Drabble : Tark - Page 2

Deep 💔

Loved the way you deciphered her emotions ❤️

But didn't batuk was the one who asked his dada that he loves "patra wali ladki" more than him

Just being curious 😆

Loved it octo ❤️

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Octo can you please teach me how do you manage to depict so much emotions in some words

It's great❤️but age kya hoga I want to know 🥺

And I liked one line the most She is her best advisor 👏❤️

Aww, I'm glad you felt the emotions even in little words. I don't really put any thoughts to them most of the time but maybe they are really the words my heart want to say. So I'll suggest, just writ what your hearts tell you to😳

Thank you Prit🤗

Originally posted by: caller123

It must be lovely but I can't understand. 😭

Aww, I'm sorry. I'm freaking lazy when it comes to write translation to my work. But I'll try to put less Hindi in next ones. Or you may just ignore my stories. They are not that great any ways🤗

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Octo😳

It's beautiful

You depicted her emotions so well in simple words that too without much drama....love batuk bon banter❤️. Aww thank you🤗

She is her best advisor...👏for this one line. That's what I believe in for myself😳

So sad to see her smile with a sadness still strong enough to face the truth😭

I wish to see what happens next?

Please continue this ....❤️

I'll try to continue, I'm not sure. Anyway, thank you🤗

Originally posted by: Home786

Octo this is really stupendous re...👏. Aww, thank you🤗

You have depicted her agony and painful analogy with some much impactful emotions. We could feel with your words. I'm happy that you did😳

Though it's short but really appreciable. Do write more. You're a great writer👍🏼😊.

Waiting for next part too...!!!

Thank you so much Shaheen. I'm glad you liked this😃

Originally posted by: Ariel6

This scene definitely can happen in the show as well 😆

I hope it does😛

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Deep 💔

Loved the way you deciphered her emotions ❤️

But didn't batuk was the one who asked his dada that he loves "patra wali ladki" more than him

Just being curious 😆

Loved it octo ❤️

I'm really forgetful of a lot of things but okay! Imagine that Batuk didn't remember about the patr wali ladki and of course didn't know it was Bondita😛

Thank you Lalz🤗

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Aww, I'm sorry. I'm freaking lazy when it comes to write translation to my work. But I'll try to put less Hindi in next ones. Or you may just ignore my stories. They are not that great any ways🤗

Originally posted by: caller123

It's ok Octo. I can understand. I thought you might feel bad when I do not read and comment. From the English part I felt like I love this.🤗

Aww, it's okay. Maybe I'll try to put a translation of future stories for you. Thank you so much. You are absolute sweetheart🤗

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Aww, it's okay. Maybe I'll try to put a translation of future stories for you. Thank you so much. You are absolute sweetheart🤗

These days episodes are not good. So rather than watching them to bang my head I love read stories.