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Bondita was walking in the garden, talking to herself. That was her. She was her best advisor. She would just have a talk with herself and there was a solution to her problems. But today, she didn't get a solution, pretty strange! "Boudi, main kabse tumko dhund raha hoon. Tum yahan ho." Batuk came in the garden and said. Over the years, they have grown to be great friends, partners-in-crime sorta friends. "Mujhe tang mat karo. Main kuch soch rahi." Bondita said and continued to take rounds of the garden, trying to understand her problems. "Tum sochti bhi ho?" Batuk cracked a lame joke and earned a stare from Bondita. Yes, they were friends, best of friends. "Tumhare Dada kya Pari Didi se pyaar karte the?" Bondita asked, Her expressions unchanged, as if it was a regular question. "Tum ye kyun soch rahi?" Batuk was taken off guard. "Batao na Batuk." Bondita asked. "Haan." He said, in a low voice. He didn't know what Aniruddh had for Mini was just an attraction of that tender teenage years. "Toh unn dono ko saath hona chahiye na? Na ki mujhe aur unhein?" Bondita asked and of course there was a sad smile on her face but she got the solution to her problem, or was that solution, really? Who knows! Kuch cheezon mein shayad tark vitark kuch kaam nahi karta. Kuch cheezein inn sab se bahut upar hoti hain. Par ye Bondita ko kaun samjhaye?






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Why did I write this? Because everyone else was planning to write something. This was a crazy stuff I didn't even think before writing. Sorry for it, already. 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was beautiful!❤️

Her inner turmoil was shown in few words( it was kind of sad... But beautiful... Fulfilling). I absolutely loved it!


Sorry I don't know your name? Did you tell me? May be I forgot due tO my Ghajini memory?🤔

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Originally posted by: Rusty_Quill

It was beautiful!❤️

Her inner turmoil was shown in few words( it was kind of sad... But beautiful... Fulfilling). I absolutely loved it!


Sorry I don't know your name? Did you tell me? May be I forgot due tO my Ghajini memory?🤔



Aww, thank you so much. Means a lot🤗




I don't go by any name. Like my UN suggests,you may call me Hash/Octo/OT as it pleases you😳

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Originally posted by: Octothorpe



Aww, thank you so much. Means a lot🤗




I don't go by any name. Like my UN suggests,you may call me Hash/Octo/OT as it pleases you😳

ok... Octo it is then.😉
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Originally posted by: Rusty_Quill

ok... Octo it is then.😉


Cool enough. Everyone here calls me that! 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Octo can you please teach me how do you manage to depict so much emotions in some words

It's great❤️but age kya hoga I want to know 🥺

And I liked one line the most She is her best advisor 👏❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It must be lovely but I can't understand. 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Octo😳

It's beautiful

You depicted her emotions so well in simple words that too without much drama....love batuk bon banter❤️

She is her best advisor...👏for this one line

So sad to see her smile with a sadness still strong enough to face the truth😭


I wish to see what happens next?

Please continue this ....❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Octo this is really stupendous re...👏


You have depicted her agony and painful analogy with some much impactful emotions. We could feel with your words.


Though it's short but really appreciable. Do write more. You're a great writer👍🏼😊.


Waiting for next part too...!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This scene definitely can happen in the show as well 😆

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