Part 1
nice update. well written
the villagers are scared of the bhootni but Geet's bro is worried about her.
Part 1
nice update. well written
the villagers are scared of the bhootni but Geet's bro is worried about her.
Congratulations for new ss.
Interesting prologue.
Part 1
Nice start.
Originally posted by: coderlady
Maan will run into Geet instead of the Bhootni. Or maybe they will both run into Bhootni.
Thanks coderlady
I like your thought process...😃
Originally posted by: love2_soma
toh abb maan aur geet amne samne anewale hai.....dekhte hai kya hota hai......geet rano ki beti nehi hai?......phir yeh mohinder hamda kahan se aya?.......
big mystery........
lovely............
loved it.........
Thanks love2_soma
Yes, Hero kab tak Heroine se door rahega...😆
Will solve all mysteries soon...
Keep reading... Thanks...😃
Originally posted by: aparna3011
very nice update
whole village scared of bhootani so no body out of house after sunset
geet's brother n sister in law worried for her as she is out after sunset.
Thanks aparna3011
Yes Geet's brother and sil are very protective of her...
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 1
nice update. well written
the villagers are scared of the bhootni but Geet's bro is worried about her.
Thanks khwaishfan...
Lucky has a reason to be scared will disclose soon in upcoming updates...
Intro of Maan and Geet was interesting.
Maan remembers Rano Maa and I guess it's Geet's mom.
Maan has visited for land.
Maaneet encounter was good. Maan following for her safety.
They haven't seen each other yet.
Curious for next.
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