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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi... As You entered my life, everything became complete Part 3



I dedicate this chapter to Piyali who named Gaurav-Dhara as DhaRav.

😊

Thank you Piyali for all the amazing edits,header and the banner.

🙁


Thanks a lot everyone 4 supporting me.

This TS is ending here.Plz do give a detailed comment.

Plz write your favourite scene,favourite character and why u like that character.You can even write about your favourite supporting characters.






Naveen Babu-Dhara's marriage got fixed.It was to happen in 3 days.


⭕Biting nails

Shivani tried to console her sister in law Dhara who was crying.

Shivani:I don't think you should do such a big sacrifice Dhara.

⭕Haina? Me too


Dhara:I have to do it Dhara.Otherwise Nivi di will lose her husband.I know what a wife feels when she loses her husband.I don't want Nivi di to feel the pain I am undergoing now.

⭕Aww, my sweetie

Shivani:I don't think Mohini aunty will be able to separate Anupam jiju and Nivi.I feel that he loves her a lot.So I am sure that Anupam jiju won't obey Mohini aunty.So you don't need to marry that old widower Dhara.

⭕Haaye, I so what you said proves to be true, suno dhara

Dhara was in dilemma.

Dhara:I don't know what to do.

⭕Awww, My sweetie🙃

Shivani:Just back out from marrying that old man.

⭕I like the way her words sound like she hates Mohini and Naveen

Dhara thought for a second and said:Bhabhi,can you do a favour for me?I am not allowed to go to the jail and meet Gauravji.So can you please meet him on my behalf and give him the letter I give you?

⭕Kisne allow nahi kiya? I wanna punch him/her

Shivani:Sure Dhara.

⭕Yippe

Dhara:Thank you Bhabhi.

Dhara was looking at Gaurav's pictures in her phone.Suddenly Gaurav came there screaming and laughing loudly.

⭕Haha, You found such a sweet scene for this pic but its haullicination, haina?🙁

She got startled.She turned back.She saw him laughing.

⭕Sachi hai kya? 

Gaurav:You got scared?

Dhara:Gauravji..you...

Suddenly he disappeared making her realize that it was her hallucination.She became upset.

Me too 🙁

Dhara:I miss you Gauravji.

⭕And I miss your smile 😢

Dhara visited Gaurav.Gaurav was surprised to see Shivani as they had not even talked to each other before.

⭕You mean shivani?

Shivani:I came here to hand over the letter written by Dhara for you.

⭕perfect pic

Gaurav was excited:Dhara's letter?

⭕Yup yup, padho jaldi abb time nahi hai

He took the letter from her fast.

Shivani:I need to go now.

Gaurav:Ok.Thanks for this letter.

(Please ignore the bruises on his face).

Shivani:It's ok.

Shivani walked off.

Gaurav read the letter:

How are you Gauravji?Hope you are fine there though I know that life is hard there.The situation is worse here Gauravji.Nobody wants us together as everyone still considers you as a culprit.Now all are forcing me to marry Mohini aunty's brother Naveen Babu,otherwise Mohini aunty will separate Nivi di from Anupam Jiju.Tomorrow is my wedding.Please come and stop the wedding Gauravji.I don't want to marry Naveen Babu.I love only you.Please request the ones in the jail to send you out at least for a day to save your wife from the person she does not want to marry.Pleae Gauravji...I miss you.I am waiting for you.

                                                                                                 Yours Dhara.

⭕Awww, My sweetie pie ...poor she, I love her

Reading the letter Gaurav was shocked.He was in tears.

⭕😭😭😭

The Sub Inspector Rajeev came there.

Gaurav:Sir...all are trying to get my wife married to an old man forcefully.Please let me go for a day Sir.After stopping the wedding I will return to this prison.I promise.

⭕Mujhse bhi likhwakar lelo but please jane do usse

Rajeev smiled:Not just for a day..leave this jail forever Gaurav.I myself came here to say that to you.

Woaoh 😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Gaurav was stunned:Sir!

Rajeev:It was our fault that we just arrested you on the basis of fake evidence.But we realized your innocence seeing your behaviour here.So we decided to correct our mistake by doing an enquiry.We caught the real thief.The real thief had come to your wife's house.Nobody noticed it as she was none other than Mohiniji's maid who accompanies her almost everywhere.When Mohiniji's necklace got loosened and fell down she picked it up and kept in her bag.She went and sold it to the jewellery shop and got money in return.You bought the same jewellery as those low class jewellery sellers kept it for sale without even thinking how that poor lady got such a costly necklace.Unfortunately you bought it and Mohiniji mistook you for her thief.You are free from now onwards.But before that there are some formalities.You can leave tomorrow.

⭕Oh...thankfully, they are such good inspectors but I misunderstood Moh For this...am sorry Moh but only for this( I just Love Komo's way of saying) 

⭕His as inspector, waoh...You reminded me of my AbhIka...Mimi😢

Gaurav was surprised and extremely happy.

Dhara was crying thinking of her upcoming wedding with Naveen Babu.Suddenly she saw Gaurav near her.

⭕Itni jadli aagaya, aww, just wipe her tears now and don't let her cry in future and you too don't cry 😘

Dhara:Gauravji!

Gaurav:Dhara!

They both embraced each other crying.

⭕Awww, my pies


Gaurav wiped her tears.

Gaurav:Don't cry Dhara.I am there with you.Right?You trust me.Right?

⭕Yes, not only her, me too

Dhara:I trust you more than myself.

⭕Awww, Awww, Awww

Gaurav:Then be confident.I won't let this wedding happen.

⭕🥳Abb toh karwakar dikhae koi

She was relieved.Suddenly she realized that it was her imagination.

⭕Oh 💔💔💔

Dhara:My Gauravji will come.

⭕Definately

Mohini's maid got arrested.

Mohini slapped her.

Mohini:I trusted you,but you cheated me.

They took away her servant.

Mohini looked at Anupam:Anupam..make sure that no one knows about our maid getting arrested.Otherwise your wife's family will know that the real culprit is our maid.

Anupam:What is wrong in that Maa?

Mohini:If they know it they will unite Dhara with Gaurav and my brother will not get Dhara.He wants to marry her very badly.Not even Nivi should know it.Understand?

Anupam became dull.

Mohini:It's good that Nivi went shopping.Otherwise she would inform everyone that Gaurav is innocent.

Anupam:But when Gaurav gets released everyone will now that.Right?

Mohini:By the time he returns Dhara will be Naveen's wife.

She smirked.

Anupam was feeling bad.

The wedding day...

Dhara was numb and lifeless.

Gaurav embraced her from behind.But Dhara did not move.

Dhara:I know that it's only my feeling Gauravji.You are not the one who is hugging me.

Suddenly she burst into tears.

Dhara:Why are you there only in my dreams Gauravji?Come back to me.

Naveen Babu was excited to sit near Dhara on the wedding mandap.She was depressed.

Naveen:I am happy that you are becoming my wife.

Dhara felt disgusted seeing how he was looking at her.

Shekhar,Sharmishta,Nivedita,Anupam,Moloy,Ronit and Shivani were feeling sad.

Suddenly Gaurav reached there along with his parents.

Gaurav:Stop it.

Dhara was surprised and happy to see Gaurav.

Gaurav:Dhara,your Gaurav has come to you.

Dhara:Gauravji!

Mohini:What are you doing here?You must have eloped from the jail.Kick this thief out.

Gaurav:This wedding can't take place as Dhara is my wife.My innocence is proved.They realized that the real thief is your maid and released me.

Dhara became very happy that Gaurav has been released from the jail on the basis of his innocence.

Mohini:Don't cook up stories.Just leave.

Gaurav:I am telling the truth.I guess even you know now that your maid is the real thief.

Mohini became irritated.She tried to behave as if she does not know anything.

Suddenly Anupam said:Yes,it is true.Our maid got arrested when only Maa and I were at home.

Shekhar,Sharmishta,Moloy and Nivedita were surprised and happy that Gaurav was not the real thief.

Moloy:Mohini,why did you hide the truth from us?For your brother and Dhara's wedding to take place?For that you tried to separate a husband from a wife?Shame on you.

Gaurav looked at Shekhar and Sharmishta:Now you also believe that I am an innocent.Right?Then can you please return my Dhara to me?

Shekhar and Sharmishta smiled emotionally.

Mohini:Did you forget what I told you?If you don't get Dhara married to my brother Nivedita's married life with Anupam ends.

Moloy,Anupam and Nivedita were shocked.

Mohini:Anupam,leave Nivedita here.We can go back home.

Shekhar,Sharmishta,Dhara,Ronit,Shivani and Nivedita got tensed.Nivedita was in tears.

Anupam:Maa..I can't believe that to satisfy your ego you even stooped to the level of spoiling your son's married life.I have never gone against you.But this time I can't listen to you.I love Nivedita and I can never leave her.

Mohini was shocked while everyone else smiled happily.

Moloy:I am proud of you Anupam.

Anupam smiled.He held Nivedita's hand.

Nivedita:I got scared Anupam.I thought...I lost you.

Anupam:How could you even think that I can leave you?I love you Nivi.I can never think of a life without you.

Mohini was shocked to see her son Anupam talking like this to Nivedita.

They embraced each other emotionally.

Moloy:Anyways the wedding mandap is ready.What about getting Gaurav and Dhara married again?

Everyone smiled.

Gaurav:Will you marry me again Dhara?

Dhara blushed:Yes Gauravji.I want to be your wife in every birth.

Gaurav-Dhara shared a romantic eye lock.

 Naveen Babu left the place with disappointment.Mohini was about to follow him.Suddenly Moloy held her hand.

Moloy:You cannot change completely.But realize your mistake and try to reform yourself.Otherwise you will even lose your son.If you want your ego to win go behind Naveen.I won't stop you.But if you want to reform,stay with me.

Mohini stood near Moloy to watch Gaurav-Dhara's wedding.Moloy smiled.



 Dhara and Gaurav sat on the mandap.While Gaurav was listening to the Priest,Dhara was praying.

"God..please bless us for our second inning.Please don't let any problem come and separate us".

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe

Gaurav prayed n his mind:God...please let us lead a peaceful married life.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Gaurav-Dhara shared a sweet eye lock.

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

They exchanged garlands.

They looked at each other romantically.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He held her hand and said:I promise you that I will love you and protect you till the end.I will never fail to make you happy.

Dhara:I also promise you that I will always stand by your side in whatever the situation is.I will remove your pain and fill your life with happiness.

Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

They took seven steps around the sacred fire.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He tied the nuptial chain around her neck.After that blissful moment they looked at each other feeling complete.

Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin
Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko
Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin

He filled the partition of her hair with vermilion.

Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse
Roz hoti hai nayi
Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Gaurav:We are again together Dhara.

Dhara:I think this second marriage will make our bond stronger.

Gaurav:Yes,nobody can break our bond.

They smiled.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

The photographers started taking their photographs.

Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar
Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar
Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe
Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar

Gaurav got more cooking orders from the Jail canteen and did them successfully.Gaurav-Dhara started catering service together.They enjoyed their romantic cooking session in the kitchen 

and delivering the food for restaurants and functions.

Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Dhadkane hain surmayi
Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

Both became popular chefs too.

The TV screen....

We can see a famous cookery show being telecast on a popular TV channel.It was known as GauRa cookery show.'GauRa' was the combination of the names Gaurav and Dhara.

Gaurav-Dhara are shown to be sharing amazing cooking recipes exposing their cooking skills.

Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

The whole nation was watching their show.

Shivani's sister Kuki's Sangeet....

She will be getting married to boy named Kaushik.

Kaushik and Kuki were thanking the guests who blessed them for a happy married life.

Anupam and family reached there.After that Gaurav-Dhara came by there by a car.

All were excited to see them as they have become TV stars because of their cookery show.

The people were talking to each other:Shekhar and Sharmishta are so lucky to get a star like Gaurav as their son in law.They are lucky to have a star like Dhara as their daughter.

Gaurav,Dhara and their parents smiled hearing it.Mohini became dull as nobody minded him despite of being a rich lady.Instead,all the eyes were on Gaurav-Dhara.

Gaurav-Dhara were very happy as finally like they wished,people started respecting them by not considering them inferior to Anupam's family.

Gaurav-Dhara smiled at each other.

Gaurav:Finally we achieved something Dhara...We proved that we are not inferior to anyone.

Dhara:Yes,it is our greatest achievement as we are not considered low anymore.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe(Once upon a time in Mumbai).

The End

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Mohini's maid got arrested.

Mohini slapped her.

Mohini:I trusted you,but you cheated me.

⭕Haan but Apne bhi toh logo ko cheat kiya hau aunty

They took away her servant.

Mohini looked at Anupam:Anupam..make sure that no one knows about our maid getting arrested.Otherwise your wife's family will know that the real culprit is our maid.

😮Gandi aunty, Bhad mei  jao app, sorry bolna hi nahi chahiye tha

Anupam:What is wrong in that Maa?

⭕Kitne bhole ho tum

Mohini:If they know it they will unite Dhara with Gaurav and my brother will not get Dhara.He wants to marry her very badly.Not even Nivi should know it.Understand?

⭕please Anupam, Don't do what she says, please

Anupam became dull.

Mohini:It's good that Nivi went shopping.Otherwise she would inform everyone that Gaurav is innocent.

⭕Yes, I am sure she would have and Anupam will also do 

Anupam:But when Gaurav gets released everyone will now that.Right?

⭕Haan toh, Tum nahi bologe?😮

Mohini:By the time he returns Dhara will be Naveen's wife.

⭕Eew

She smirked.

Anupam was feeling bad.

⭕He hurt me😢

The wedding day...

Dhara was numb and lifeless.

⭕Awww, my pie

Gaurav embraced her from behind.But Dhara did not move.

⭕iss bar bhi imagination hai?😜

Dhara:I know that it's only my feeling Gauravji.You are not the one who is hugging me.

⭕Haaye, he literally lives in her 

Suddenly she burst into tears.

Dhara:Why are you there only in my dreams Gauravji?Come back to me.

⭕Jaldi 

Naveen Babu was excited to sit near Dhara on the wedding mandap.She was depressed.

⭕Ganda uncle

Naveen:I am happy that you are becoming my wife.

⭕Whatever

Dhara felt disgusted seeing how he was looking at her.

⭕Disgusting man

Shekhar,Sharmishta,Nivedita,Anupam,Moloy,Ronit and Shivani were feeling sad.

⭕Thankfully sad hone ki kripa toh ki inn logo ndin but Moloy kyun nahi kuch kar raha?

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Suddenly Gaurav reached there along with his parents.

⭕Hush , finally

Gaurav:Stop it.

⭕Yes, Stop It !

Dhara was surprised and happy to see Gaurav.

Gaurav:Dhara,your Gaurav has come to you.

Dhara:Gauravji!

Mohini:What are you doing here?You must have eloped from the jail.Kick this thief out.

⭕Kick out this lady

Gaurav:This wedding can't take place as Dhara is my wife.My innocence is proved.They realized that the real thief is your maid and released me.

⭕Usse mat batao, uss gandi aunty ko pata hai

Dhara became very happy that Gaurav has been released from the jail on the basis of his innocence.

🥳

Mohini:Don't cook up stories.Just leave.

😤😤😤😤😤😤

Gaurav:I am telling the truth.I guess even you know now that your maid is the real thief. 

⭕Wahi toh

Mohini became irritated.She tried to behave as if she does not know anything.

⭕🤬🤬🤬🤬

Suddenly Anupam said:Yes,it is true.Our maid got arrested when only Maa and I were at home.

⭕Hush, kuch toh bola

Shekhar,Sharmishta,Moloy and Nivedita were surprised and happy that Gaurav was not the real thief.

⭕Last two ok, first two gaye bhad mein

Moloy:Mohini,why did you hide the truth from us?For your brother and Dhara's wedding to take place?For that you tried to separate a husband from a wife?Shame on you.

⭕Sachi shamr on her

Gaurav looked at Shekhar and Sharmishta:Now you also believe that I am an innocent.Right?Then can you please return my Dhara to me?

⭕joh tumhara hai, you don't need to ask for it dear

Shekhar and Sharmishta smiled emotionally.

😏

Mohini:Did you forget what I told you?If you don't get Dhara married to my brother Nivedita's married life with Anupam ends.

⭕Abhi bhi, she is disgusting

Moloy,Anupam and Nivedita were shocked.

⭕Abb maza aayega

Mohini:Anupam,leave Nivedita here.We can go back home.

⭕Hatto

Shekhar,Sharmishta,Dhara,Ronit,Shivani and Nivedita got tensed.Nivedita was in tears.

⭕Aww, my doll don't be 

Anupam:Maa..I can't believe that to satisfy your ego you even stooped to the level of spoiling your son's married life.I have never gone against you.But this time I can't listen to you.I love Nivedita and I can never leave her.

⭕Hush, thats like our Anupam

Mohini was shocked while everyone else smiled happily.

Moloy:I am proud of you Anupam.

⭕Me too

Anupam smiled.He held Nivedita's hand.

Nivedita:I got scared Anupam.I thought...I lost you.

⭕Bechari, kitna darti hai

Anupam:How could you even think that I can leave you?I love you Nivi.I can never think of a life without you.

⭕Haye, please include them in otber ff's too, I love them

Mohini was shocked to see her son Anupam talking like this to Nivedita.

⭕Acha hai, acha hau

⭕Yeh recent pic hai?

They embraced each other emotionally.

Moloy:Anyways the wedding mandap is ready.What about getting Gaurav and Dhara married again?

⭕I am all game Uncle ji

Everyone smiled.

Gaurav:Will you marry me again Dhara?

🤦‍♀️Lo ji puch rahe hain 

Dhara blushed:Yes Gauravji.I want to be your wife in every birth.


Gaurav-Dhara shared a romantic eye lock.

 Naveen Babu left the place with disappointment.Mohini was about to follow him.Suddenly Moloy held her hand.

⭕Jane do uncle

Moloy:You cannot change completely.But realize your mistake and try to reform yourself.Otherwise you will even lose your son.If you want your ego to win go behind Naveen.I won't stop you.But if you want to reform,stay with me.

⭕Oh ok nicely done uncle

Mohini stood near Moloy to watch Gaurav-Dhara's wedding.Moloy smiled.

⭕hehe 

 Dhara and Gaurav sat on the mandap.While Gaurav was listening to the Priest,Dhara was praying.

"God..please bless us for our second inning.Please don't let any problem come and separate us".

⭕Aww my cutie piee

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe

Gaurav prayed n his mind:God...please let us lead a peaceful married life.

⭕The storm did affect them na

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Gaurav-Dhara shared a sweet eye lock.

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

They exchanged garlands.

They looked at each other romantically.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He held her hand and said:I promise you that I will love you and protect you till the end.I will never fail to make you happy.


Dhara:I also promise you that I will always stand by your side in whatever the situation is.I will remove your pain and fill your life with happiness.


Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

They took seven steps around the sacred fire.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He tied the nuptial chain around her neck.After that blissful moment they looked at each other feeling complete.

Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin
Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko
Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin

He filled the partition of her hair with vermilion.

Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse
Roz hoti hai nayi
Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Gaurav:We are again together Dhara.

Dhara:I think this second marriage will make our bond stronger.

⭕Yes it will

Gaurav:Yes,nobody can break our bond.

They smiled.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

The photographers started taking their photographs.

Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar
Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar
Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe
Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar

Gaurav got more cooking orders from the Jail canteen and did them successfully.Gaurav-Dhara started catering service together.They enjoyed their romantic cooking session in the kitchen 

⭕So sweet, you showed it perfectly jasmine

and delivering the food for restaurants and functions.

Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Dhadkane hain surmayi
Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

Both became popular chefs too.

⭕Waoh

The TV screen....

We can see a famous cookery show being telecast on a popular TV channel.It was known as GauRa cookery show.'GauRa' was the combination of the names Gaurav and Dhara.

⭕Gaura reminded me of gaura aunty 🤣🤣🤣🤣 but its so good, I love this twist

Gaurav-Dhara are shown to be sharing amazing cooking recipes exposing their cooking skills.

Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

⭕Beautiful Edit

The whole nation was watching their show.

Shivani's sister Kuki's Sangeet....

⭕Kuki ki shadi😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

She will be getting married to boy named Kaushik.

Kaushik and Kuki were thanking the guests who blessed them for a happy married life.

⭕Nice pic

Anupam and family reached there.After that Gaurav-Dhara came by there by a car.

⭕Ahh 😎

All were excited to see them as they have become TV stars because of their cookery show.

😎😎😎😎

The people were talking to each other:Shekhar and Sharmishta are so lucky to get a star like Gaurav as their son in law.They are lucky to have a star like Dhara as their daughter.

⭕Yes yes of course 🤩🤩

Gaurav,Dhara and their parents smiled hearing it.Mohini became dull as nobody minded him despite of being a rich lady.Instead,all the eyes were on Gaurav-Dhara.

⭕ Hehe, i am enjoying it

Gaurav-Dhara were very happy as finally like they wished,people started respecting them by not considering them inferior to Anupam's family.

⭕Awww, they just wanted respect my sweeties

Gaurav-Dhara smiled at each other.

Gaurav:Finally we achieved something Dhara...We proved that we are not inferior to anyone.

Dhara:Yes,it is our greatest achievement as we are not considered low anymore.

⭕Yup

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, 
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, 
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe(Once upon a time in Mumbai).

The End

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Plz write your favourite scene,

GauRa on TV 🤩

favourite character and why u like that character.

⭕Gaurav, he was just perfection personified, his love, his nature...his thoughts they were all brilliant

You can even write about your favourite supporting characters.

⭕Nivi, she was sweet simple shy girl and I just don't know why i liked her a lot maybe since I am biased towards the actress

Also shivani, of course , loved her right and genuinw views

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story jasmine, I truly loved the way you presented the story as a whole and your modifications were amazing and so realistic...Shivani was spot on in her conversation with Dhara and am happy dhara thought Rationally and so did the police officers, Shivani was a sweetie through and through and of course, My dhaRav too...I loved the way, Dhara kept dreaming of Gaurav...it was like shr couldn't live without his dreams, so beautiful...Mohini was plain loathworthy and even though I felt bad that Anupam didn't spoke before but yes when he did ...he did it marvellously, loved his and Nivi's scenes...poor Nivi, it really looked like she lived scared of Moh all the while, Moloy was great too... Gaurav proposing Dhara was very sweet , loved it...So was Dhara'a replies and you explained their wedding so amazingly...thanks a lot for that. 


Also, DhaRav opening a catering service ajd then slowly growing to chefs was great , am so happy, Mohini got the best punishment anf DhaRav the best reward of their goodneess, Lovely...I enjoyed it a lot lot lot, Thanks a lot for this story 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

thanks a lot to you.because you only asked me to write on this plot.

that anuvi pic is old.

KauKi  wedding plan was a sudden decision.since all the supporting couples were from kzk I decided to include them also  as I wanted a younger girl as shivani's sister. here KauKi are not college students.ha ha.I included lots of gaurav dhara dream scenes to include your edits.I wrote a detailed wedding scene to include your edits.so the credit goes to you.

I made anupam open his mouth only in the end for a wedding drama. otherwise the wedding would have got cancelled even before reaching the mandap without any drama.on wattpad the readers said that anupam was their fav character.I got surprised.because he had only 2 scenes.



Originally posted by: .Piyali..

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story jasmine, I truly loved the way you presented the story as a whole and your modifications were amazing and so realistic...Shivani was spot on in her conversation with Dhara and am happy dhara thought Rationally and so did the police officers, Shivani was a sweetie through and through and of course, My dhaRav too...I loved the way, Dhara kept dreaming of Gaurav...it was like shr couldn't live without his dreams, so beautiful...Mohini was plain loathworthy and even though I felt bad that Anupam didn't spoke before but yes when he did ...he did it marvellously, loved his and Nivi's scenes...poor Nivi, it really looked like she lived scared of Moh all the while, Moloy was great too... Gaurav proposing Dhara was very sweet , loved it...So was Dhara'a replies and you explained their wedding so amazingly...thanks a lot for that. 


Also, DhaRav opening a catering service ajd then slowly growing to chefs was great , am so happy, Mohini got the best punishment anf DhaRav the best reward of their goodneess, Lovely...I enjoyed it a lot lot lot, Thanks a lot for this story 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thanks a lot to you.because you only asked me to write on this plot.

😀

that anuvi pic is old.

Oh, I thought sincw Anupam is in coat-pants its new

KauKi  wedding plan was a sudden decision.since all the supporting couples were from kzk I decided to include them also  as I wanted a younger girl as shivani's sister. here KauKi are not college students.ha ha.

🤣

I included lots of gaurav dhara dream scenes to include your edits.I wrote a detailed wedding scene to include your edits.so the credit goes to you.

Awww, Thanks for the credit hehe

I made anupam open his mouth only in the end for a wedding drama. otherwise the wedding would have got cancelled even before reaching the mandap without any drama.on wattpad the readers said that anupam was their fav character.I got surprised.because he had only 2 scenes.

Oh, I understand...waoh, guess its due to actor like am biased towards Nivi


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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Hey Jasmine , thanks for the PM dear, sorry saw it today as having exam preparations

Coming to the update , aww it was last one.

I loved how Shivani supported Dhara, she are better than her useless parents 😆. Gaurav read Dhara 's letter and poor guy was heartbroken about the wedding . I knew Gaurav will be released from the jail soon . Mohini and her karname, hate this woman . Just to make her brother marry she was hell bent on to ruin Dhara and Gaurav 's life. Rich low class lady. I loved Gaurav and Dhara scenes in her imaginations ❤️

And I loved the wedding edits of them

Happy Anupam took stand for his wife and showed Mohini her place. Gaurav and Dhara got reunited and went to become successful chefs WOW and Mohini's face. I loved the promises they took for their wedding , it was so beautiful dear.


Finally I loved the story dear and it was simple and sweet and endearing ❤️😳. Thank you for writing this fanfic on Teja-Harshad

Would love to read more other fanfics of yours🤗🥳

Edited by TeluguChokri - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

thank you very much.the edit credit goes to piyali. I got the ideas for the imaginary scenes seeing her edits. 

I have given some questions there.could you please answer them?


Originally posted by: TeluguChokri

Hey Jasmine , thanks for the PM dear, sorry saw it today as having exam preparations

Coming to the update , aww it was last one.

I loved how Shivani supported Dhara, she are better than her useless parents 😆. Gaurav read Dhara 's letter and poor guy was heartbroken about the wedding . I knew Gaurav will be released from the jail soon . Mohini and her karname, hate this woman . Just to make her brother marry she was hell bent on to ruin Dhara and Gaurav 's life. Rich low class lady. I loved Gaurav and Dhara scenes in her imaginations ❤️

And I loved the wedding edits of them

Happy Anupam took stand for his wife and showed Mohini her place. Gaurav and Dhara got reunited and went to become successful chefs WOW and Mohini's face. I loved the promises they took for their wedding , it was so beautiful dear.


Finally I loved the story dear and it was simple and sweet and endearing ❤️😳. Thank you for writing this fanfic on Teja-Harshad

Would love to read more other fanfics of yours🤗🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thank you very much.the edit credit goes to piyali. I got the ideas for the imaginary scenes seeing her edits. 

I have given some questions there.could you please answer them?


They are really beautiful Piyali . Yes would answer them