SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 63

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Is it gonna be like a short epilogue telling the afterwards story?

Originally posted by: Home786

No yaar seriously and TBH, we lost the plot from Episode 13....Readers especially almost everyone saying the same. That characterisation and plot changed suddenly since last two episodes. And they expected this ending where I have promised them different..

Yeh. I am sorry though shaheen. I changed the character of Abir. He was suppose to be strict and mean types but I just changed it to the complete opposites. I should have just tried to stick to the characterization of just told you that it was getting difficult for me. I doubted that I would be able to play this character fine and well it turned out to be true.

Also another thing is, for the way this story was, it was too short. This should have had at least 25 episodes. We hadn’t even reached the whole point of the story before we ended it. But of course, timing issues and participation issues got in the way.

We definitely need to work A LOT in this serial writing activity so that it isn’t as confusing or messed up.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Is it gonna be like a short epilogue telling the afterwards story?

But this is the ending she told me.

I lost the charm of Abir's character in Episode 12.

I couldn't connect with Abir from Episode 13.

You should have maintain the intact of Abir's character till last.

That would have been the best.

Anmol and Pooja are the leads of the story but there is no scenes of them.

The title of story is "Quest of love" as per monologue whose quest is going to win. the story started with question mark and ended with no answer to monologue. The story headed to a different ending. Sorry to offend you @Home786.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Yeh. I am sorry though shaheen. I changed the character of Abir. He was suppose to be strict and mean types but I just changed it to the complete opposites. I should have just tried to stick to the characterization of just told you that it was getting difficult for me. I doubted that I would be able to play this character fine and well it turned out to be true.

Also another thing is, for the way this story was, it was too short. This should have had at least 25 episodes. We hadn’t even reached the whole point of the story before we ended it. But of course, timing issues and participation issues got in the way.

We definitely need to work A LOT in this serial writing activity so that it isn’t as confusing or messed up.

Agree Shristi.

If you don't mind can I play your role along with Anmol's tomorrow to give it an apt ending???????

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

She told me the story at beginning itself.

But this is the ending she told me.

I lost the charm of Abir's character in Episode 12.

I couldn't connect with Abir from Episode 13.

You should have maintain the intact of Abir's character till last.

That would have been the best.

Anmol and Pooja are the leads of the story but there is no scenes of them.

The title of story is "Quest of love" as per monologue whose quest is going to win. the story started with question mark and ended with no answer to monologue. The story headed to a different ending. Sorry to offend you @Home786.

I am sorry Nithya. In the beginning itself, I doubted whether I could play the role of Abir good and you see the results. After shaheen said that the story will end, I just started to write whatever came in my mind for the dialogues for Abir, I didn’t even think whether it wouldn’t go for his character or not. And Friday, I totally just made Abir into a comical character. I really feel bad for changing the Abir then to now.

I could have done better. I don’t know why I just changed Abir’s character at the end but it was a really bad choice and I regret it now.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Yeh. I am sorry though shaheen. I changed the character of Abir. He was suppose to be strict and mean types but I just changed it to the complete opposites. I should have just tried to stick to the characterization of just told you that it was getting difficult for me. I doubted that I would be able to play this character fine and well it turned out to be true.

Also another thing is, for the way this story was, it was too short. This should have had at least 25 episodes. We hadn’t even reached the whole point of the story before we ended it. But of course, timing issues and participation issues got in the way.

We definitely need to work A LOT in this serial writing activity so that it isn’t as confusing or messed up.

Originally posted by: Home786

Hmmm.

Agree Shristi.

If you don't mind can I play your role along with Anmol's tomorrow to give it an apt ending???????

Sure shaheen. BY this point, it’s only you who can give this story the ending it deserves.

Originally posted by: Home786

Do you guys want me to post the feedback or reviews I got from readers? Shall I post the complete feedback here compiling everything since beginning???

I would love read the reviews the feedbacks shaheen.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Sure shaheen. BY this point, it’s only you who can give this story the ending it deserves.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I would love read the reviews the feedbacks shaheen.