MG SS/FF : REJECTION (werewolf story) Part 13 on page 96 - Page 66

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

fabulous precap!

looking forward the update

🤗will try to update asap

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: uroos

Awesome Update Love it

Hope that geet tell maan everything about herself soon waiting for next update Plz update soon

Thank you😊 lets see when she choose to tell him😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Pauliqra

Thanks for pm

Maan excited for date

Geet busy with her training

Thank you😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Charanjeetkaur

Wonderful update dear

Thank you😊

Geet yash ishan and pari group complete target given by trainer

😊

After group training geet and maan doing water element training and both are enjoying

Maan and geet phone conversation are owsome

Glad you liked it😊

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

Will try to update asap😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

The training is going well. They need to be prepared to face any situations.

Thank you😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 12


Excellent Update

I totally enjoyed this


I loved how the training was so detailed

and I was actually sitting at the edge of my seat

waiting to see if anyone attacks on Geet

the ground training was just so nail biting awesome

while the power training was again fantastic

I liked how Geet becomes naughty and throws the water

on Yash .

for some reason I feel Geet has better control in power training

Maan is totally smitten by Geet and just wants to marry her

yet at the same time he knows she has dreams and he wants to respect that

now that is just great .

Geet too is falling in love with Maan

and their talks everyday gets them to know about each other

looking forward to Maan and Geet's date

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 12


Excellent Update

Thank you😊

I totally enjoyed this

I am glad you liked it😃


I loved how the training was so detailed

and I was actually sitting at the edge of my seat

Thank you I am happy I was able to bring that effect😃

waiting to see if anyone attacks on Geet

the ground training was just so nail biting awesome

Thank you

while the power training was again fantastic

I liked how Geet becomes naughty and throws the water

on Yash .

How can the duo leave naughtiness behind😆

for some reason I feel Geet has better control in power training

😊

Maan is totally smitten by Geet and just wants to marry her

yet at the same time he knows she has dreams and he wants to respect that

now that is just great .

Respecting one another and considering their wishes before your own is important and Ma'am knows it😊

Geet too is falling in love with Maan

😊

and their talks everyday gets them to know about each other

looking forward to Maan and Geet's date

Thanks for leaving a wonderful comment. I enjoyed reading it😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

HI Di... 🤗how are you...? Hope you're doing fine.... ❤. Ok on to the comments...

Di you killed it.... 🥳. Maan's character is what we call it an ideal husband.... So caring and loving towards his mate... He's determined to make peace with the dragon to be with his princess.... 😉(by dragon I meant Yash woh bhi aag saans lene wala)😆. And not to forget that he's also romantic...😍.

And again with the siblings masti... 🤣pure ghar ko shar pe utha lete hai.... (me think they are worse than me and my sister 😳 hum ghar ko do phaad kar denge bas.... 😅). But lucky for them their parents are enjoying it... (me thinking agar meri Maa hoti na itna time me jaadu leke meri piche padi hoti....🤣😛).

Then I know this is the toughest part you've written The training.... It's really hard a training even I was sweating while reading it... But hey they made it to the end even though they were second... ⭐️. Arrey woh bandha lshan ped ke upar chad gaya... 🤣🤣🤣

And my now favorite part avatar wala training... Wow Di I didn't expect it to be so accurate I was like watching the avatar movie.... But I must say siblings will always be siblings....🤣(me thinking arey training ko bath room banane ka kya zarurat hai.... 🤣🤣🤣)

And the crown of this update... Maan and Geet's conversation was just beautiful... They are like two open books... Except for Geet to hide about her rank because of past unpleasant experience... But what amazed me was that at the end when Geet yawns Maan immediately calls it a night. Wow Di I'm so speechless and was wondering what was in your mind when you wrote this line because for me it's like my own mind painting a picture. Because Maan is really respecting and taking care of Geet now a days there are no more men in the world would do that for his woman and the one who would do that will only be the girls father. Not only me all the girls will want a husband who is like her father because the care and protection we get has no match for any high tech security system in the world... 😊 anyways back to the comments I really love the way you put all the emotions together in the right place at the right situation and I love you for that... 🤗

It's really a beautiful update.... 👏

Hoping to see how the double date goes😉

Edited by UmaDevi97 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

HI Di... 🤗

🤗

how are you...? Hope you're doing fine.... ❤. Ok on to the comments...

Di you killed it.... 🥳.

Thank you😊

Maan's character is what we call it an ideal husband.... So caring and loving towards his mate...

He will be a great husband and a mate😊

He's determined to make peace with the dragon to be with his princess.... 😉(by dragon I meant Yash woh bhi aag saans lene wala)😆.

I am hurt, here just kidding but he is not that bad😆

And not to forget that he's also romantic...😍.

Every girl wants that😉

And again with the siblings masti... 🤣pure ghar ko shar pe utha lete hai.... (me think they are worse than me and my sister 😳 hum ghar ko do phaad kar denge bas.... 😅). But lucky for them their parents are enjoying it... (me thinking agar meri Maa hoti na itna time me jaadu leke meri piche padi hoti....🤣😛).

😆🤣

Then I know this is the toughest part you've written The training.... It's really hard a training even I was sweating while reading it... But hey they made it to the end even though they were second... ⭐️. Arrey woh bandha lshan ped ke upar chad gaya... 🤣🤣🤣

Toughest yes, it was little out of the box to describe what is happening😆 but I guess I nailed it😆

And my now favorite part avatar wala training... Wow Di I didn't expect it to be so accurate I was like watching the avatar movie.... But I must say siblings will always be siblings....🤣(me thinking arey training ko bath room banane ka kya zarurat hai.... 🤣🤣🤣)

😆

And the crown of this update... Maan and Geet's conversation was just beautiful... They are like two open books... Except for Geet to hide about her rank because of past unpleasant experience... But what amazed me was that at the end when Geet yawns Maan immediately calls it a night.

I am glad you liked it🤗

Wow Di I'm so speechless and was wondering what was in your mind when you wrote this line because for me it's like my own mind painting a picture. Because Maan is really respecting and taking care of Geet now a days there are no more men in the world would do that for his woman and the one who would do that will only be the girls father. Not only me all the girls will want a husband who is like her father because the care and protection we get has no match for any high tech security system in the world... 😊 anyways back to the comments I really love the way you put all the emotions together in the right place at the right situation and I love you for that... 🤗

That was really sweet🤗 love you too for writing such a sweet comment. ❤️

It's really a beautiful update.... 👏

Thank you❤️

Hoping to see how the double date goes😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hi guys. I know you must be waiting for the update but everything is not fine at my place. My brother fell and got a hit on the back of his head and got stitches. Though he is fine now but is little weak and am not in a condition to think anything related to anything. I don't know when I will be updating the story but whenever I will, I will send you guys pms. I promise I won't leave it incomplete and won't rush it to end the story.

Thanks.

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