FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 50

I'll see you all later in the night may be... love you all 🤗

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Done!!🤗

Yayyy!! 💃

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Ok please don't mind my saying this but reply to all these comments later on. Sunn_Shine needs to update so that I can read the it before the assessment 😊 Please🤗

I am sooo sorry. First time I got into a long conversation so just for carried away 😛🤗

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

I'll see you all later in the night may be... love you all 🤗

See you soon girl. Thank you for the sweet chat. Appreciate it 🤗

Before I say anything about the update can I just appreciate your attention to the details in your writing, that makes everything come alive in front of my eyes. I do not have to make a lot of effort to imagine what's going on while I am reading. I simply love this aspect of this story.

I am glad the update is soooo long, making it for the long wait and it was so worth. I am still to complete 5 chapter but by now I have understand all these characters so very well as I am simultaneously reading latest updates. You are amazing, and bekaar mein you were taking tension that it has not come out well n all.. it's beautiful.

I have come across a lot of aspects in this update and I would talk about each after I read it again 🤗

Prerna-Shivani

Let me begin with Prerna. Her conversation with Shivani was amazing. Shivani telling her that she may fear losing Kukki but she can never feel like a wife (RB) because she never acted like one. As a reader I agree with Shivani because it is the truth. She was always concerned with Anurag.

Shivani though was trying to take Anurag's side in her conversation did raise a valid question. Did Bajaj ever get uncomfortable when Prerna was busy playing house with Anurag in his presence. She put Prerna on a thinking mode.

Prerna-Mr. Bajaj

All those dialogues from the show brought back memories of Bajaj1 ❤️ Intellegent inclusion to connect the show events with the story. Did you remember all these dialogues. You have kind of pushed me to watch the show again

So Prerna finally realises that it used to affect him too. Him inspite of not being a very expressive person, did convey his feeling and discomfort, but she never cared. Instead she kept on going with her Anurag rant, telling him how her life only revolved around Anurag. Beautiful aspect touched upon. Loved it.

Prerna-Kukki

Kukki's breakdown in the office scene was beautiful and emotional, I shalk talk about it in next post. Prerna.witnessing Kukki and then Masi virtual slap of reality was such a treat to read. She should know what her action has done to a child, she so mercylessly left.

This is just about Prerna. Wooww.. I wrote so much. But.it was.amazing. 🤗

RBKukki-Menaka (the dream)

Such a small glimpse into his past with Menaka 21 weeks pregnant with Kukki, but so beautiful. I think I know what you did here. You actually showed the connect between RB-Kukki then and now. I noticed how both in dream as well as reality he had returned from Pune 😎 and how Kukki needes him to calm down even in the past when she was in her mother's womb and now waiting for him to wake up. If I didn't read a little too much into it, It was just amazingly done. Kukki's restlessness for not being able to talk to him as he was away and then becausd of his illness. I could imagine a cute little Kukki following Masi or bending down over to look if her father waz awake. They are so adorable together. You must write a series on just these two. You told me you love these two characters and it's so evident.

My rant ain't stopping here. Aaj to scene wise review dena hai as I am so much in love with this update.🤗

See you on the next post

RB-Mr. Mehra

Every employer should get an employee like Mr. Mehra.. awaz se samajh jate hain that his boss is in distress. I read his backstory in previous updates how he ended up with Rishabh though he had close realtions with Adhiraj family. He worked for them and Aditya pulled him out to work with RB. I think I remember it.right. Most loyal and kind of a father figure.for RB. Little conversation but meanigful.

RB-Adi- coming up next 😃

Mr. Negotiator vs Mr. Planner (the game)

Loved their bonding. Aditya taking care of his friend be it giving his meds or helping him sit, all these little details (not neccessary) when added makes it such great reading experience.

Aditya doesn't want to go but the way Rishabh almost forced him, leaving no way to escape. Poor guy had to decide to either by himself or let his sick friend go. Not an easy choice but the little game that began between them gave an insight into their friendship. I could imagine a fun RB and Aditya when they were younger. So still have that left in them.

RB knows his weakness and Aditya knows RBs. Good that the game ended at a tie score of 1-1.

Loved that fake call to Nidhi and Aditya's frustration for falling for his act.

Light moment was fun.

Prerna-Komolika

I have to congratulate you for using Komolika in a totally unexplored way. Intead of showing Prerna hating her as lover/wife of Anurag she is introspecting it in relation with her Baba's death. Ye to show mein bhi nahi explore kiya. When Komolika returned as Sonalika and Prerna knew she is Komolika tab bhi she only thought about Anurag, never did she care about her being her father's killer. Thank you for addressing that. You could have easily compared Komolika and Menaka as they both are ex-wives but you took it to Komolika and Bajaj. One she punished for everything, even when she was wrong and the one who actually wrong was never questioned by her. Like mentioned in the update itself, Prerna only fought against those who respected her becahse she was given that space to express but never did she do anythimg those who purposely.hurt her be it Komolika or Mohini..