SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 112

Originally posted by: Home786

@bold Nothing much but I felt Abir's dialogues little mismatching with his changed characterisation in season 2....As I got six messages regarding it.. That's why.

I loved the way the episode went in a sequential manner.

Yes we can end the episode here. Tomorrow we can continue with episode 2 in the same way.

I can also sequence the scenes for tomorrow's episode now itself so that you people can get time to prepare well in advance..

Shaheen how are the feedbacks?🤔

What all improvements are the readers asking for?

I'm also planning to write in advance....today i really liked the coordination👏

We really know scene after scene ....just keep doing like this 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Home786

If possible please do edit it.

Frame your dialogues in such a way where only Abir's respect and concern should be shown not love.....

Abir's actual feelings will be revealed afterwards in upcoming episodes as maha episode...

Edit kardiya maine Shaheen 👍🏼 check it. Abh tikh hai na?

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Shaheen how are the feedbacks?🤔

What all improvements are the readers asking for?

I'm also planning to write in advance....today i really liked the coordination👏

We really know scene after scene ....just keep doing like this 👍🏼

Scenes for tomorrow's episode:

1. It's a puja in singhania mansion and Bua gives the responsibility to Pooja.

2. Abir is also on leave today. He is also engaged in arrangements outside.

3. Pooja is struggling to hung the flowers on the walls where Abir helps her.

4. Then Aditi will drag Abir to Pooja's where she is getting ready to select her a good saree.. There's a little bit of Abir and Pooja.

5. Bua ask Pooja to take paani ka matka for puja purpose where Abir is against it.

6. Rajeev comes to Puja where Pooja and Rajeev convo doesn't go well with Abir.

7. Bua and Aditi have a cute convo.

8. Puja scene where pandit ji will ask Pooja to aarti with her husband where Abir comes front and does the aarti with her.

The episode can end with cliffhanger as why Abir did that?

Originally posted by: Home786

Scenes for tomorrow's episode:

1. It's a puja in singhania mansion and Bua gives the responsibility to Pooja.

2. Abir is also on leave today. He is also engaged in arrangements outside.

3. Pooja is struggling to hung the flowers on the walls where Abir helps her.

4. Then Aditi will drag Abir to Pooja's where she is getting ready to select her a good saree.. There's a little bit of Abir and Pooja.

5. Bua ask Pooja to take paani ka matka for puja purpose where Abir is against it.

6. Rajeev comes to Puja where Pooja and Rajeev convo doesn't go well with Abir.

7. Bua and Aditi have a cute convo.

8. Puja scene where pandit ji will ask Pooja to aarti with her husband where Abir comes front and does the aarti with her.

The episode can end with cliffhanger as why Abir did that?

Okay👍🏼

Shaheen do I have any dialogues here with bua or abir

Or is it just with pooja?

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Okay👍🏼

Shaheen do I have any dialogues here with bua or abir

Or is it just with pooja?

Originally posted by: Home786

Scenes for tomorrow's episode:

1. It's a puja in singhania mansion and Bua gives the responsibility to Pooja.

2. Abir is also on leave today. He is also engaged in arrangements outside.

3. Pooja is struggling to hung the flowers on the walls where Abir helps her.

4. Then Aditi will drag Abir to Pooja's where she is getting ready to select her a good saree.. There's a little bit of Abir and Pooja.

5. Bua ask Pooja to take paani ka matka for puja purpose where Abir is against it.

6. Rajeev comes to Puja where Pooja and Rajeev convo doesn't go well with Abir.

7. Bua and Aditi have a cute convo.

8. Puja scene where pandit ji will ask Pooja to aarti with her husband where Abir comes front and does the aarti with her.

The episode can end with cliffhanger as why Abir did that?

Why is he against it?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Edit kardiya maine Shaheen 👍🏼 check it. Abh tikh hai na?

Anmol ke saath hadsa yeh kyun reveal kiya re??

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

I'm also excited to know you too shrishti.....🤗salim saheb ki deewani😆😳

Bold - Hain, yeh sahi pakda tumne 😳 Salim ki Srishti ❤️

You already know about my pagalpan if you know about this

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Why is he against it?

Originally posted by: Home786

sab theek hai magar

Anmol ke saath hadsa yeh kyun reveal kiya re??

Oh revealing laga? I thought that hadsa can mean anything? It doesn’t have to mean that he’s dead you know.

Edit karke aati hoon.