SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 64

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I am sorry Nithya. In the beginning itself, I doubted whether I could play the role of Abir good and you see the results. After shaheen said that the story will end, I just started to write whatever came in my mind for the dialogues for Abir, I didn’t even think whether it wouldn’t go for his character or not. And Friday, I totally just made Abir into a comical character. I really feel bad for changing the Abir then to now.

I could have done better. I don’t know why I just changed Abir’s character at the end but it was a really bad choice and I regret it now.

Completely agree.

Do you know about Shaheen's best stories with beautiful irony.

1. Pyaar ke Saath vachan with 570 episodes.

2. Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain 334 episodes still running with same hype.

Quest of Love is mixture of both stories with damn superb Characterisation.

Prem Wadhwa and Amar Monohtra of the respectable stories respectively are most loved characters till date.

We all expect such beautiful ending. Past is past.

It can't be redeem.

Originally posted by: Prit_007

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Originally posted by: Home786

Prit maine story ka end update kar diya hai. Pg. 51 and 52 padho aur batao. Kaisi hai ending.???

It's beautiful Shaheen, really beautiful ❣️🤗

Originally posted by: Prit_007

It's beautiful Shaheen, really beautiful ❣️🤗

Originally posted by: Home786

Did you read fully? How did I potray your role? How's the monologue for each character? How did I end Abir's role?

Ha yaar padh ke hi bol rahi. You portrayed everyone's character beautifully even bua's. I PMed you tune check kiya?

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Ha yaar padh ke hi bol rahi. You portrayed everyone's character beautifully even bua's. I PMed you tune check kiya?

I am glad you liked it Prit.... Thank you so much.❤️🤗

This is how I expected the ending that every character answers their quest as per monologue in a delicate ,unique and different fashion.

Originally posted by: Home786

Yeah Just now I gone through it.

I am glad you liked it Prit.... Thank you so much.❤️🤗

This is how I expected the ending that every character answers their quest as per monologue in a delicate ,unique and different fashion.

🤗❤️

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Is it gonna be like a short epilogue telling the afterwards story?

Main thread check kar.

Originally posted by: Home786

Shristi pm check kar behen. I have updated and ended the story finally.

Main thread check kar.

I had already read it Shaheen. I just couldn’t find enough time to write this detailed review so now, that I finally have time, here it is:

Anamika: Oh, Anamika was the one of the character who’s personality stayed the same throughout and her change also made sense. Her love for Anmol was true but I guess not everyone can be selfless when it comes to love. I feel like Anmol and her had that friendship bond missing in the episodes which you got back in the last episode. Anmol’s longing for her and doubt regarding him being a good friend was very realistic. I know this isn’t possible but I would love to have a very short short sneak peak in her life at UK. How Aman and her bond grows.

She got the ending she deserved. A new life in a new place, a perfect place for her to move on from the mess in her life.

Anmol: This dude really loves his bhai ha? He always ends up bringing his bhai in a conversation. Well, I can feel his confusion regarding their friendship. Best friends are suppose to share everything, isn’t it? Well, not quite. There are some things that we just can’t share with anyone, regardless of who you are. I had completely forgot about Pooja’s case that was suppose to be opened again. His love for Pooja is so pure ❤️. He just wants to be their for her, he doesn’t care about getting her love. One of the reasons why I think he really isn’t pushing her is because he knows that sooner or later Pooja will fall for him because, well, it’s just makes sense why Pooja would. I would love to see his lawyer roop in the serial if this had been longer.

Pooja: Another consistent character in this show. I liked how you made her love slowburn, she doesn’t love someone easily but when she does, she will do anything for them. And I think that’s how Anmol and her love will be like. She will be the “stronger” one emotionally one, atleast that’s what I got from the scene where she was explaining to him about Anamika and friendship and I completely agree that we somehow end up being the reason for someone else’s sadness. Again, I would have loved to see how she faces her past while talking about it in the court. It isn’t really hard to think about traumatizing events, forget about having to explain everything in detail. Her and Aditi’s bond is one I think should have been explored more. I wish Sharmili could have still played Aditi’s character. We would have gotten more cuter scenes between Aditi and Pooja.

Vasundhara Bua: Her p.o.v regarding superstitions is so right. We tend to use the ones which is more beneficial to us and ignore the ones that harm us. We humans are so complex huh? We tend to be naturally selfish. Even the most selfless person who helps literally everyone, aren’t they doing it because it gives them happiness when they help others?

Abir: What can I say about this character? This character was very confused throughout the story and that was because I was trying to make it slow. I wanted to first show it’s turmoil, then him being more clear in his feelings to get Pooja, then him actually doing things to get her but alas, the story had to end before it even properly started. The Abir you showed was what I wanted my Abir to be towards the end. Selflessly loving Pooja, doing things to help others. But I also wanted to keep the grey ness in him still, I still tried to show it in the birthday episode when he smirked while looking at his rival who caused the chandelier to fall, indicating him planning something. Abir will hold a very special place in my heart. He let me try something very different and even though I wasn’t that good at it, it taught me a bit throughout on how to show these kind of characters so yeah. I would have loved to see your version of Abir Shaheen.

I think you did a really good job making the character sound like how the other Participants would show it.

I feel that for our next story, we should have people who can take up other participants role for that day if they can’t make it. It makes it much easier for the story to go on.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I had already read it Shaheen. I just couldn’t find enough time to write this detailed review so now, that I finally have time, here it is:

Hi, Shristi.. Sorry for the late reply. I am glad we could end the story with dignified monologues to their quest and ended with question mark to begin with new season😆.

Anamika: Oh, Anamika was the one of the character who’s personality stayed the same throughout and her change also made sense. Her love for Anmol was true but I guess not everyone can be selfless when it comes to love. I feel like Anmol and her had that friendship bond missing in the episodes which you got back in the last episode. Anmol’s longing for her and doubt regarding him being a good friend was very realistic. I know this isn’t possible but I would love to have a very short short sneak peak in her life at UK. How Aman and her bond grows. She got the ending she deserved. A new life in a new place, a perfect place for her to move on from the mess in her life.

Yeahh, Anamika was the one consistent character throughout the story. I must tell Prit nailed it. Her love was very true but way of portraying is different. I am glad I could bring the highlight of their friendship at last which is very much needed. Definitely, if there was season 2 of this story, the Anamika and Aman relationship will be explore completely. Their friendship must be cute and caring which will destined to be together. Pyar Dosti hai...

Anmol: This dude really loves his bhai ha? He always ends up bringing his bhai in a conversation. Well, I can feel his confusion regarding their friendship. Best friends are suppose to share everything, isn’t it? Well, not quite. There are some things that we just can’t share with anyone, regardless of who you are. I had completely forgot about Pooja’s case that was suppose to be opened again. His love for Pooja is so pure ❤️. He just wants to be their for her, he doesn’t care about getting her love. One of the reasons why I think he really isn’t pushing her is because he knows that sooner or later Pooja will fall for him because, well, it’s just makes sense why Pooja would. I would love to see his lawyer roop in the serial if this had been longer.

This character is one such character which I wanted to be unique and special just like " Prem Wadhwa from my story pyar ke saath vachan " but unfortunately it didn't played out in that way. But he is one selfless character in the entire story and of course confused soul too. But one thing is lacked in his character, no one to one conversation with anyone which I am happy that possibly I can play out in last two episodes. One with his Bhai and two with Pooja which was very needed. Actually, I want this character to play in a different way. Yeah he never forces his love on anyone as he didn't got one. Yeah, the lawyer role needs some fierce and power pack dialogues to engage readers that's why I didn't include in the story. I just stopped from there. If possible I will share some good praised dialogues from my story lawyer... I thank Mishti for consistently being there for me.

Pooja: Another consistent character in this show. I liked how you made her love slowburn, she doesn’t love someone easily but when she does, she will do anything for them. And I think that’s how Anmol and her love will be like. She will be the “stronger” one emotionally one, atleast that’s what I got from the scene where she was explaining to him about Anamika and friendship and I completely agree that we somehow end up being the reason for someone else’s sadness. Again, I would have loved to see how she faces her past while talking about it in the court. It isn’t really hard to think about traumatizing events, forget about having to explain everything in detail. Her and Aditi’s bond is one I think should have been explored more. I wish Sharmili could have still played Aditi’s character. We would have gotten more cuter scenes between Aditi and Pooja.

This character is traumatized character and I wished to play in a different way but seeing the progression, I opted out of it. Physically she is weak and hurt but mentally she is strong enough. Emotionally she can sue anyone. She has the great analogy to convince anyone with her talks and selfless goodness. If I have proceeded this character as I have planned that would have been really new and endeavoring. She is the girl who can spell out logical truth. Yeahh, I too wish Sharmi would have played Aditi.. Unfortunately, I am upset with the portrayal of this character.

Vasundhara Bua: Her p.o.v regarding superstitions is so right. We tend to use the ones which is more beneficial to us and ignore the ones that harm us. We humans are so complex huh? We tend to be naturally selfish. Even the most selfless person who helps literally everyone, aren’t they doing it because it gives them happiness when they help others?

Bua is the character wisely written with all kinds of genre. Hats off to her nailing it in first experience. I didn't expected this from her honestly. She did her role as per to monologue very well. One of the most consistent and evergreen character I will adore. I hope I have given justified monologue to her character.

Abir: What can I say about this character? This character was very confused throughout the story and that was because I was trying to make it slow. I wanted to first show it’s turmoil, then him being more clear in his feelings to get Pooja, then him actually doing things to get her but alas, the story had to end before it even properly started. The Abir you showed was what I wanted my Abir to be towards the end. Selflessly loving Pooja, doing things to help others. But I also wanted to keep the grey ness in him still, I still tried to show it in the birthday episode when he smirked while looking at his rival who caused the chandelier to fall, indicating him planning something. Abir will hold a very special place in my heart. He let me try something very different and even though I wasn’t that good at it, it taught me a bit throughout on how to show these kind of characters so yeah. I would have loved to see your version of Abir Shaheen.

Abir is personali one my favorite character whom I expected to be consistent throughout. See, this character needs lot of perseverance and shrewdness. He is good but hard nut to crack. His opinions and desires must have kept unexplainable. He can't be good to everyone but only for few whom he loves. He must have maintained the hardness and silence til last moment. The dialogues must have chosen wisely which will be epic and double meaning. If you have asked, I would have shared too many dialogues for him from my stories. Sadly, I couldn't find any classy oneliners here. But you did potrayey your role excellently till episode 12. But in went into mess from episode 13. I wish you could have kept intact as you're my favorite one. If there is next part, I want you to portray the same role again in a different fashion. My story's Abir will only be You.

I think you did a really good job making the character sound like how the other Participants would show it.

Yeahh thank you for that. I am glad I can make it. But it's really a tedious process to potray everything single handedly re. But I'm happy after all negative responses, I could do something to change into positive ones. The last scene of every character was praised and praising. Thank you all for supporting me and giving a endeavoring memories to me.

I feel that for our next story, we should have people who can take up other participants role for that day if they can’t make it. It makes it much easier for the story to go on.

I am in work compiling all the reviews and feedbacks. Will give very soon.

Nithya Akka and many readers have suggested to bring season 2 of this story with same yet different tracks... Did she shared with you regarding that??