MiNeil SS: "HEAR MY SILENCE" (Epilogue 2.0 updated)

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Because sometimes silence is the voice of soul....

           Bringing to you...


"HEAR MY SILENCE"


Hi guys,

 I know as per the promise I should have been presenting something else but this story has just been hovering in my mind since a long time so before starting any new long ff I decided to jot down this short story first.


Guys, do share your veiws on this Mineil.

Should I continue it or not?

How you felt about the first part?

Hope you would like it.


Happy reading ahead😊


PART1 (updated on page1)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153699930


PART2 (updated on page 3)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153708237



PART 3(updated on page 8)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153720345



PART 4(updated on page10)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153731659


PART 5 (updated on page 12)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153748739



PART 6 (updated on page13)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153756977



PART 7 (updated on page 15)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153779706



PART8 (updated on page17)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153802927



PART 9(updated on page 20)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153827070


PART10 (updated on page21)

Link:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153838068



Epilogue  updated on page 32


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154509214











A BRIEF CHARACTER SKETCH.

 

Neil Oberoi: Here Neil is a back bencher who loves to bully others for the sake of fun. 

He is a life loving guy for whom his friends and music matters the most. He doesn't find anything worth in learning the facts and jotting them down again in exam whereas he is a born rockstar.

Minni Singh: Minni is a school topper for whom studies are like worship. She doesn't find anything good in troubling others and then justifying it as 'living life'. She has always hated Neil's ways of defining and living life but couldn't denie the fact that She has grown up watching him from the corners of her eyes but never could gather courage to even interact with him. She is a bookworm who had always kept herself aloof from the world till life hit her hard and exposed her to the harsh reality.


Mickey Ahuja: Neil's best friend cum brother since childhood for whom Neil can even stake his life. He is also a good friend of Minni or say the only single string between Mini and Neil.


● Preet, Bobby and Jass-  Neil's other best friends 


Khatri- Maths teacher who doesn't like Neil much.

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My heart went for Mini❤️ poor little girl but she has Neil now 😉 it was beautiful update . waiting for tapri and Neil 

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Originally posted by: Krithzz

My heart went for Mini❤️ poor little girl but she has Neil now 😉 it was beautiful update . waiting for tapri and Neil 

thanks....glad u liked it...❤

Well Minni had to be exposed to reality so...a hit was neccessary to push from her comfort zone in future.

Will Update soon💜💜

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Hayee Babita ko nahi jhelna padega uff thank you.... And Mera HS😭😭

Mini 🤗🤗

Neil , hmmm The bully helping his tapri 

I always wanted to see a college/school romance on them Thank you for this

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Tapri🤣🤣🤣

Reminded me of school days we also used to call one friend in our group as tapri but the reason was different😆

This was so so cute and refreshing and ....well... Just wow....i really dont have words to praise it.

Neil the rockstar❤️❤️❤️

I loved characterisation. I love rockstar background wali story. I once tried to write one on other tv show couple many years ago but left it in between😳😆. Still that story is close to my heart.


So neil is bully...that kind of bully who mocks the girl he likes secretly....right?

And chupke chupke mini ke dil mein bhu kuch kuch hota hai


Loved every bit of it. Cant wait to read more. You better update this one on time😆😈

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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Tapri🤣🤣🤣

Reminded me of school days we also used to call one friend in our group as tapri but the reason was different😆

This was so so cute and refreshing and ....well... Just wow....i really dont have words to praise it.

Neil the rockstar❤️❤️❤️

I loved characterisation. I love rockstar background wali story. I once tried to write one on other tv show couple many years ago but left it in between😳😆. Still that story is close to my heart.


So neil is bully...that kind of bully who mocks the girl he likes secretly....right?

And chupke chupke mini ke dil mein bhu kuch kuch hota hai


Loved every bit of it. Cant wait to read more. You better update this one on time😆😈

@bold or else Anjali will make sure her Don comes into action here and make it dangerous for you

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Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

@bold or else Anjali will make sure her Don comes into action here and make it dangerous for you

Yes😈

Mera maaya wala roop jagrut mat karo😈

🤣🤣

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Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Hayee Babita ko nahi jhelna padega uff thank you....

Thank u ...thanku...

@zalima ki Nirupa roy ka drama bore krne lga tha ab actually 


And Mera HS😭😭

Sorry....but it was quite neccessary for the future progress of the story.

Hope u won't mind and bear with it❤❤

Mini 🤗🤗

Neil , hmmm The bully helping his tapri 

Yes...Minni is witnessing his unshown colours🤣🤣

I always wanted to see a college/school romance on them Thank you for this

Thanks to you❤...i have been contantly thinking what if you all find it all kiddish and mushy....but glad u liked it💜💜

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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Tapri🤣🤣🤣

Reminded me of school days we also used to call one friend in our group as tapri but the reason was different😆

Hard🤣🤣🤣 now this will leave me thinking of the reason😅😅



This was so so cute and refreshing and ....well... Just wow....i really dont have words to praise it.

Thanks alot



Neil the rockstar❤️❤️❤️

I loved characterisation. I love rockstar background wali story. I once tried to write one on other tv show couple many years ago but left it in between😳😆. Still that story is close to my heart.

Glad u liked and it let you reminisce ur those golden days❤

So neil is bully...that kind of bully who mocks the girl he likes secretly....right?

Well...thora suspense me aap bhi rahiye mohtarma...😅 bhut tarpaaye hai aap...

Well u'll get it soon ...probably in the next update😆



And chupke chupke mini ke dil mein bhu kuch kuch hota hai

Haan😂😂😂 Mineil can't resist each other afterall and here both are naive. Don't know how to put their feelings forward.


Loved every bit of it. Cant wait to read more. You better update this one on time😆😈

Glad u liked it...will update soon💜💜

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