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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi... As You entered my life, everything became complete Part1

I dedicate this story to my dearest friend Piyali and TeluguChokri who wanted me to write a story on Harshad Chopra-Tejasswi.I dedicate this to my friend Piyali again for giving me the plot of the Punjabi movie Bambukat for writing this story.I have made lots of changes.Hope you don't mind.

Thank you Piyali for the beautiful edits.

Thank you Piyali for the cute banners too.


Two little girls are seen playing...

One girl was very fair.Her skin was shining like a marble.She was Nivedita.The other girl was dusky.She was Dhara.

Suddenly their mother Sharmishta called Dhara.

"Dhara...come inside".

Dhara went inside the house.

Sharmishta:How many times I told you not to play outside?If sun rays fall on you,you will become darker.You won't get any boy to get married.

Dhara's face became dull.

Dhara:Then what about Nivi di?

Sharmishta:Nivi is very fair.Just because she stands outside for some time her complexion won't change.But you will lose your complexion completely.So you don't play outside.

Dhara became upset.

Sharmishta:You come with me to the kitchen and learn cooking.At least seeing your cooking skill some one will marry you.

Dhara became dull.

She thought:When all the girls of my age are playing,I am learning cooking in the kitchen.Is everything because of my complexion?

Years passed ....

We can see Nivedita getting married to a rich man named Anupam.

Their parents Shekhar and Sharmishta are very happy.

Somebody told Sharmishta:You all are very lucky Sharmishta.Your eldest daughter got a handsome rich husband.

Sharmishta smiled:Our daughter Nivedita is so fair and beautiful that Anupam fell for her at first sight itself.

Anupam's mother Mohini was bathed with jewelry.

Mohini caressed Nivedita.

Mohini:We are the richest family in our area.Our son Anupam got the most beautiful ...the fairest girl in this village.We are proud of that.Nivedita may not be used to wearing jewelry like me.But I will make my daughter in law look like a Princess by making her wear the most expensive jewelry.

Nivedita smiled.Everyone got jealous of Nivedita while Shekhar,Sharmishta,their son Ronit and Dhara smiled.

Dhara:Nivi di is lucky to get Anupam Jiju.

(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).

Many boys came and saw Dhara.But they rejected her because of her skin colour.

Sharmishta got Dhara dressed up.

Sharmishta:You look nice.

Sharmishta hugged Dhara emotionally.

Sharmishta:I hope this boy likes you and does'nt reject you like other boys.

He is not a rich boy like Anupam.But he belongs to a nice middle class family like us.The boy runs a small grocery shop.But it is fine.

Dhara seemed to be disinterested as she had no hope as she was used to getting rejected by boys.

Finally the boy's family reached.

Sharmishta praised Dhara for her cooking skill in front of them.

The boy Gaurav looked at Dhara with a smile.Dhara was expressionless as she knew that she was going to be rejected by him also.

Sharmishta showed her actions to smile.Dhara smiled artificially.

She thought:This man is good looking and fair.So it's obvious that he wants a fair skinned girl.He will not like me for sure.

Suddenly Gaurav said:I liked the girl.



Dhara was shocked to the core.Sharmishta and Shekhar's happiness had no bounds.

The marriage got fixed.



Dhara was thinking of Gaurav.

Dhara:I can't believe that a handsome man like Gauravji is marrying me.But how?How did he like me?

Sharmishta:You are lucky that you are getting a handsome fair man as your husband.So always be well dressed.He should be impressed by your looks.

Dhara became dull:Is a girl identified only by her looks?

Sharmishta:Unfortunately in our orthodox narrow minded society fair skinned girls are on demand for marriage.



Dhara became upset.



Gaurav-Dhara sat on the mandap.

Gaurav could not take his eyes off her while she lowered her eye lashes to ignore him.



Seeing her not even looking at him he felt bad.

He thought:Why Dhara is not even looking at me?Does'nt she like me?

They started following all the wedding rituals.While taking saath phere Gaurav was losing his peace of mind thinking whether Dhara was married to him without her wish.

Suddenly he thought:No.I don't think.I am having unnecessary thoughts.I don't think Dhara's parents are strict enough to make her marry me forcefully.

He got some relief.

He tied the nuptial chain around her neck.

Then he applied vermilion on the parting of her hair.



Dhara was sitting in the bedroom.Gaurav entered the room.She got up from the bed.

Gaurav:Sit..sit.You don't need to get up when I come near you.

Dhara was silent.

Gaurav:You sit Dhara.

She sat on the bed.

Gaurav:I think you are tired.You rest.

Dhara:Ji..Can I ask you something?

Gaurav:Yes sure.

Dhara:Why did you marry me?

Gaurav:What does it mean?I did'nt understand.

Dhara:You are fair and handsome.You could have married a fair girl.Why did you marry me?

Gaurav:First of all skin colour is not important to me.I don't find anything wrong with your complexion.When I saw you itself I felt that you are very beautiful.

Dhara was stunned.



Dhara:You called me beautiful?You are making fun of me.

Gaurav:No.You are making fun of me by your sarcastic comment on my looks.I know.

Dhara who was really hurt turned off her face.

Gaurav became dull.

He thought:Oh no.How will I make her understand that it was not a sarcastic comment,but I really meant that she is pretty?



Dhara impressed her parents in law with her cooking skill.

Gaurav was also impressed.

Gaurav:Your hands are magical.You cook so well.



Dhara:Since childhood I have been learning cooking.Because my mother said that since I am not fair,cooking is the only way to stay in my husband's heart.





(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).





Gaurav became dull.

He thought:Dhara is having inferiority complex as she has been tagged as a dusky girl by our stupid society.Poor girl.



They got their wedding album.

Dhara was going through the wedding photographs.Gaurav sat near her.

Gaurav:May I also?

Dhara gave him the album.

Gaurav:We will see this together.

He kept the album on both their laps.So they both could see the photographs comfortably.

Gaurav:In the wedding attire you looked like a Princess.

Dhara looked at him in disbelief.He was smiling.But she ignored it.

She thought:He keeps lying that I look pretty?Why?



Dhara was in the kitchen.Gaurav went near her.

Gaurav:Can I join you?

Dhara was shocked.

Dhara:But...you are a man.

Gaurav:I am not narrow minded to think that men will lose manliness if they cook.I enjoy cooking.

Dhara was surprised.

She thought:He is so different.

Gaurav:So can I join you?We will cook together.

Dhara smiled nodding.

They both started cooking together.



Unknowingly they started having fun in the kitchen.

Their friendship started that moment without their knowledge.



Days passed....



Gaurav gave her a saree.

Gaurav:I bought this saree for you.Sorry,I could not afford a silk saree.

Dhara smiled seeing the saree.

Dhara:You bought a saree for me with your hard earned money.That's more than enough for me.I never wish to wear costly sarees daily like Nivi di.I prefer simple clothes.This saree is very pretty.I loved it.

Gaurav smiled happily.

Gaurav:Can I see you in this saree?

She gave him a node with a smile.



Dhara wore the saree and came.Gaurav was mesmerized by her beauty.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe



Gaurav:You don't know how beautiful you are Dhara.

Dhara did not know how to react.

Dhara:But I...

Gaurav:I told you that skin colour does not define beauty.I don't believe that fair skinned girls are more beautiful.In my eyes you are more beautiful than anyone else.Trust me.

She started blushing.




Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi



He smiled seeing her blush.



Gaurav-Dhara went to the movie theatre and enjoyed watching a movie.




Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe

The spent time on the beach.

 Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe



Dhara was thinking of Gaurav and blushing.

Dhara wore a nice saree.She beautified her eyes with kohl.She wore a bindi and waited for Gaurav to come.

Gaurav came.She blushed seeing him.He noticed that Dhara has dressed up.




Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke Dekhti hoon ab kayee Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi



Gaurav:You have dressed up so well.

She smiled.

He went near her and looked at her deeply.

Gaurav:You dressed up for me.Right?

She blushed and nodded her head.




Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe





Gaurav smiled:Why did you dress up for me?

She became shy.

Gaurav smiled.




Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin



He cupped her face in his palms.

Gaurav:Can I tell you something?When I saw you for the first time itself I fell for you.It was love at first sight for me.

She was surprised.




 Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin





Gaurav:I love you Dhara.

She felt goosebumps all over her body when he confessed his love.




Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse Roz hoti hai nayi Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi





Gaurav:Now tell me why you dressed up.

She was blushing to the core.

Dhara:Because I wanted to dress up for the man I love.

He was very happy.




Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe



Gaurav still asked "What do you mean?" though he understood what she meant to say to make her confess her love for him.

Dhara:I love you Gauravji.

His happiness had no limit.




Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar



Dhara:After you entered my life,I feel complete.

Gaurav:I also feel complete with your entry in my life.

They shared a romantic smile.






Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe Dhadkane hain surmayi Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi



He scooped her in his arms and twirled around.

They had a romantic embrace.




Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke Dekhti hoon ab kayee Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi



Then they came closer closing the distance between them.




Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe(Once upon a time in Mumbai).





Gaurav-Dhara were having a happy married life.



Ronit's marriage got fixed with Shivani.

Gaurav-Dhara travelled to Dhara's place by a second hand bike.

The same time Anupam,Nivedita and family arrived there in a luxurious car.

The people around her were gossiping.

"The eldest daughter's husband has got a car.But the youngest daughter is coming by a normal bike.Shekhar and Sharmishta got a rich son in law as well as a middle class son in law".

Gaurav who overheard this became dull.

Nivedita and Dhara hugged each other happily.

Dhara:How are you di?

Nivedita:I am leading a luxurious life Dhara.I am really enjoying it.What about you Dhara?

Dhara:I am very happy Di.Both Gauravji and his parents are very loving.

Nivedita smiled:I am very happy for you.

They smiled.

Dhara and Gaurav gave him a show piece as a gift.

Ronit:Wow..it's beautiful.

Anupam and Nivedita gifted him a costly roller watch.

Ronit:Wow..I always wanted a watch like this.Thank you so much Nivi and jiju.



They smiled.



Mohini:You are my son Anupam's brother in law.We will give you the best.My husband Moloy and I are giving you a honeymoon ticket to Paris too.

Ronit and everyone else was surprised.

Ronit:Paris!I can't even dream of it.

Mohini:Start dreaming as it's going to be a reality now.

Ronit:Thank you so much.It is the best wedding gift I could get.

They all smiled.

Dhara smiled as her brother got what he wanted.But Gaurav looked dull.

Gaurav thought:Only expensive gifts have value.The gift which we gave Ronit with love has less value before Anupam's family's expensive gift.

He felt bad.Dhara who understood it held his hand.

Dhara:Don't take it into heart Gauravji.

He gave her a pale smile.

Dhara,Nivedita,Ronit were having a nice family time with their parents.

Everyone noticed that Nivedita was wearing costly decorated sarees and a lot of gold ornaments.

Somebody said:Nivedita...you re wearing so many costly ornaments.

Mohini:She has to wear them as she is our daughter in law.She is not less than a Queen.My son Anupam and I give her gold as gifts,not small gifts which middle class people give their daughter in law or wife.

Gaurav became really dull.

He thought:Indirectly Mohiniji was taunting me.But I don't care.

Some people were talking over there.

"Nivedita's husband and parents in law are giving her costly saree and ornaments.But Dhara's husband and family are giving her artificial ornaments.Poor Dhara!"

Gaurav who over heard this could not take it anymore.

Gaurav thought:Let others taunt me.But my Dhara is becoming small before others.I can't let it happen.She also deserves all this.I should also get her something expensive and she should be wearing it on Ronit's wedding.

Aww thank you so much Jasmine and Piyali for making my wish to see them true❤️ It means a lot and Piyali the edits are really so beautiful esp the wedding ones


Coming to the story I liked how it was focused on the racism which is so prevlent in India and so heartbreaking that its scale is measured for marriage. Dhara's mom is so insensitive, thanks to her Dhara could never enjoy her childhood😭 It also created a rivalry between the kids look like and Mohini is so selfish man, just snobbish like in KZK.


And our Hero entered, he is so understanding and has heart of gold

Dhara is lucky that she gold such a broad minded husband. He may be middle class but has more class than you Miss Mohini 


I loved the scenes of Dhara and Gaurav ❤️. So beautiful and heartwarming their scenes were   

Him having first sight love on her, their marriage, their talks and their confession 

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Amazing start jasmine, I sooo soo so enjoyed reading it...specially how Gaurav changed Dhara's mind slowly and steadily and made her believe he truly Loved her, also he is adorable...i just enjoyed his characte so much throughout the part, His thinking, behaviour...everything is love, he might be small in income but really huge in heart with acceptance of every beautiful ideology, I truly loved him and Dhara of course, Poor girl...had to go through mental agony throughout her childhood but am happy she finally got a husband like Gaurav...I loved all their scenes but the confession scene was beautiful...I loved all the dialogues so much, Their innocence, cuteness awww...I liked all supporting characters except Mohini of course, I already dislike her...aage to pata nahi kya ho hoga, Let wait and see, excited for next part, Thanks a lot lot lot for dedication 😘 and of course writing the story on the couple on my request

I dislike both Mohini and Sharmista. Latter is a mother still she is majorly responsible for Dhara's inferiority complex, Dhara is lucky to get Gaurav.He is husband Goals 😍


Mohini is totally rich unclassy snob lady🤬

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

thank u so much 4 the detailed comment.feeling very happy



Originally posted by: TeluguChokri

Aww thank you so much Jasmine and Piyali for making my wish to see them true❤️ It means a lot and Piyali the edits are really so beautiful esp the wedding ones


Coming to the story I liked how it was focused on the racism which is so prevlent in India and so heartbreaking that its scale is measured for marriage. Dhara's mom is so insensitive, thanks to her Dhara could never enjoy her childhood😭 It also created a rivalry between the kids look like and Mohini is so selfish man, just snobbish like in KZK.


And our Hero entered, he is so understanding and has heart of gold

Dhara is lucky that she gold such a broad minded husband. He may be middle class but has more class than you Miss Mohini 


I loved the scenes of Dhara and Gaurav ❤️. So beautiful and heartwarming their scenes were   

Him having first sight love on her, their marriage, their talks and their confession 

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Congrats on the TS

superb update.... well written

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot 4 supporting me.

Yes by mistake I wrote the wrong name.Thank u 4 informing me.

Phirse?🙄

I think AnuVi r smiling in the pic seeing Anupre.

Ahh, I thought so...Kya bana diya Nivi ko abb 😵, I would have watched that crap for Nivi only but makers ne usse bhi nahi choda

I guess it's Swara with Sharmishta in the pic.

Oh ok

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Originally posted by: TeluguChokri

I dislike both Mohini and Sharmista. Latter is a mother still she is majorly responsible for Dhara's inferiority complex, Dhara is lucky to get Gaurav.He is husband Goals 😍

Yup, true but I somewhere felt Sharmishta's way of thinking came from what she herself might have seen around/fed from childhood so I don't know how much I can blame her for that, I still like her because she understood that it was wrong and loved her daughter, Mohini toh


Mohini is totally rich unclassy snob lady🤬

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Originally posted by: TeluguChokri

Aww thank you so much Jasmine and Piyali for making my wish to see them true❤️ It means a lot and Piyali the edits are really so beautiful esp the wedding ones

Thankfully you liked, am so happy 🥳


Coming to the story I liked how it was focused on the racism which is so prevlent in India and so heartbreaking that its scale is measured for marriage. Dhara's mom is so insensitive, thanks to her Dhara could never enjoy her childhood😭 It also created a rivalry between the kids look like and Mohini is so selfish man, just snobbish like in KZK.


And our Hero entered, he is so understanding and has heart of gold

Dhara is lucky that she gold such a broad minded husband. He may be middle class but has more class than you Miss Mohini 


I loved the scenes of Dhara and Gaurav ❤️. So beautiful and heartwarming their scenes were   

Him having first sight love on her, their marriage, their talks and their confession 

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Congratulations on your new TS


Title is Interesting


Part 1


I'm already enjoying both Gaurav and Dhara

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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Piyali,Khwaishfan,

Thank u very much 4 the lovely comments


Thank you Piyali for the cute banners too.


Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi... As You entered my life, everything became complete Part 2


Thank you so much Piyali for all the Harshad Tejasswi edits and the header.





Gaurav went to the bank and withdrew his savings.

Gaurav:I had saved money for future.But now I will use it for my Dhara.She should be a Queen at Ronit's wedding function.

Gaurav bought a costly saree.Then he went to a small jewellery shop.He saw some necklaces.He picked up a necklace.

Gaurav:This is similar to one of the necklaces which Mohiniji wore when we went to congratulate Ronit when his marriage got fixed.

Gaurav:I will buy this.Let everyone know that even Dhara can wear something like Mohiniji wore.My Dhara will look the best in this.

Gaurav bought that necklace.

With excitement he went home.

His mother Radha and father Harshvardhan were shocked.

Harsh:Gaurav...but don't you think it's a wastage of money?This is your future savings?


Radha:We are not rich Gaurav.We can't use money for luxury.


Gaurav:I know.But I am doing this for my wife.Is it wrong?

Harshwardhan and Radha were silent.

Gaurav went to the room where Dhara was standing.

He embraced her from behind.

Dhara blushed:Gauravji!

Gaurav:I have a surprise for you.



He showed her the saree.

Gaurav:You will wear this for Ronit's wedding.

Dhara was stunned:But this is so expensive.

Gaurav:So what?

Gaurav showed her the necklace.

Gaurav:You will wear this also.

Dhara was shocked.

Dhara:This is so expensive.You must have finished your bank balance to buy this.What was the need of this Gauravji?

Gaurav:So what?It's for your brother's wedding.You have the right to be well dressed for your brother's wedding.You can wear this for the future functions you will attend also.

Dhara:But still ...I never longed for such expensive gifts.

Gaurav:But as a husband I want to give nce gifts to my wife.Right?Nobody should look down upon you.

Dhara looked at him emotionally:You are my biggest gift.I don't need anything else.

He was touched by her words.

She embraced him emotionally.


Ronit's wedding....



Gaurav and Dhara arrived at the venue.They were excited too as Dhara was grandly dressed and they unknowingly expected equal treatment from everyone.But what happened was shocking.

Mohini's eyes fell on Dhara's necklace.

Mohini:This is my necklace.

Gaurav:Mohiniji...this looks like your necklace.But it is not your necklace.I bought this for my life.

Mohini:Stop lying.This is the necklace which went missing that day when I was in my daughter in law's maayka.I never thought that it was stolen by you.Otherwise how can a lower middle class man like you afford such an expensive necklace?

All were shocked.

Gaurav:What are you saying Mohiniji?I bought this with my savings for my wife.


Mohini:Don't try to fool me.You are the thief who stole my necklace.

Dhara lost her control as she could not bear her husband getting insulted by Mohini.

Dhara:Stop it Mohini aunty.Don't blame my husband.I know him.He cannot even think of stealing someone else's possession.

Mohini was shocked as a middle class girl like Dhara scolded a rich lady like her.

Mohini:How dare you raise your voice against me?Shekharji..Sharmishtaji...this is how your daughter should behave with me?I am not only older than her,but also from a prestigious family.

Shekhar,Sharmishta and Nivedita became dull.

Sharmishta:Dhara..this is how you should talk to elders?

Shekhar:You should apologize to Mohiniji.


Dhara:I am sorry papa.I talked like that as she accused my innocent husband of stealing.I can't apologize for supporting my husband.



(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).





Mohini was very angry.

Nivedita went near Dhara:Dhara..please apologize and sort out the matter.

Dhara:I am sorry di.I trust my husband.I can only support him.Won't you do the same if anyone accuses of Anupam jiju?

Nivedita became upset.She did not know what to say.

Mohini's ego was hurt.

Mohini:You have to pay for your arrogance Dhara.You and your husband snatched my possession and did not even apologize to me for the theft.I can't keep quiet.

Mohini rang up the police.

Mohini:You don't need to struggle hard to find the thief.I myself caught the thief red handed.Come and arrest him.

All were shocked.

Sharmishta:Mohiniji...are you going to get our son in law arrested?

Mohini:Yes.Because he is only a thief for me.Those who do wrong have to be punished.

Dhara:But my husband is innocent.

Dhara's words were ignored by others.

Moloy:Mohini...what if Gaurav is saying the truth?Do you really want to arrest him now itself?


Mohini:Moloy...I have no doubt about this boy.He is the thief I was looking for.

Moloy was in a dilemma.



The police men came.

Gaurav was panicked.

Gaurav:Sir...please ...I did not steal.

They hand cuffed him.

Dhara:Please leave my husband.He is innocent.

Her pleadings fell on their deaf ears and they took away Gaurav.Even Gaurav's helpless parents requested the police men.But they were also ignored.

Radha:If my son had not used his hard earned money to buy the necklace for you,he would have been safe now.


Harshwardhan:His biggest mistake was buying necklace for his wife to express his overloaded love.



Dhara was crying continuously.

They felt bad for Dhara seeing her cry.

Harsh:We are sorry beta.You supported our son.But being his parents we lost our temper.

Radha:Anyone in our position will behave like us.Right?

Dhara was only crying.

Suddenly Mohini pulled out the necklace she was wearing.

Mohini:This belongs to me,not to you.

Dhara did not bother.She was numb as losing this necklace was nothing compared to losing her husband.



(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).





Dhara looked at Harsh and Radha:Let us go home.

Shekhar:You will not go with them to that thief''s house.You will stay with us.

Dhara was shocked:Papa..you too?

Shekhar:Yes.Because I am concerned about you.From now onwards you will not be associated with that thief in any way.

Dhara was shocked:Papa!

Sharmishta:Papa is right Dhara.

Harshwardhan-Radha left quietly.

Dhara wept:Papaji...maaji..

They did not turn back though they wanted to.

Despite of all this drama,Ronit-Shivani got married.But they were not happy like the usual newly married couples because of the situation.







Gaurav was sentenced to a few months imprisonment.Though nobody trusted Gaurav,Dhara's trust in him did not break.Dhara's parents kept her in their house itself.



Sharmishta shed tears:My daughter's married life got ruined.Who will marry her?

Suddenly she heard a voice.

"Dhara will get a husband and a comfortable life like Nivedita".

Sharmishta and Shekhar were stunned to see Mohini.

Mohini:You may be shocked thinking how I forgave Dhara.I forgave Dhara and brought a nice alliance for her as my brother is more important than my ego.

Shekhar:We did'nt understand anything Mohiniji.

Mohini:My brother Naveen babu is deeply impressed with Dhara.He wants to marry Dhara.I came here to seek Dhara's hand for my brother.

They were shocked.

Shekhar:But Naveen babu's age...

Mohini:Is age an issue for men?

Shekhar:But he is a widower too.

Mohini:So what?Even Dhara is like a widow now.Don't you know that the girls who are separated from their husbands are treated like widows in our place?

They became dull.


Mohini:First of all your daughter is not fair,so no handsome young Prince is going to marry her.Secondly her current status of being separated from her husband is a big drawback.So who will marry her?But my brother Naveen Babu wants to marry her after knowing everything about her.If Dhara marries a rich man like Naveen,she will lead a luxurious life like Nivedita.

Sharmishta:But Dhara loves Gaurav so much that she will not agree.

Mohini got angry:Is she still loving that thief who stole my precious necklace?If you reject my brother,I may even ask my son to leave Nivedita.Anupam will get another beautiful wife easily,But after separated from Anupam,Nivedita will not get any value in the society,

They were shocked as Mohini threatened them.

Sharmishta:It's yes from our side.Please don't ruin Nivi's life.

Mohini smiled:As you said 'yes' Nivedita will be safe in our house.

Shekhar-Sharmishta were relieved.

Sharmishta:But give us more time to convince Dhara.First she should be able to forget Gaurav.Only time can make her forget Gaurav.Otherwise she won't be able to live as another man's wife.

Mohini:Ok.Fine.

Shekhar-Sharmishta were relieved.





Where as Gaurav was toiling a lot without any rest.But even the police officers were nice to him seeing his nice nature.Now they also can't believe that Gaurav could steal.So they decided to enquire about the real thief.

One week he was given the cooking job.

Gaurav found relief in cooking.The jailer got impressed with his cooking and appreciated him.

Jailer:Our jail canteen's cook is on sick leave.Gaurav...I think you should take the charge of cooking.

Gaurav was very happy:Sure Sir.Cooking is something I enjoy a lot.

Gaurav cooked different dishes for the canteen.While cooking he remembered his cute kitchen moments with Dhara.All the police officers enjoyed his food.

The local people who stayed around the Jail also bought food from the jail canteen and Gaurav's food was on literally on demand.They made a lot of profit.



Dhara was cooking in the kitchen.Suddenly she felt that Gaurav was nuzzling on her ear and neck.



Sach kahun toh honth jalte mere
Chup rahun toh saans hi na aaye
Mushqil hai bahut hi
Ab chhupana ya batana




She looked at him only to realize that it was her hallucination.She shed tears.




Zyada paas aana
Hai asal mein door jaana
Mere saath mere
Zakhm bhi hain dard bhi hain
Jinse hai bigadta
Jo bhi chaahun main banana
Mujhe nazdeeqiyon se meri
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...





Gaurav was spending his time in the prison by remembering his lovely moments with Dhara.

Gaurav remembered themselves watching a comedy TV show and bursting out laughing.

Na shikaayat hai tujhe
Shikaayat na mujhe
Magar doori hai
Kya bhala roke humein
Badhe na kyun kadam
Agar doori hai

He remembered them going for a romantic walk in a park.

Poochun tere baare
Chadhte din se shaam se bhi
Na hai chain teri yaad se bhi
Naam se bhi

He smiled thinking of chatting with her on the beach while the sun was setting making the sky more beautiful and romantic.


Aisa kyun hua hai
Yeh pata hai jaante hain
Tujhse bhi muhabbat
Hai muhabbat kaam se bhi
Yunhi nazdeekiyon mein rahi

They both wept thinking of each other.

Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...
Yeh dooriyan...(Love Aaj Kal).





Knowing about Naveen Babu's proposal,Dhara protested a lot.

Dhara:What?

You all know that I Iove only my Gauravji?

Then how can you ask me to marry someone else?

Shekhar-Sharmishta became very upset.

Sharmishta:Mohiniji has threatened us that if you don't marry her brother she will get Anupam and Nivi divorced.Anupam can never go against his mother.

Dhara was shocked.

Sharmishta:If you don't marry him,our Nivi's married life will be spoiled.Only you can save Nivi's married life.

Dhara was in deep pain.

Dhara:Ok.I will marry Naveen babu.

If Nivi di's married life gets spoiled because of me I will never be able to forgive myself.But I can never be a good wife to him.

Dhara ran away crying leaving Shekhar-Sharmishta in pain.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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