MiNeil SS: "HEAR MY SILENCE" (Epilogue 2.0 updated)

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Because sometimes silence is the voice of soul....

Bringing to you...


"HEAR MY SILENCE"


Hi guys,

I know as per the promise I should have been presenting something else but this story has just been hovering in my mind since a long time so before starting any new long ff I decided to jot down this short story first.


Guys, do share your veiws on this Mineil.

Should I continue it or not?

How you felt about the first part?

Hope you would like it.


Happy reading ahead😊


PART1 (updated on page1)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153699930


PART2 (updated on page 3)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153708237



PART 3(updated on page 8)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153720345



PART 4(updated on page10)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153731659


PART 5 (updated on page 12)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153748739



PART 6 (updated on page13)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153756977



PART 7 (updated on page 15)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153779706



PART8 (updated on page17)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153802927



PART 9(updated on page 20)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153827070


PART10 (updated on page21)

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153838068



Epilogue updated on page 32


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154509214











A BRIEF CHARACTER SKETCH.

ā—Neil Oberoi: Here Neil is a back bencher who loves to bully others for the sake of fun.

He is a life loving guy for whom his friends and music matters the most. He doesn't find anything worth in learning the facts and jotting them down again in exam whereas he is a born rockstar.

ā—Minni Singh: Minni is a school topper for whom studies are like worship. She doesn't find anything good in troubling others and then justifying it as 'living life'. She has always hated Neil's ways of defining and living life but couldn't denie the fact that She has grown up watching him from the corners of her eyes but never could gather courage to even interact with him. She is a bookworm who had always kept herself aloof from the world till life hit her hard and exposed her to the harsh reality.


ā—Mickey Ahuja: Neil's best friend cum brother since childhood for whom Neil can even stake his life. He is also a good friend of Minni or say the only single string between Mini and Neil.


ā— Preet, Bobby and Jass- Neil's other best friends


ā—Khatri- Maths teacher who doesn't like Neil much.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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My heart went for Miniā¤ļø poor little girl but she has Neil now šŸ˜‰ it was beautiful update . waiting for tapri and Neil

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krithzz

My heart went for Miniā¤ļø poor little girl but she has Neil now šŸ˜‰ it was beautiful update . waiting for tapri and Neil

thanks....glad u liked it...ā¤

Well Minni had to be exposed to reality so...a hit was neccessary to push from her comfort zone in future.

Will Update soonšŸ’œšŸ’œ

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hayee Babita ko nahi jhelna padega uff thank you.... And Mera HS😭😭

Mini šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Neil , hmmm The bully helping his tapri

I always wanted to see a college/school romance on them Thank you for this

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Tapri🤣🤣🤣

Reminded me of school days we also used to call one friend in our group as tapri but the reason was differentšŸ˜†

This was so so cute and refreshing and ....well... Just wow....i really dont have words to praise it.

Neil the rockstarā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

I loved characterisation. I love rockstar background wali story. I once tried to write one on other tv show couple many years ago but left it in betweenšŸ˜³šŸ˜†. Still that story is close to my heart.


So neil is bully...that kind of bully who mocks the girl he likes secretly....right?

And chupke chupke mini ke dil mein bhu kuch kuch hota hai


Loved every bit of it. Cant wait to read more. You better update this one on timešŸ˜†šŸ˜ˆ

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Tapri🤣🤣🤣

Reminded me of school days we also used to call one friend in our group as tapri but the reason was differentšŸ˜†

This was so so cute and refreshing and ....well... Just wow....i really dont have words to praise it.

Neil the rockstarā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

I loved characterisation. I love rockstar background wali story. I once tried to write one on other tv show couple many years ago but left it in betweenšŸ˜³šŸ˜†. Still that story is close to my heart.


So neil is bully...that kind of bully who mocks the girl he likes secretly....right?

And chupke chupke mini ke dil mein bhu kuch kuch hota hai


Loved every bit of it. Cant wait to read more. You better update this one on timešŸ˜†šŸ˜ˆ

@bold or else Anjali will make sure her Don comes into action here and make it dangerous for you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

@bold or else Anjali will make sure her Don comes into action here and make it dangerous for you

Yes😈

Mera maaya wala roop jagrut mat karo😈

🤣🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Hayee Babita ko nahi jhelna padega uff thank you....

Thank u ...thanku...

@zalima ki Nirupa roy ka drama bore krne lga tha ab actually


And Mera HS😭😭

Sorry....but it was quite neccessary for the future progress of the story.

Hope u won't mind and bear with itā¤ā¤

Mini šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Neil , hmmm The bully helping his tapri

Yes...Minni is witnessing his unshown colours🤣🤣

I always wanted to see a college/school romance on them Thank you for this

Thanks to youā¤...i have been contantly thinking what if you all find it all kiddish and mushy....but glad u liked itšŸ’œšŸ’œ

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Tapri🤣🤣🤣

Reminded me of school days we also used to call one friend in our group as tapri but the reason was differentšŸ˜†

Hard🤣🤣🤣 now this will leave me thinking of the reasonšŸ˜…šŸ˜…



This was so so cute and refreshing and ....well... Just wow....i really dont have words to praise it.

Thanks alot



Neil the rockstarā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

I loved characterisation. I love rockstar background wali story. I once tried to write one on other tv show couple many years ago but left it in betweenšŸ˜³šŸ˜†. Still that story is close to my heart.

Glad u liked and it let you reminisce ur those golden daysā¤

So neil is bully...that kind of bully who mocks the girl he likes secretly....right?

Well...thora suspense me aap bhi rahiye mohtarma...šŸ˜… bhut tarpaaye hai aap...

Well u'll get it soon ...probably in the next updatešŸ˜†



And chupke chupke mini ke dil mein bhu kuch kuch hota hai

HaanšŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ Mineil can't resist each other afterall and here both are naive. Don't know how to put their feelings forward.


Loved every bit of it. Cant wait to read more. You better update this one on timešŸ˜†šŸ˜ˆ

Glad u liked it...will update soonšŸ’œšŸ’œ

Edited by Khushi1311 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Yes😈

Mera maaya wala roop jagrut mat karo😈

🤣🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kshma maate...

Wo dangerous Don Neil ko ye fragile , naive Mineil na jhel paaynge...šŸ˜…šŸ˜…šŸ˜…


Well this time apne delay krne ke paapo ko kam thora sa kam krne k liye...I have had written it in bulk...for the last fortnight.

So i guess next 3-4 parts ready hai...

Though editing is still on progress...

Will update soon

(probably tomorrow).šŸ’œšŸ’œ

Edited by Khushi1311 - 5 years ago

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