to take paani ka matka for puja purpose where Abir is against it.

6. Rajeev comes to Puja where Pooja and Rajeev convo doesn't go well with Abir.

7. Bua and Aditi have a cute convo.

8. Puja scene where pandit ji will ask Pooja to aarti with her husband where Abir comes front and does the aarti with her.

The episode can end with cliffhanger as why Abir did that?

Originally posted by: Home786

Is the sequence okay guys? Any suggestions??? Please do tell me....

Shaheen pls check your pm when you get time

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Shaheen pls check your pm when you get time

I checked your pm and replied too. Check and proceed.

Originally posted by: Home786

Sorry Krishna I have got nearly 127 pms so couldn't find yours at right time...

I checked your pm and replied too. Check and proceed.

Sheheen please check your pm once more😃

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Uske liye writer hona zaroori hain jo main definitely nahin hoon