SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 111

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Comparing nahin hain, just generally main Abir ke character ke liye dialogues create nahin karsakti he is so different from me.

Shaheen is like next level. Super se bhi upar ❤️

I'm so happy that it's due to shaheen I came across you too guyss🤗

I can understand you shrishti ...I'm also in a similar situation 😆 in real life I can't imagine a character like rajeev😆

Don't know how will I absorb that darkness in myself for some time to play a dark person like rajeev🤣

In real life I'm entirely different😆

but I'm really enjoying time with you guyss🤗

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

I'm so happy that it's due to shaheen I came across you too guyss🤗

I can understand you shrishti ...I'm also in a similar situation 😆 in real life I can't imagine a character like rajeev😆

Don't know how will I absorb that darkness in myself for some time to play a dark person like rajeev🤣

In real life I'm entirely different😆

but I'm really enjoying time with you guyss🤗

I am glad I can across you Krishna 🤗

I don’t understand how someone can be so strict and quiet like Abir, main 25/7 bol sakti hoon aur woh bhi bina ruke 😆

But I am trying 😳 and shaheen helps a lot too.

I am really excited to get to know you more Krishna 🤗

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I am glad I can across you Krishna 🤗

I don’t understand how someone can be so strict and quiet like Abir, main 25/7 bol sakti hoon aur woh bhi bina ruke 😆

But I am trying 😳 and shaheen helps a lot too.

I am really excited to get to know you more Krishna 🤗

It looks like I am seeing Abir of first season..

Do you felt so..??

Originally posted by: Home786

Shristi just one correction just remove "Ji" from Pooja from Abir's dialogue but do continue as "aap"...

For example: Pooja kahan thi aap...

Abh kya karein shaheen? Do we end today’s episode here?

I really enjoyed today’s episode Shaheen it was soo organized and I loved the long dialouges we had.

You were awesome (like always) and Krishna was amazing. Can’t wait to see her dark side

Nithya needed more scenes tho and I am ready for tomorrow because I know that she will have much more scenes tomorrow. She literally lights us the whole forum with her dialogues

Originally posted by: Home786

Why do I feel Abir's dialogues in last scene were out of character sketch as per new season.

It looks like I am seeing Abir of first season..

Do you felt so..??

Really? Maybe. It was pretty similar to what Abir was like in S1

I was trying to show his emotional hurt side without mentioning Anmol’s death. I didn’t recheck tho, so maybe yeah.

Do you want me to edit it?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Abh kya karein shaheen? Do we end today’s episode here?

I really enjoyed today’s episode Shaheen it was soo organized and I loved the long dialouges we had.

You were awesome (like always) and Krishna was amazing. Can’t wait to see her dark side

Nithya needed more scenes tho and I am ready for tomorrow because I know that she will have much more scenes tomorrow. She literally lights us the whole forum with her dialogues

I loved the way the episode went in a sequential manner.

Yes we can end the episode here. Tomorrow we can continue with episode 2 in the same way.

I can also sequence the scenes for tomorrow's episode now itself so that you people can get time to prepare well in advance..

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Really? Maybe. It was pretty similar to what Abir was like in S1

I was trying to show his emotional hurt side without mentioning Anmol’s death. I didn’t recheck tho, so maybe yeah.

Do you want me to edit it?

Frame your dialogues in such a way where only Abir's respect and concern should be shown not love.....

Abir's actual feelings will be revealed afterwards in upcoming episodes as maha episode...

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I am glad I can across you Krishna 🤗

I don’t understand how someone can be so strict and quiet like Abir, main 25/7 bol sakti hoon aur woh bhi bina ruke 😆

But I am trying 😳 and shaheen helps a lot too.

I am really excited to get to know you more Krishna 🤗

I'm also excited to know you too shrishti.....🤗salim saheb ki deewani😆😳

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Abh kya karein shaheen? Do we end today’s episode here?

I really enjoyed today’s episode Shaheen it was soo organized and I loved the long dialouges we had.

You were awesome (like always) and Krishna was amazing. Can’t wait to see her dark side

Nithya needed more scenes tho and I am ready for tomorrow because I know that she will have much more scenes tomorrow. She literally lights us the whole forum with her dialogues

I'm so happy shrishti the episode was well organised.....

Let's see more of nitya di in upcoming episodes more😳yes her dialogues and specially the slang is soo good...😆I like her as bua❤️

Scenes for tomorrow's episode:

1. It's a puja in singhania mansion and Bua gives the responsibility to Pooja.

2. Abir is also on leave today. He is also engaged in arrangements outside.

3. Pooja is struggling to hung the flowers on the walls where Abir helps her.

4. Then Aditi will drag Abir to Pooja's where she is getting ready to select her a good saree.. There's a little bit of Abir and Pooja.

5. Bua ask Pooja to take paani ka matka for puja purpose where Abir is against it.

6. Rajeev comes to Puja where Pooja and Rajeev convo doesn't go well with Abir.

7. Bua and Aditi have a cute convo.

8. Puja scene where pandit ji will ask Pooja to aarti with her husband where Abir comes front and does the aarti with her.

The episode can end with cliffhanger as why Abir did that?