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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Piyali,Khwaishfan,

Thank u very much 4 the lovely comments


Thank you Piyali for the cute banners too.

😡


Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi... As You entered my life, everything became complete Part 2


Thank you so much Piyali for all the Harshad Tejasswi edits and the header.

😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡



Gaurav went to the bank and withdrew his savings.

Gaurav:I had saved money for future.But now I will use it for my Dhara.She should be a Queen at Ronit's wedding function.

🔵 Oh....Awww but how should I feel good knowing what might follow 😒

Gaurav bought a costly saree.Then he went to a small jewellery shop.He saw some necklaces.He picked up a necklace.

🔵Oh...But then... Chodo, Read Piyali😃

Gaurav:This is similar to one of the necklaces which Mohiniji wore when we went to congratulate Ronit when his marriage got fixed.

Gaurav:I will buy this.Let everyone know that even Dhara can wear something like Mohiniji wore.My Dhara will look the best in this.

🔵 Awwww, He is goals but...🤔

Gaurav bought that necklace.

With excitement he went home.

His mother Radha and father Harshvardhan were shocked.

Harsh:Gaurav...but don't you think it's a wastage of money?This is your future savings?


Radha:We are not rich Gaurav.We can't use money for luxury.

🔵Oh them as parents 😃
Gaurav:I know.But I am doing this for my wife.Is it wrong?

🔵Awww, Awww Awwwww

Harshwardhan and Radha were silent.

Gaurav went to the room where Dhara was standing.

He embraced her from behind.

Dhara blushed:Gauravji!

Gaurav:I have a surprise for you.



He showed her the saree.

Dhara:You will wear this for Ronit's wedding.

🔵You mean Gaurav?

Dhara was stunned:But this is so expensive.

Gaurav:So what?

Gaurav showed her the necklace.

Gaurav:You will wear this also.

Dhara was shocked.

🔵Haha, Poor dhara, Shock pe shock

Dhara:This is so expensive.You must have finished your bank balance to buy this.What was the need of this Gauravji?

🔵Finished your bank balance 🤣 But truly said Dharu

Gaurav:So what?It's for your brother's wedding.You have the right to be well dressed for your brother's wedding.You can wear this for the future functions you will attend also.

😍😍😍😍😍

Dhara:But still ...I never longed for such expensive gifts.

😘

Gaurav:But as a husband I want to give nce gifts to my wife.Right?Nobody should look down upon you.

🤩🤩🤩🤩

Dhara looked at him emotionally:You are my biggest gift.I don't need anything else.

😍😍😍 Mere Emojis khatam hogaye jasmine, Don't make them so sweet

He was touched by her words.

She embraced him emotionally.


🔵 Awww But you didn't edit?

Ronit's wedding....



Gaurav and Dhara arrived at the venue.They were excited too as Dhara was grandly dressed and they unknowingly expected equal treatment from everyone.But what happened was shocking.

🔵Abb kya hoga? 🤔

Mohini's eyes fell on Dhara's necklace.

🔵Don't tell me its what i am expecting now? 😲

Mohini:This is my necklace.

🔵Fish

Gaurav:Mohiniji...this looks like your necklace.But it is not your necklace.I bought this for my life.

🔵Abb kya hoga? *biting nails*

Mohini:Stop lying.This is the necklace which went missing that day when I was in my daughter in law's maayka.I never thought that it was stolen by you.Otherwise how can a lower middle class man like you afford such an expensive necklace?

🔵Fish, Fish Fish...I am shocked but great twist jasmine, But if the necklace was stolen that day, Why didn't Mohini say anything?

All were shocked.

Gaurav:What are you saying Mohiniji?I bought this with my savings for my wife.

🔵Such an apt pic jasmine, I am loving your pic choices here
Mohini:Don't try to fool me.You are the thief who stole my necklace.

🔵Shut Up...😢

Dhara lost her control as she could not bear her husband getting insulted by Mohini.

🔵Awwwww Aww Aww

Dhara:Stop it Mohini aunty.Don't blame my husband.I know him.He cannot even think of stealing someone else's possesion.

🔵Thats like My dharu

Mohini was shocked as a middle class girl like Dhara scolded a rich lady like her.

🔵Ohk so scolding mein bhi status 🤦‍♀️

Mohini:How dare you raise your voice against me?Shekharji..Sharmishtaji...this is how your daughter should behave with me?I am not only older than her,but also from a prestigious family.

🔵Ohk so prestigious family matters more than age? Anyways, is this how you blame some guest as theif without thought?

Shekhar,Sharmishta and Nivedita became dull.

Sharmishta:Dhara..this is how you should talk to elders?

🔵Hain?😡 Akshita, am with you now

Shekhar:You should apologize to Mohiniji.

🔵Hatto Uncle


Dhara:I am sorry papa.I talked like that as she accused my innocent husband of stealing.I can't apologize for supporting my husband.

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).

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Mohini was very angry.

Nivedita went near Dhara:Dhara..please apologize and sort out the matter.

🔵Abb mein kya hi bolun? What is her tone? Scared or bossy?

Dhara:I am sorry di.I trust my husband.I can only support him.Won't you do the same if anyone accuses of Anupam jiju?

🔵Yeh hui na baat

Nivedita became upset.She did not know what to say.

🔵So guess she is scared only

Mohini's ego was hurt.

😡

Mohini:You have to pay for your arrogance Dhara.You and your husband snatched my possession and did not even apologize to me for the theft.I can't keep quiet.

Mohini rang up the police.

🔵Fish 😮😮

Mohini:You don't need to struggle hard to find the thief.I myself caught the thief red handed.Come and arrest him.

All were shocked.

Sharmishta:Mohiniji...are you going to get our son in law arrested?

🔵Thankfully she spoke validly

Mohini:Yes.Because he is only a thief for me.Those who do wrong have to be punished.

🔵But is is decided?

Dhara:But my husband is innocent.

🔵Awww, I am in Love with their Love 😍😍😍

Dhara's words were ignored by others.

🔵Bad people

Moloy:Mohini...what if Gaurav is saying the truth?Do you really want to arrest him now itself?

🔵Finally, voice of reason, Thankfully


Mohini:Moloy...I have no doubt about this boy.He is the thief I was looking for.

Moloy was in a dilemma.



The police men came.

Gaurav was panicked.

Gaurav:Sir...please ...I did not steal.

They hand cuffed him.

Dhara:Please leave my husband.He is innocent.

Her pleadings fell on their deaf ears and they took away Gaurav.Even Gaurav's helpless parents requested the police men.But they were also ignored.

Radha:If my son had not used his hard earned money to buy the necklace for you,he would have been safe now.


Harshwardhan:His biggest mistake was buying necklace for his wife to express his overloaded love.



Dhara was crying continuously.

They felt bad for Dhara seeing her cry.

Harsh:We are sorry beta.You supported our son.But being his parents we lost our temper.

Radha:Anyone in our position will behave like us.Right?

Dhara was only crying.

Suddenly Mohini pulled out the necklace she was wearing.

Mohini:This belongs to me,not to you.

Dhara did not bother.She was numb as losing this necklace was nothing compared to losing her husband.



(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).





Dhara looked at Harsh and Radha:Let us go home.

Shekhar:You will not go with them to that thief''s house.You will stay with us.

Dhara was shocked:Papa..you too?

Shekhar:Yes.Because I am concerned about you.From now onwards you will not be associated with that thief in any way.

Dhara was shocked:Papa!

Sharmishta:Papa is right Dhara.

Harshwardhan-Radha left quietly.

Dhara wept:Papaji...maaji..

They did not turn back though they wanted to.

Despite of all this drama,Ronit-Shivani got married.But they were not happy like the usual newly married couples because of the situation.







Gaurav was sentenced to a few months imprisonment.Though nobody trusted Gaurav,Dhara's trust in him did not break.Dhara's parents kept her in their house itself.



Sharmishta shed tears:My daughter's married life got ruined.Who will marry her?

Suddenly she heard a voice.

"Dhara will get a husband and a comfortable life like Nivedita".

Sharmishta and Shekhar were stunned to see Mohini.

Mohini:You may be shocked thinking how I forgave Dhara.I forgave Dhara and brought a nice alliance for her as my brother is more important than my ego.

Shekhar:We did'nt understand anything Mohiniji.

Mohini:My brother Naveen babu is deeply impressed with Dhara.He wants to marry Dhara.I came here to seek Dhara's hand for my brother.

They were shocked.

Shekhar:But Naveen babu's age...

Mohini:Is age an issue for men?

Shekhar:But he is a widower too.

Mohini:So what?Even Dhara is like a widow now.Don't you know that the girls who are separated from their husbands are treated like widows in our place?

They became dull.


Mohini:First of all your daughter is not fair,so no handsome young Prince is going to marry her.Secondly her current status of being separated from her husband is a big drawback.So who will marry her?But my brother Naveen Babu wants to marry her after knowing everything about her.If Dhara marries a rich man like Naveen,she will lead a luxurious life like Nivedita.

Sharmishta:But Dhara loves Gaurav so much that she will not agree.

Mohini got angry:Is she still loving that thief who stole my precious necklace?If you reject my brother,I may even ask my son to leave Nivedita.Anupam will get another beautiful wife easily,But after separated from Anupam,Nivedita will not get any value in the society,

They were shocked as Mohini threatened them.

Sharmishta:It's yes from our side.Please don't ruin Nivi's life.

Mohini smiled:As you said 'yes' Nivedita will be safe in our house.

Shekhar-Sharmishta were relieved.

Sharmishta:But give us more time to convince Dhara.First she should be able to forget Gaurav.Only time can make her forget Gaurav.Otherwise she won't be able to live as another man's wife.

Mohini:Ok.Fine.

Shekhar-Sharmishta were relieved.





Where as Gaurav was toiling a lot without any rest.But even the police officers were nice to him seeing his nice nature.Now they also can't believe that Gaurav could steal.So they decided to enquire about the real thief.

One week he was given the cooking job.

Gaurav found relief in cooking.The jailer got impressed with his cooking and appreciated him.

Jailer:Our jail canteen's cook is on sick leave.Gaurav...I think you should take the charge of cooking.

Gaurav was very happy:Sure Sir.Cooking is something I enjoy a lot.

Gaurav cooked different dishes for the canteen.While cooking he remembered his cute kitchen moments with Dhara.All the police officers enjoyed his food.

The local people who stayed around the Jail also bought food from the jail canteen and Gaurav's food was on literally on demand.They made a lot of profit.



Dhara was cooking in the kitchen.Suddenly she felt that Gaurav was nuzzling on her ear and neck.



Sach kahun toh honth jalte mere
Chup rahun toh saans hi na aaye
Mushqil hai bahut hi
Ab chhupana ya batana




She looked at him only to realize that it was her hallucination.She shed tears.




Zyada paas aana
Hai asal mein door jaana
Mere saath mere
Zakhm bhi hain dard bhi hain
Jinse hai bigadta
Jo bhi chaahun main banana
Mujhe nazdeeqiyon se meri
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...





Gaurav was spending his time in the prison by remembering his lovely moments with Dhara.

Gaurav remembered themselves watching a comedy TV show and bursting out laughing.

Na shikaayat hai tujhe
Shikaayat na mujhe
Magar doori hai
Kya bhala roke humein
Badhe na kyun kadam
Agar doori hai

He remembered them going for a romantic walk in a park.

Poochun tere baare
Chadhte din se shaam se bhi
Na hai chain teri yaad se bhi
Naam se bhi

He smiled thinking of chatting with her on the beach while the sun was setting making the sky more beautiful and romantic.


Aisa kyun hua hai
Yeh pata hai jaante hain
Tujhse bhi muhabbat
Hai muhabbat kaam se bhi
Yunhi nazdeekiyon mein rahi

They both wept thinking of each other.

Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...(Love Aaj Kal).





Knowing about Naveen Babu's proposal,Dhara protested a lot.

Dhara:What?

You all know that I Iove only my Gauravji?

Then how can you ask me to marry someone else?

Shekhar-Sharmishta became very upset.

Sharmishta:Mohiniji has threatened us that if you don't marry her brother she will get Anupam and Nivi divorced.Anupam can never go against his mother.

Dhara was shocked.

Sharmishta:If you don't marry him,our Nivi's married life will be spoiled.Only you can save Nivi's married life.

Dhara was in deep pain.

Dhara:Ok.I will marry Naveen babu.

If Nivi di's married life gets spoiled because of me I will never be able to forgive myself.But I can never be a good wife to him.

Dhara ran away crying leaving Shekhar-Sharmishta in pain.

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Mohini:Moloy...I have no doubt about this boy.He is the thief I was looking for.

Moloy was in a dilemma.

🔵Oh God, She is so disgusting to do this is someone's wedding that too to a relative without much thought



The police men came.

Gaurav was panicked.

Gaurav:Sir...please ...I did not steal.

🔵 aww poor him

They hand cuffed him.

Dhara:Please leave my husband.He is innocent.

Her pleadings fell on their deaf ears and they took away Gaurav.Even Gaurav's helpless parents requested the police men.But they were also ignored.

Radha:If my son had not used his hard earned money to buy the necklace for you,he would have been safe now.

🔵God, I understand her concern but will she blame Dhara now?


Harshwardhan:His biggest mistake was buying necklace for his wife to express his overloaded love.

🔵😔 But it was his true love



Dhara was crying continuously.

They felt bad for Dhara seeing her cry.

Harsh:We are sorry beta.You supported our son.But being his parents we lost our temper.

Radha:Anyone in our position will behave like us.Right?

🔵 Oh thankfully they understood soon but can understand their state

Dhara was only crying.

Suddenly Mohini pulled out the necklace she was wearing.

🔵 how disgusting is she? Itni rich hai toh why so hallabola over a necklace?

Mohini:This belongs to me,not to you.

Dhara did not bother.She was numb as losing this necklace was nothing compared to losing her husband.

🔵Awww, My Dharu, I loath Mohini here too now



(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).

🤦‍♀️



Dhara looked at Harsh and Radha:Let us go home.

🔵Aww she is trying to be strong

Shekhar:You will not go with them to that thief''s house.You will stay with us.

😡

Dhara was shocked:Papa..you too?

Shekhar:Yes.Because I am concerned about you.From now onwards you will not be associated with that thief in any way.

Dhara was shocked:Papa!

Sharmishta:Papa is right Dhara.

😡😡😡🤬

Harshwardhan-Radha left quietly.

🔵 Bechare

Dhara wept:Papaji...maaji..

They did not turn back though they wanted to.

Despite of all this drama,Ronit-Shivani got married.But they were not happy like the usual newly married couples because of the situation.

🔵Inn becharon ki shadi bhi kharab kardi bad aunty ne

🔵Beautuful edit jasmine







Gaurav was sentenced to a few months imprisonment.Though nobody trusted Gaurav,Dhara's trust in him did not break.Dhara's parents kept her in their house itself.

🔵 Jailers toh Dhara ke Parents hain asli 🤬

Sharmishta shed tears:My daughter's married life got ruined.Who will marry her?

🔵 Her Husband is alive aunty, pata hai na?

Suddenly she heard a voice.

"Dhara will get a husband and a comfortable life like Nivedita".

🔵Oh finally *biting nails*

Sharmishta and Shekhar were stunned to see Mohini.

Mohini:You may be shocked thinking how I forgave Dhara.I forgave Dhara and brought a nice alliance for her as my brother is more important than my ego.

🔵Jo Bhi kehlo, Juth nahi bolti aunty, khud ko egoistic bhi bola aur bata diya, Kar apne bhai ke liye rahi hun

Shekhar:We did'nt understand anything Mohiniji.

🔵Aa jayega, Wait for sometime 🙄

Mohini:My brother Naveen babu is deeply impressed with Dhara.He wants to marry Dhara.I came here to seek Dhara's hand for my brother.

🔵He is already impressed? 😮 Why am I starting to feel this all his Moh's ploy

They were shocked.

Shekhar:But Naveen babu's age...

🔵Thankfully, kuch sahi pucha

Mohini:Is age an issue for men?

🔵 🤬

Shekhar:But he is a widower too.

🔵Thankfully he does somewhere cares for Dhara

Mohini:So what?Even Dhara is like a widow now.Don't you know that the girls who are separated from their husbands are treated like widows in our place?

🔵Hey Bhagwan, Isne toh Gaurav ko maar hi dala apni soch mein 🤬

They became dull.


Mohini:First of all your daughter is not fair,so no handsome young Prince is going to marry her.Secondly her current status of being separated from her husband is a big drawback.So who will marry her?But my brother Naveen Babu wants to marry her after knowing everything about her.If Dhara marries a rich man like Naveen,she will lead a luxurious life like Nivedita.

🔵How disgusting of her to say all such stuff about Dhara, isse jail bhijwana jasmine

Sharmishta:But Dhara loves Gaurav so much that she will not agree.

🔵Finally but koi asar hoga?

Mohini got angry:Is she still loving that thief who stole my precious necklace?If you reject my brother,I may even ask my son to leave Nivedita.Anupam will get another beautiful wife easily,But after separated from Anupam,Nivedita will not get any value in the society,

🔵 Precious necklace? Human koi value nhi, words in my dictionary have ended to hate her...

They were shocked as Mohini threatened them.

Sharmishta:It's yes from our side.Please don't ruin Nivi's life.

😭😭😭😭

Mohini smiled:As you said 'yes' Nivedita will be safe in our house.

😤😤😤😤

Shekhar-Sharmishta were relieved.

🔵They only care for Nivi, I hate them

Sharmishta:But give us more time to convince Dhara.First she should be able to forget Gaurav.Only time can make her forget Gaurav.Otherwise she won't be able to live as another man's wife.

Mohini:Ok.Fine.

Shekhar-Sharmishta were relieved.



Where as Gaurav was toiling a lot without any rest.But even the police officers were nice to him seeing his nice nature.Now they also can't believe that Gaurav could steal.So they decided to enquire about the real thief.

🔵Yippe 🥳 but back home jo chal raha hai uska kya 😢

One week he was given the cooking job.

Gaurav found relief in cooking.The jailer got impressed with his cooking and appreciated him.

🔵Wow, I love this change you made, this story is imbibing so many social issues jasmine

Jailer:Our jail canteen's cook is on sick leave.Gaurav...I think you should take the charge of cooking.

🔵Oh, Oh oh

Gaurav was very happy:Sure Sir.Cooking is something I enjoy a lot.

😍

Gaurav cooked different dishes for the canteen.While cooking he remembered his cute kitchen moments with Dhara.All the police officers enjoyed his food.

🔵awww, I love his Love

The local people who stayed around the Jail also bought food from the jail canteen and Gaurav's food was on literally on demand.They made a lot of profit.

🔵 Yippe now same my dhara fast, please

Dhara was cooking in the kitchen.Suddenly she felt that Gaurav was nuzzling on her ear and neck.

🔵Aww, Dream?

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Sach kahun toh honth jalte mere
Chup rahun toh saans hi na aaye
Mushqil hai bahut hi
Ab chhupana ya batana

🔵 Just realized, this edit is so blunderous with the hand and all na

She looked at him only to realize that it was her hallucination.She shed tears.

🔵I thought so, Aww my swettie

Zyada paas aana
Hai asal mein door jaana
Mere saath mere
Zakhm bhi hain dard bhi hain
Jinse hai bigadta
Jo bhi chaahun main banana
Mujhe nazdeeqiyon se meri
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...

Gaurav was spending his time in the prison by remembering his lovely moments with Dhara.

Gaurav remembered themselves watching a comedy TV show and bursting out laughing.

Na shikaayat hai tujhe
Shikaayat na mujhe
Magar doori hai
Kya bhala roke humein
Badhe na kyun kadam
Agar doori hai

He remembered them going for a romantic walk in a park.

Poochun tere baare
Chadhte din se shaam se bhi
Na hai chain teri yaad se bhi
Naam se bhi

He smiled thinking of chatting with her on the beach while the sun was setting making the sky more beautiful and romantic.

Aisa kyun hua hai
Yeh pata hai jaante hain
Tujhse bhi muhabbat
Hai muhabbat kaam se bhi
Yunhi nazdeekiyon mein rahi

They both wept thinking of each other.

Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...(Love Aaj Kal).

🔵Awww, Please unit theme fast...Please



Knowing about Naveen Babu's proposal,Dhara protested a lot.

Dhara:What?

You all know that I Iove only my Gauravji?

Then how can you ask me to marry someone else?

Shekhar-Sharmishta became very upset.

Sharmishta:Mohiniji has threatened us that if you don't marry her brother she will get Anupam and Nivi divorced.Anupam can never go against his mother.

Dhara was shocked.

Sharmishta:If you don't marry him,our Nivi's married life will be spoiled.Only you can save Nivi's married life.

🔵Toh, Apni zindagi sppil karle?

Dhara was in deep pain.

Dhara:Ok.I will marry Naveen babu.

😭😭😭😭

If Nivi di's married life gets spoiled because of me I will never be able to forgive myself.But I can never be a good wife to him.

Dhara ran away crying leaving Shekhar-Sharmishta in pain.

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Amazing update jasmine, I love DhaRav's Love for each other, They are goals, I so enjoy them...poor Gaurav, exhausted his savings for her but got jail in return, I absolutely loath Mohini, I loved Dhara's dialogues to him and Dhara trying to protest a lot for him but of couse...😔 I absolutely SheMishta now, How biased parents they are and the way they distrusted Gaurav instantly, eew...Radha and Harshvardhan are sweet peoplw but bound by stuff...poor them...Mohini is absolutely disgusting and am completely feeling that this all is her ploy since her brother might have liked Dhara...how she threatened, diagusting...Only hearing about Gaurav somewhat happy in prison gave me relief, I loved the fact that he has won everyone's heart there and enjoying Cooking while missing Dhara, so sweeet...Loved them both remembering each other and Dhara dreaming of him but poor them...Dhara had to agree to proposal for Nivi, What will happen? Am really excited....Please please please update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Waise , just realized Anupam hasn't even got 1 dialogue till now 🤣 and also Shivi

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Thanks a lot.Thx 4 pointing out name mistake.While reading ur comments i found a spelling mistake too.I chose KZK2 Sharma couple as Gaurav's parents bcz of their middle class looks.In other serials even the middle class people are well dressed.I did'nt want that here.Well this actor played Harshad's father in Tere liye too.

I tried cropping the edit.But i realized that if I crop it,teju will lose half of her eye brow also.So I did'nt change the pic.I did'nt want to show Shekar Sharmishta to ask Dhara to marry Naveen Babu to save Nivedita's married life..But the plot which u gave me demanded it.

Nivi was scared,not bossy.

I included Jail canteen part bcz in our place there is a famous jail(Central jail)where outsiders too go to buy food.There we get yummy biriyani.

Yes,thats what I told you that only in the end Anupam Nivedita will have a proper scene.Shivi will get the best scenes in the next part.I hope u will like her in the next part.


Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Waise , just realized Anupam hasn't even got 1 dialogue till now 🤣 and also Shivi

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot.Thx 4 pointing out name mistake.While reading ur comments i found a spelling mistake too.I chose KZK2 Sharma couple as Gaurav's parents bcz of their middle class looks.In other serials even the middle class people are well dressed.I did'nt want that here.Well this actor played Harshad's father in Tere liye too.

Oh, Yes true waise, I just remembered, You are right...tere liye

I tried cropping the edit.But i realized that if I crop it,teju will lose half of her eye brow also.So I did'nt change the pic.I did'nt want to show Shekar Sharmishta to ask Dhara to marry Naveen Babu to save Nivedita's married life..But the plot which u gave me demanded it.

Oh, Ok

Haha, I know but I was in flow 😬🤣🤣

Nivi was scared,not bossy.

Yup, realized

I included Jail canteen part bcz in our place there is a famous jail(Central jail)where outsiders too go to buy food.There we get yummy biriyani.

Waoh...Thats nice

Yes,thats what I told you that only in the end Anupam Nivedita will have a proper scene.Shivi will get the best scenes in the next part.I hope u will like her in the next part.

I am sure I will but thats when you update the part no 😆😉😛


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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

They should all ignore Mohini's threats. Even Dhara got twisted into accepting it. What about Gaurav?

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#29

Thank you so much for the PM Jasmine 🤗

Okay Gaurav is just husband goals❤️.He brought the saree and necklace with his saving -his love for Dhara yaar. His parents were not wrong for asking about it. Coming to Dhara when she said he her best gift , I just went Awwkya jodi hai inki❤️


Then came the Witch 🤬, shanti se jeene kyun deti yeh aurat chudail gayi ki. If he necklace was stolen that day why did she not do hullabaloo over it. I think it was her plan to separate Gaurav and Dhara so that she can get her married to her buddha brother 😡


I am happy Gaurav is being treated nicely in Jail owing to his sweet and honest nature. I was afraid he will be tortured their. I think his cooking skills can bring something good change in his future I can see that.


Coming to Shekar- Sharmistha they are most despicable parents any one could get🤢. I sometimes feel is Dhara even their own daughter or only Nivi is they see everywhere. Atleast Nivi should stand up for her sister when she is making such a big sacrifice for her? I ABSOLUTELY LOATHE HER PARENTS🤬


Eager to know what happens next 🤗Can't wait for it

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Waise , just realized Anupam hasn't even got 1 dialogue till now 🤣 and also Shivi

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I hope he atleast stands upto his witch of a mom😵

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