FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 54

Originally posted by: Discolights

See you soon girl. Thank you for the sweet chat. Appreciate it 🤗

You are most welcome. I had a great time🤗

Originally posted by: Discolights

Ohh my God! You have actually broken down to the scenes.

Prerna-Shivani

Let me begin with Prerna. Her conversation with Shivani was amazing. Shivani telling her that she may fear losing Kukki but she can never feel like a wife (RB) because she never acted like one. As a reader I agree with Shivani because it is the truth. She was always concerned with Anurag.

Thank you very much. I have to agree, show mein she was always concerned for Anurag. I can not forget her "SORRY" she said to RB right before Dhunuchi Dance. 🙄

Shivani though was trying to take Anurag's side in her conversation did raise a valid question. Did Bajaj ever get uncomfortable when Prerna was busy playing house with Anurag in his presence. She put Prerna on a thinking mode.

Wo humesha sochti kuch hai aur ho kuch aur jata hai..:)

Prerna-Mr. Bajaj

All those dialogues from the show brought back memories of Bajaj1 ❤️ Intellegent inclusion to connect the show events with the story. Did you remember all these dialogues. You have kind of pushed me to watch the show again

I remembered scenes in bits and pieces, so I had watch all the scenes dhund dhund ke. I hope watching the show again wasn't a painful experience as it was for me.😆

So Prerna finally realises that it used to affect him too. Him inspite of not being a very expressive person, did convey his feeling and discomfort, but she never cared. Instead she kept on going with her Anurag rant, telling him how her life only revolved around Anurag. Beautiful aspect touched upon. Loved it.

Exactly, she never cared for his feeling even when he was vocal. He wasn't forcing her to stop from doing from what she wanted, but usry na bataye yeh bola.. wo bhi nahi mana Prerna ne😒

Prerna-Kukki

Kukki's breakdown in the office scene was beautiful and emotional, I shalk talk about it in next post. Prerna.witnessing Kukki and then Masi virtual slap of reality was such a treat to read. She should know what her action has done to a child, she so mercylessly left.

Thank you so much. This puts Bajaj on track, and realise that his daughter needs him more than she ever did. He can't be all for her if he can't take care for himself. And many more things like littlr unopening of his mother and father too..

This is just about Prerna. Wooww.. I wrote so much. But.it was.amazing. 🤗

I am so glad you spent so much time to share. It's always amazing to hear from you and all the wonderful people here

Originally posted by: Discolights

RBKukki-Menaka (the dream)

Such a small glimpse into his past with Menaka 21 weeks pregnant with Kukki, but so beautiful. I think I know what you did here. You actually showed the connect between RB-Kukki then and now.yeah that was the purpose.. thank God it cae across and not just like his married life.. I noticed how both in dream as well as reality he had returned from Pune 😎 and how Kukki needes him to calm down even in the past when she was in her mother's womb and now waiting for him to wake up. If I didn't read a little too much into it, It was just amazingly done. Ohh yesssd exactly this. It feels like you read my mind. It was to show the deep connection father-daughter shared even before she was born. Thank you for your words.Kukki's restlessness for not being able to talk to him as he was away and then becausd of his illness.yeah she always like to be with him. And ab jab ghar par hai to kaise na baat kare so thoda restless she was.. I could imagine a cute little Kukki following Masi or bending down over to look if her father waz awake.hahaa. Kukki was cute indeed even in the show. I loved their bond only thing that kept me sailing through all that happened 😒 They are so adorable together. You must write a series on just these two. You told me you love these two characters and it's so evident.i would love to but isi mein sab mil jayega. Like I said it's not PreKukRish but RishKukPre.. so Kukki does hold and will always hold the most special place in his life.

My rant ain't stopping here. Aaj to scene wise review dena hai as I am so much in love with this update.🤗

No need to step because I love it 😊

See you on the next post

Yes please 😃

Originally posted by: Discolights

RB-Mr. Mehra

Every employer should get an employee like Mr. Mehra.. awaz se samajh jate hain that his boss is in distress. He knows him very well.. I read his backstory in previous updates how he ended up with Rishabh though he had close realtions with Adhiraj family. He worked for them and Aditya pulled him out to work with RB. I think I remember it.right. Most loyal and kind of a father figure.for RB. Little conversation but meanigful.

All of it is all true. He didn't leave Rishabh even in his bad times. When Aditya stoof against RB tab bhi he was with him. Jabki there was hardly anything RB had to offer when he began again from scratch after Aditya took away WebFlix from him.

RB-Adi- coming up next 😃

Originally posted by: Discolights

Mr. Negotiator vs Mr. Planner (the game)

Loved their bonding. Aditya taking care of his friend be it giving his meds or helping him sit, all these little details (not neccessary) when added makes it such great reading experience.

Thank you. I can't write something I can picture in my mind. Jo dikhta hai wahich apun likh deta hai 😆

Aditya doesn't want to go but the way Rishabh almost forced him, leaving no way to escape. Poor guy had to decide to either by himself or let his sick friend go. Rishabh never makes it easy on anyone 😎Not an easy choice but the little game that began between them gave an insight into their friendship. Yeah a deep bond they share likr brothers they were before things changed for worse. I could imagine a fun RB and Aditya when they were younger. So still have that left in them.

Glad to know. Adi-Menaka-Ara's presence in his life did make him a happy guy till things shattered again.

RB knows his weakness and Aditya knows RBs. Good that the game ended at a tie score of 1-1.

Yeah doni ke pass plus points hai.. but RB is little more stubborn and Aditya doesn't mind giving up..

Loved that fake call to Nidhi and Aditya's frustration for falling for his act.

Hahaa.. he know Adi's weakness that he loves him.

Light moment was fun.

Glad you enjoyed it

Originally posted by: Discolights

Prerna-Komolika

I have to congratulate you for using Komolika in a totally unexplored way. Thank you! Intead of showing Prerna hating her as lover/wife of Anurag she is introspecting it in relation with her Baba's death. I haven't seen Prerna's equation with Anurag-Komolika because wo wala part show mein dekha nahi. So I' couldn't have done any good with it because as you must have realised I write based on events be it from the show as FBs or events I created in past. So I need to connect. But I did know Komolika wad a cause of het father's death and then punishmrny wala part aya. How she was okay with Komolika but not with RB. Ye to show mein bhi nahi explore kiya. Wo khud kabhi kuch explore nahi kiye.. kitna kuch tha but nooo 😕When Komolika returned as Sonalika and Prerna knew she is Komolika tab bhi she only thought about Anurag, never did she care about her being her father's killer. Bang on! You read my mind girl🤗 Thank you for addressing that. You could have easily compared Komolika and Menaka as they both are ex-wives but you took it to Komolika and Bajaj. Haye mere iraade itne ache se samajh liye 🤗One she punished for everything, even when she was wrong and the one who actually wrong was never questioned by her.yess yesssss Like mentioned in the update itself, Prerna only fought against those who respected her becahse she was given that space to express but never did she do anythimg those who purposely.hurt her be it Komolika or Mohini.. I am crying how wonderfully you understood everything 🤗

Originally posted by: Discolights

RB-Rastogi

Ohh my God I felt every little thing. His pain that he has been hiding from everyone but gives up on a surprise check by Rastogi, when he took him by surprise, like he.said batake check karte to Rishabh pata nahi chalne deta. I am kind of worried now, I hope he will be fine and there is nothing serious going om with him.

He is kind of seriously ill, neglecting all the signs his body is giving him for meeting and Kukki now. So next to next update will get there.

Ohhh Mann!!! When he says 'Maa..' you had me. So he has always been hiding his pain from his mothet to avoid her from suffering. am so intrigued to know his Mom's past and what's happened with her. It is clear that his dad was responsible so much that he didn't even like hearing about him from Rastogi. Looks very interesting. He did from his Mom so she doesn't have to. Hint- it connects to his conversation with Anurag post reyurn from jail. Where he talks about his abusive dad. Let's see if it connects with you all. I

Kukki's smile brightens his world and the litttle girl is always there for him. She is and will always be.

Rastogi's eyes went soft "that I know, a promise almost took your life.. twice.. how can I forget"

The line above is making me crazy to know more but I know.story has it's pace to follow and it will only be disclosed when story demands it the most. Till then wait 😒 ayega ayega . Uska bhi time ayega..

Why you drop little hints and leave people like me craving to know more 😒

Hahaaa. So that I can connect it at later stage 😃

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Heyy!!! How are you?!

Hello Yoga!! I am very well, how are you?

Just so happy with the update. I love the way you give attention to every small details related to the characters as well as the story. Thank you so much for your kind words 🤗Shivani's words, for the first time for me, made sense. She was actually helping Prerna understand her feelings though still indirectly telling her that Anurag is more important. But, well that's how she is! Happy to hear that she made sense ..I agree with you, she has always been like that. Alwayss.. Uska 'SORRY' yaad aate hi I am like

The small dream sequence of Rishabh-Menaka was very sweet. It seems Menaka hasn't left Rishabh but is always present with him in the form of Kukki.

Kukki had a special connection with Rishabh even before she was born. So happy you liked that part 🤗

The conversation between Rastogi uncle and Rishabh was good too! I'm glad that you gave importance to him too. Even he's connected with Rishabh's past. It seems like every single person has some secret of Rishabh which no one else is aware of.

Yeah, you got it so right. Every person has seen him in different stage of life. Everyone around him has something to tell Prerna and readers. This will be explored a little more over 2-3 updates as he sheds life over his Mom and a bit about abusive dad.

Aditya and Rishabh's camaraderie is great to read. They know and understand each other too well.

Yeyyyy.. happy me..they do. Isliye to Rishabh hels no grudge against him even when Adi was wrong and he left them all. Because he knows that deep inside he cares.

It was great to see Rishabh Bajaj-the bussinessman back in action. Loved the way he negotiated things and finally made the other party agree to his terms. He's rightly called Mr. Negotiator.

Thank you. An article came in handy as this is a real event with my add on to build up the whole situation. Glad it worked.

Kukki's innocent questions made everyone speechless. Kukki's breakdown was something I'm sure he didn't expect. He wasn't. He could have never ever. But he's glad that she's atleast taking out her feelings in front of him and not keeping it all to herself. She is sharing because he made her understand when they were at the Juhu hotel. Therefore, she says or draws in her sketch book he gave to share. It was good to see how Rishabh handled her and also explained to Masi to not feel guilty.Masi not at fault so he couldn't have said anything. What Maasi said to Prerna felt like a slap on her face which she actually did deserve. Masi is going to give her some more reality checks in upcoming updates. Although I'm happy Prerna atleast realised that she'd somehow caused Kukki to worry so much about everyone leaving her.she has realised and will realise some more and she will be absolutely clear on what she wants.

All in all a very good chapter. I, however, personally missed Menaka, though she's there in the dream sequence. She will be missing in next update as it's all about the confession but makes a comeback in 34 wo bhi Masi ke wajah se 😎Would love to read more of her. And I wish we get a small scene of Aditya and Tanvi too. It will be there in 34/35 too.. pehle hi decided hai 🤗

The story keeps on getting interesting with each part. Waiting for the next.

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views. Always love hearing from you 🤗

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice part.kukki was so worries for her dad. She was waiting for him to get up. When she was in womb she needed her dad to camher . Even know only her dad can...so rightly you said. She has always needed him and he needed her even before she was born. Their bond has been a little too strong. Loved scene bet adi and RB. Yayyyy.. i am soo happy Adi asked prena to be with RB. He did 😎 He came to know it and told her to act well. And she did a good job at it. Even Rishabh agreed as he just smiled when she said so righy before he left 😃Kukki is so insured.she is. I read that kids who have kind of broken family can get a bit insecure. That her dad will. Leave her. Almost everyone around her left. Masi told her about Rishabh's Mom that she died beacusd she got sick coz of working hard. And Kukki can see her dad working hard and getting sick just like Grandmom. So she is now scared that he will leave her too. Had tears when reading. It when she don't leave me.Awwww.. i take it as huge compliment, though I did not intend to make you cry In next update RB will come to know about what happened to prerana yess. Next update is all about that. Just three of them with a very little intervention from anyone. So these two will have their own moment with no ome around 😊

Thank for the update.thank you Chavi for reading and sharing your thought .. Love the way u reply to or comment. I like reading it. 😘🥰that's reallly sweet of you. But guys are to be credited. You share your honest thoughts and I try to share mine. I alwaaayssss love hearing from you.. Each chapter is like a premier of a movie jaisa feeling for me. Nervous me... but hearing from you guys makes it better 🤗

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful and amazing update👏

Helllo Katheriene.. so good to hear from you again 🤗 So happy you liked the update, makes me feel so better..

Prerna and Shivi's conversation was good, Shivi was right about Prerna but completely wrong about Rishabh, her intension was to make Prerna realize that Anurag is more important but it made Prerna realize her mistake in overlooking Rishabh's feelings👏yahoooo. It made sense. I was very skeptical about that part and that being the beginning delayed the update. I was worried if it'd make sense or come across like how I thought. But I am happy it worked I guess 🥳

Loved the mention of Komolika, it made Prerna realize her blindness towards Anurag love and forgoting her baba

Yeaah.. it always troubled me how she was so okay playing childish games (ref from Sonalika track because Bajaj ke pehle ka show to dekha nahi) with sonalika/komolika. Instead of showing her to do something about justice for her Baba she was busy plotting stupid games to tell komolika how she is the soulmate. It was hard to watch.🥺

Loved Rb-meneka dream , it showed kuki- Rb bond❤️

Yeyyy Mera maksad kamyaab .. more tha married life wala aspect I wanted to show it as KukRish bond and you got it... 🤗

Loved Aditya and Rishabh's camaraderie, planner Vs negitiatior😊 close friends they were and are. Will it be impacted with RB-Menaka equation in future is yet to be seen.

Rishabh and doctor Rastogi moment was beautiful Rastogi is here to uncover a bit more.

Rishabh as a businessman was wonderful. He always is.. show mein he was so good till jail track uske baad everything went south 😭

Kuki's insecurity regarding her father leaving her was beautiful, she suffered so much😭 she has and she shared her deepest fear this time that her father might leave her too.. this will have an impact on everyone. Sply Rishabh and Prerna.

Loved Masi's reply to Prerna , a tight slap to Prerna about her doings👏

Masi will give her some more reality checks real soon.

Loved Prerish's moment at Bi and beach, the incident of hotel was revealed to Rishabh

Yess. Kab hua tha wo and ab jaake reveal hua. I am slower than a snail 😆 But a lot more from show as well as previous updates will find connections completing the missing ends.

Finally the truth about is going to be revealed

Waiting for next

Next one is all about it. Isliye this chap got so long else I could have easily divided it into two updates. But I thought ab agla update revelation ka hona chahie.