FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 97

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

No meneka 😠

Arey to prove ho gaya u love her.. maine Rishabh-Kukki, Kukki-Prerna, Prerna-Rishbah, Prerna-Aditya, Prerna-Tanvi ke baare mein bhi likha but you'd only talk about Menaka.. ye pyaar nahi to kya hai sahabji.

Zabardast pyaar you have for Menaka...

Its like batana bhi nahi ata..

Chupana bhi nahi ata..

You like Menaka ko itna sara ki

Jatana bhi nahi ata🤣

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Then please make more quick updates I want to read them

I honestly try to be quick but I fail miserably 😒

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

quick aur yea ladki 🙄

You know me soo welll 😳

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Meenu n me and last wala is meenu me and swati giving pappi to Meenu https://www.instagram.com/p/CAiG-cmHquj/?igshid=1naq8b737k3g6

Awww.. this is sooo sooo cute.😘😊😚😍. thank you..

Love you 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Meenu Terese hoga quick updates you can do it. I am proud of you I mean I will be 🤣

Naaa mujhse na ho payega.. ye to bhaut hi jyada maang liye aap 🤣

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Naaa mujhse na ho payega.. ye to bhaut hi jyada maang liye aap 🤣

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Hello Yoga.. so happy to hear from you after a long time. Thank you for reading, sharing your thoughts and suggestions.. means a lot to me 🤗

My comments below-

Very nice update!! Love the way how Rishabh is taking care of every little thing that might give happiness to Kukki or might hurt her. Also explaining to Prerna his reasons of keeping Kukki a bit away from her shows that he does not want to hurt her as well.

Glad that you liked the update. Rishabh's love for Kukki can't be compared with anyone or anything in his life. He is worried for her, doesn't hesistate to seek help and while protecting his daughter he also wants to be upftont with Prerna. He is already guilty of what he did in Calcutta and now like you said he doesn't want to hurt Prerna or Kukki anymore.

Good to see Prerna reflecting on her thoughts every now and then but she's still very confused. But good to see her making her own decisions finally!

She is evaluating every action of hers. It's just a week and she has already got exposed to lot professionaly and personally. She soon will geta clarity on what she wants and what she needs to do..

I don't know why but while reading your story I've always felt that it was Menaka was not the only one at fault when she left Kukki. Rishabh had something to do with it too.

Your feeling is absolutely right is all I want to say at this point in time 😊 But it might look like may be none of them was at fault. It depends on the reader how they will interpret it.

And though I love Prerish, I would personally for this story especially want to give Menaka another chance if she was not completely at fault and also if she's genuinely regretting now.

@underline- I want to honestly take it as a compliment in my humble best capacity. Thank you for giving the new added characters a chance. Her regret and actions are genuine but does she stand a chance or ever had one with Rishabh is what is Prerna's task to explore.. she is already started to raise questions about Menaka.. she will get on task too ..

Please show a bit more of Menaka-Kukki-Rishabh since I'm too eager to know the reason of their separation.

I will be exploring this in coming updates. You' see a little glimpse of Menaka ka chhota sa past with Kukki along with Rishabh and Menaka together under one roof in presence of Prerna in the nexy update itself, which is in progress. Lets see if that will grab your interest 😊

A few flashbacks of Ara-Menaka-Rishabh-Aditya is also something I would want to read since that's also something the story is based on.

I have a lot in progress and this is one of the things I am working on. Thank you for the mention as I will now start to integrate things from past with present. Thank you again!

If you're planning to show Aditya-Tanvi as a couple in the future, please add a few scenes of them too.

You will see a bit of Tanvi and Aditya in next to next update.. not as a couple but interacting more like friends which will form a foundation for their friedndship and then may be proper relation. But Tanvi too has a hurdle to cross because Ara was his first love.. so Tanvi the exact opposite of Ara .. will he find a love interest in her is what I am working on..

These all are just things that I would've loved to read but I absolutely love the way you write the story.

Basic work is ready for all your requests in my mind and soon you'll see these gradually in coming updates. I am slow writer and write updates on phone isliye zyada hi time lag jata hai.. but all this will be addressed because story based hi hai on everything you mentioned..

Waiting for the next part!

It is in progress. Hopefully by mid-week I will post.

Take care 🤗

Ohhh My God!!

It's like all of my thoughts are not only mine. Glad that you understood what I had in my mind. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Wo jayegi when her character has done her work in the story. Pakka jayegi😊

I wasn't explaing her character but bata rha tha that I was never a writer, still not a writer and won't be one. I don't even know if I have any strong points when it comes to writing but limitations to ache se pata hai.

I cannot cater to an audience who loves to read something written in high standard wala language. People who are fan of a text written in the most beautiful words. I miserably fail there.

I can't cater to an audience that loves beautifully written romance. I know apne bas ka baat nahi hai

I can't cater to an audience that loves mature content. Apne ko padne ko nahi hota to likhenge kaha se..

All I have done is play with characters, situations, plots and some emotion may be and ab tak I am pretty content with the response.

I very well know that I am incapable of doing justice to all the readers, so the least I could do was justice to the story that I had in mind 6 months pehle and let readers chose for themselves. Kam se kam utna to karu. Isliye jab not many read it tab bhi I didn't change a thing in the story. So many readers left, but so many new members joined in too.. and that was very encouraging.. hate aditya hate Menaka bolke bhi you've stuck with me so far 🤗

Isliye Menaka jayegi par abhi nahi. 😃

@red : the limitations that SS/FF brings. Fact. Which is why I prefer not to write FF/SS. Only one of my FFS are completed rest I couldn't just write or finish because the disconnect happened and I knew nothing can do justice to the stories. 🥺

One thing to say, no one is a born writer. They write learn & relearn & improvise & produce bit biggest of all PUBLISH. So in a way everyone is a writer only they need to share their work.. 🤗

Great update.

But would you be also delving into Rishabh's emotions/feeling for Prerna a bit more? I don't get an idea as to what he feels when he sees Prerna...

He seems to be so in control around her and he cannot think beyond Kuki and her equation with Prerna.

And why the hell is Prerna not letting him know that there is no Anurag!!!

Yes why is Prerna making things more complicated and not telling Bajaj about Anurag 😠