Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 95

Part 54

Thanks for the update and thanks for the PM. I came here after such a long time only to see an update from your end.

Loved the part. Looking forward to read more from you.

I don't think anaya would leave her now. Only if her kids give her some time 😂

I'm enjoying the fact that Geet is smitten by Maan and she is ready to admit that to herself and also to a person other than herself. I don't think maan is unaware of her feelings completely though, like what she thinks. Atleast after today. Eagerly looking forward to see more

Thank you

Purvi

trust that you are well........... update WH please

some more please

hope you are well

Amazing n lovely update ....beautifully written

hi... how are you?

excited to read the next part

Hi there.... waitin for next.......

Hello @mayyo,

I came back to read your continuing story "Wired Hearts" after a long time. And boy, I was not disappointed. You have a way weaving a tale that always leaves the reader wanting more and having the same impatience as Anaya in the last chapter "Reunion".

Your stories have had such an impact even though I read them a long time ago and intermittently. There are scenes and events that are still firmly etched in my mind. I might not remember the sequence as clearly but the incidents and the emotions do stay with me.

Also, ADORE the fact that you have kept your promise and continue your writing journey. I had a lot of updates to catch up on and re-read a few other chapters as well. It was such a treat. And great to see you writing in 2020 during these uncertain times. Hope you are keeping well and safe on that front.

I know I am an infrequent visitor, but I wanted to show my gratitude and admiration for such an awesome writer. Your continuity, sense of timing, emotional descriptions, slow burn aspects, quick humour, great comebacks and environment building are all world class. They definitely keep the reader entranced.

And for some honesty, usually I am not a big fan of single person POVs because I like to know what both of the protagonists are thinking in the romance genre. However, I will have to explore more books that have this style because you are doing a fabulous job. I think it is the way you describe everything and all the details, that the reader doesn't miss knowing the other protagonist's thought process. I think it allows them to imagine things more instead. If you ever get that chance definitely read Noelle Adams' "The Part Time Husband". She is another author that does that one-sided POV rather well.

Your characters are bar none and are so complicated while being real and human. Love the intricacies, the fragility and the growth that both Maan and Geet face. There is so much I would like to say but I think this post is getting too long...

Lastly, I really believe in your talent. And if you ever think about self publishing, please do let me know. I think both "If Only You Saw Me" and "Wired Hearts" can be favourites for many other readers. I would be happy to help with in any way possible.

Keep up your amazing contributions and hone your wonderful talent. Continue writing and I can't wait to read more. Take care.

Hello Mayyo.... update when you can

Hello Mayyo.... wishing you and your family a fabulous 2021

Hi Marium.... thanks for the reply!