| SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 3 | : CC#3 [FD in pg. 20] - Page 37

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Uske liye writer hona zaroori hain jo main definitely nahin hoon

Okay to it's time for review:

1. I loved the entry thing the lines the words the pain everything just perfect. 👍🏼

2. Bua is always bua 👍🏼but her funny self is lost somewhere which I guess will be returned on Anamika's arrival 😆 Nithya Di 👍🏼

3. Loved Pooja's pov. Shaheen you nailed it with so much depth 👏

4. Abir Singhania once again turned an arrogant business tycoon but this time with a soft corner in heart for family. Shrishti you're doing much better than last time 👍🏼

Especially the part when talking to Rajiv, you were so good❤️

5. Krish you're too good as always. You're portraying Rajiv a grey character wonderfully 👍🏼❤️

I always say you are really good at playing with words and you're just awesome as Rajiv. The mysterious character traits of Rajiv is described beautifully😳

6. I loved the way you guys introduced that girl case and that was handled amazingly.

Okay now time for complain Shaheen you're so beraham if I am not wrong tune ye sabko normal self me lane ki zimmedari Anamika ko dene ka plan kiya hai unfair 😭😭

And don't take it as a joke I am saying seriously that I am feeling nervous to perform with you all after reading all the episodes till date.

Mai pehle se hi nhi karna chahti thi ye season 2 not only because of my busy schedule but also I lacked confidence and your performances making me more nervous that I can't do it.

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Okay to it's time for review:

1. I loved the entry thing the lines the words the pain everything just perfect. 👍🏼

2. Bua is always bua 👍🏼but her funny self is lost somewhere which I guess will be returned on Anamika's arrival 😆 Nithya Di 👍🏼

3. Loved Pooja's pov. Shaheen you nailed it with so much depth 👏

4. Abir Singhania once again turned an arrogant business tycoon but this time with a soft corner in heart for family. Shrishti you're doing much better than last time 👍🏼

Especially the part when talking to Rajiv, you were so good❤️

5. Krish you're too good as always. You're portraying Rajiv a grey character wonderfully 👍🏼❤️

I always say you are really good at playing with words and you're just awesome as Rajiv. The mysterious character traits of Rajiv is described beautifully😳

6. I loved the way you guys introduced that girl case and that was handled amazingly.

Okay now time for complain Shaheen you're so beraham if I am not wrong tune ye sabko normal self me lane ki zimmedari Anamika ko dene ka plan kiya hai unfair 😭😭

And don't take it as a joke I am saying seriously that I am feeling nervous to perform with you all after reading all the episodes till date.

Mai pehle se hi nhi karna chahti thi ye season 2 not only because of my busy schedule but also I lacked confidence and your performances making me more nervous that I can't do it.

2. Firstly, once you make an entry, you will catch up with the flow for sure. So, don't get nervous and worry about that.

3 . @ U Yepp🤣.

4. Tumhare performance ke saamne hum log kuch bhi nahi hai re..

5. TBH, Anmol ki ending/flashback kaise laga tumhe??? Most importantly dialogues and script.... Anmol's last words??

Originally posted by: Home786

1. Thank you so much of the review... Your review means a lot to all of us

2. Firstly, once you make an entry, you will catch up with the flow for sure. So, don't get nervous and worry about that.

3 . @ U Yepp🤣.

4. Tumhare performance ke saamne hum log kuch bhi nahi hai re..

5. TBH, Anmol ki ending/flashback kaise laga tumhe??? Most importantly dialogues and script.... Anmol's last words??

Oh maine fb mention nhi kiya kya. Sayad miss kar diya that was so good yaar and one more point jo mujhe thoda sa atpata laga. Pooja hates Abir too much. But pata nhi mujhe thoda jyada laga sorry matlab aisa koi reason tu baad me dikhayegi kya hate wala?

Ek to time kam upar se I am not prepared yaar. Seriously mujhe karne ka man hi nhi is time😒

@bold: Dil tod ke haste ho mera 😈😆

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Oh maine fb mention nhi kiya kya. Sayad miss kar diya that was so good yaar and one more point jo mujhe thoda sa atpata laga. Pooja hates Abir too much. But pata nhi mujhe thoda jyada laga sorry matlab aisa koi reason tu baad me dikhayegi kya hate wala?

Ek to time kam upar se I am not prepared yaar. Seriously mujhe karne ka man hi nhi is time😒

@bold: Dil tod ke haste ho mera 😈😆

Prit 🤗 glad to see you here and saw your reviews too. Thank u. I tried the best I could 😳

Sach kahoon toh, pehla jaisa excitement nahin hai mujhe. After this no, I want the old charm back of serial writing activity. It wasn’t suppose to be perfect, we were all suppose to use our creativity and make the story move but now I feel a little pressured to be perfect due to the reviews. Ik I shouldn’t feel that way lekin..🤷‍♀️

I am sure you will do fine Prit 🤗 aur help ke liye hum aur super se bhi upar shaheen hain na.

Originally posted by: Home786

Shristi if you're here, then please do check the precap of coming week and tell me whether it is ok..

I like the precap. Will tell you my doubts and suggestions later.

You are doing better na shaheen?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Prit 🤗 glad to see you here and saw your reviews too. Thank u. I tried the best I could 😳

Sach kahoon toh, pehla jaisa excitement nahin hai mujhe. After this no, I want the old charm back of serial writing activity. It wasn’t suppose to be perfect, we were all suppose to use our creativity and make the story move but now I feel a little pressured to be perfect due to the reviews. Ik I shouldn’t feel that way lekin..🤷‍♀️

I am sure you will do fine Prit 🤗 aur help ke liye hum aur super se bhi upar shaheen hain na.

Shrishti 🤗Yeah you're too good yaar.

Agree yaar Shrishti that was something else, the true the full use of creativity. Yeah it's not like before. In pressure of review and being perfect it's losing the charm.

I liked the way we were free before.

Thank you yaar 🤗❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Shrishti 🤗Yeah you're too good yaar.

Agree yaar Shrishti that was something else, the true the full use of creativity. Yeah it's not like before. In pressure of review and being perfect it's losing the charm.

I liked the way we were free before.

Thank you yaar 🤗❤️❤️

We ended of at such a interesting point in the story is what saddens me! I

And also, due to the end of lockdown, barely anyone is ready to participate. But I feel ki agar hum pehle, very first serial writing se kuch similar likhengey, toh a lot of people would be ready.

This one is a bit too dark and sad, not everyone’s cup of tea. But something light hearted, fluffy romance types will definitely attract more people.

It was so fun, especially Mishti twist that she created. I was so shocked when she made that whole broken foot thing lol.

We were all so free, no worries about the scenes not going together, our dialogue and monologues being perfect.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

We ended of at such a interesting point in the story is what saddens me! I

And also, due to the end of lockdown, barely anyone is ready to participate. But I feel ki agar hum pehle, very first serial writing se kuch similar likhengey, toh a lot of people would be ready.

This one is a bit too dark and sad, not everyone’s cup of tea. But something light hearted, fluffy romance types will definitely attract more people.

It was so fun, especially Mishti twist that she created. I was so shocked when she made that whole broken foot thing lol.

We were all so free, no worries about the scenes not going together, our dialogue and monologues being perfect.

Yeah agree fun thing would be more interesting for many people.

And people always want season 2 first serial

me v demand ayi thi but it would be better Agar ham kuch naya karte

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Yeah agree fun thing would be more interesting for many people.

And people always want season 2 first serial

me v demand ayi thi but it would be better Agar ham kuch naya karte

I know, I wanted to start of with something fresh and new, something light hearted too. But I am okay with this too and I will try my best.

For the first serial, now that I think about it, I feel like it would have been better to let Yudi choose his bride. Sapna is my personal favorite lekin I would like to know who first caught his attention.

Anyways, after this ends, I honestly wanna take a break for a few weeks before coming back to this. It’s kind of stressing me out a bit, not like drastic but I get thoughts to quit it sometimes. But I don’t wanna let you guys down nor let this just hanging so I keep going.