thank u so much for appreciation. I shall keep writing more...Originally posted by: UmeraTariq
I'm interested to know what's turned Toshi ji and Raman against Ishita. Also, liked how you didn't go overboard in projecting a 'rude' Raman. I sensed that Raman still has strong feelings in his heart for Ishita but something is holding him back. Despite his rough exterior, he is still really soft with her. Please maintain that.
Learnt a thing or two about characterisation from your writing. Keep it up. 😃
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